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it's totally believable, he heard a female voice from behind a door and he completely didn't expect to hear someone familiar there, she only says 1 or 2 sentences. Also he was a little bit shocked so he didn't recognize the voice
You might not recognise the voice at the time but when you play the scenario back in your head (and you would because it would be so shocking that you'd think about it quite a bit) you'd begin to recognise the voice. Especially when you then spend more and more time with the person whose voice it was
 

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Shit lad.... now you're talking. To hell with the other possible theories, I want this one.
The idea just came from the title: why call the gamer intertwined? How could all the characters be intertwined? What relation could there be between (for example) Cara, Layla and Erryn that would give some unsuspected relation?
 
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The idea just came from the title: why call the gamer intertwined? How could all the characters be intertwined? What relation could there be between (for example) Cara, Layla and Erryn that would give some unsuspected relation?
Oh I get you and I'm now so on board that literally any other outcome I'll find myself disappointed with heh. The spiel at the start ends with "Find out how all of them are "Intertwined"!" so as you said it's all the characters it seems and what better way of hammering that home with a mad sex orgy.
 

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  • Sleep sex: It doesn't exist. Played through to the end right now, and the closest is when you find the next door neighbor topless. However after having finished this current version, I don't see this tag fitting. The guy is not a creeper or a huge pervert, he doesn't need to pork his mom while she's passed out, he can simply walk into a bar and suddenly there's a girl sucking him off. Maybe remove the tag, unless the content is actually incoming.
I agree about some tags that are not yet included in the game. Taking out "sleep sex" which you've already mentioned, "cheating" is probably in Tori's route, although with the toxic relationship she has with her boyfriend I couldn't tell if they were still together at that time or if it can be considered cheating. And if it's not for Tori then that tag shouldn't currently be there. "Lesbian"? C'mon it was just a kiss from a deeply drunk Elena. "Corruption", I don't know the exact definition of that tag but I don't think it fits what we've seen so far. And, either I've been blind since the beginning, or recently some uploader/mod has added the "incest" tag, which with the current content shouldn't be there either.
In any case they should be in the genre spoiler as "future tags" if dev is really planning that kind of content, but not in the tag list because that creates misunderstandings for people looking for games with specific tags.
 

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And, either I've been blind since the beginning, or recently some uploader/mod has added the "incest" tag, which with the current content shouldn't be there either.
it's for the relation with one of your future step sisters in 0.4, your dad will marry their mom. Not quite yet but very soon
 

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it's for the relation with one of your future step sisters in 0.4, your dad will marry their mom. Not quite yet but very soon
Yeah but they stopped before their fathers got married, it shouldn't count as step-incest at the time they were dating. Incest tag shouldn't be with current content (like other tags I said before) but well this often happens around here so meh xD
It's probably a "planned tag", so in future updates we'll see what will happen to justify it. Return of one of the stepsisters (or both :sneaky:) now that their parents should be married? MC's mother? Any plot twist?
 

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Yeah but they stopped before their fathers got married, it shouldn't count as step-incest at the time they were dating. Incest tag shouldn't be with current content (like other tags I said before) but well this often happens around here so meh xD
It's probably a "planned tag", so in future updates we'll see what will happen to justify it. Return of one of the stepsisters (or both :sneaky:) now that their parents should be married? MC's mother? Any plot twist?
Is 'step sister lovin' incest though? I mean, that's the trope everyone uses to get round the whole issue is it not?. If I saw that tag then I wouldn't assume it was there because step bro and step sis were naughty.
 

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Is 'step sister lovin' incest though? I mean, that's the trope everyone uses to get round the whole issue is it not?. If I saw that tag then I wouldn't assume it was there because step bro and step sis were naughty.
This web describes incest as "Sex act between family relatives, including those not related by blood" (same as Patreon), so yeah step-incest games should have that tag. But like I said, when MC and Cara/Nikki started dating their parents weren't yet married, so the 0.4 flashback shouldn't count as step-incest. In fact they stopped when their parents announced their wedding, that's why at this moment the incest tag shouldn't be in the tag list. If it's there by mistake or because it's future content (mislabeled), that's another question.
 
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This web describes incest as "Sex act between family relatives, including those not related by blood" (same as Patreon), so yeah step-incest games should have that tag. But like I said, when MC and Cara/Nikki started dating their parents weren't yet married, so the 0.4 flashback shouldn't count as step-incest. In fact they stopped when their parents announced their wedding, that's why at this moment the incest tag shouldn't be in the tag list. If it's there by mistake or because it's future content (mislabeled), that's another question.
To be fair if the step sisters don't come back into this game that'll be a huuuuge waste given the amount of time and effort into not only their backstory but their renders. Both looked good as opposed to a generic out the box asset. If they were going to be a throw away to pad out the MCs history it could have been summarised quicker. I'd like to think if the Dev is committing that much time to them then they still have a part to play.
 
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To be fair if the step sisters don't come back into this game that'll be a huuuuge waste given the amount of time and effort into not only their backstory but their renders. Both looked good as opposed to a generic out the box asset. If they were going to be a throw away to pad out the MCs history it could have been summarised quicker. I'd like to think if the Dev is committing that much time to them then they still have a part to play.
If I'm not wrong, I remember Nyx saying (here or in Patreon) that at some point they will come back but it won't be soon, so don't worry about that :sneaky:

EDIT: Ok it wasn't directly Nyx but this post
Developer did say we won't be seeing those characters for a while.
 
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theres an error when you meet alexis on the street and she ask you to a concert after that you cant save anymore heres the error
Code:
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
  File "renpy/common/00action_file.rpy", line 372, in __call__
    renpy.save(fn, extra_info=save_name)
IOError: [Errno 2] No such file or directory: 'C:\\Users\\Michael\\AppData\\Roaming/RenPy/Intertwined-1555922160\\17-2-LT1.save'

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "renpy/common/_layout/screen_load_save.rpym", line 35, in script
    $ ui.interact()
  File "C:\Users\Michael\Documents\MEGAsync Downloads\Intertwined_0.4\Intertwined-0.4-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 882, in execute
    renpy.python.py_exec_bytecode(self.code.bytecode, self.hide, store=self.store)
  File "C:\Users\Michael\Documents\MEGAsync Downloads\Intertwined_0.4\Intertwined-0.4-pc\renpy\python.py", line 1913, in py_exec_bytecode
    exec bytecode in globals, locals
  File "renpy/common/_layout/screen_load_save.rpym", line 35, in <module>
    $ ui.interact()
  File "C:\Users\Michael\Documents\MEGAsync Downloads\Intertwined_0.4\Intertwined-0.4-pc\renpy\ui.py", line 289, in interact
    rv = renpy.game.interface.interact(roll_forward=roll_forward, **kwargs)
  File "C:\Users\Michael\Documents\MEGAsync Downloads\Intertwined_0.4\Intertwined-0.4-pc\renpy\display\core.py", line 2662, in interact
    repeat, rv = self.interact_core(preloads=preloads, trans_pause=trans_pause, **kwargs)
  File "C:\Users\Michael\Documents\MEGAsync Downloads\Intertwined_0.4\Intertwined-0.4-pc\renpy\display\core.py", line 3467, in interact_core
    rv = root_widget.event(ev, x, y, 0)
  File "C:\Users\Michael\Documents\MEGAsync Downloads\Intertwined_0.4\Intertwined-0.4-pc\renpy\display\layout.py", line 995, in event
    rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)
  File "C:\Users\Michael\Documents\MEGAsync Downloads\Intertwined_0.4\Intertwined-0.4-pc\renpy\display\transition.py", line 47, in event
    return self.new_widget.event(ev, x, y, st)  # E1101
  File "C:\Users\Michael\Documents\MEGAsync Downloads\Intertwined_0.4\Intertwined-0.4-pc\renpy\display\layout.py", line 995, in event
    rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)
  File "C:\Users\Michael\Documents\MEGAsync Downloads\Intertwined_0.4\Intertwined-0.4-pc\renpy\display\layout.py", line 995, in event
    rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)
  File "C:\Users\Michael\Documents\MEGAsync Downloads\Intertwined_0.4\Intertwined-0.4-pc\renpy\display\screen.py", line 697, in event
    rv = self.child.event(ev, x, y, st)
  File "C:\Users\Michael\Documents\MEGAsync Downloads\Intertwined_0.4\Intertwined-0.4-pc\renpy\display\layout.py", line 995, in event
    rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)
  File "C:\Users\Michael\Documents\MEGAsync Downloads\Intertwined_0.4\Intertwined-0.4-pc\renpy\display\layout.py", line 241, in event
    rv = d.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, st)
  File "C:\Users\Michael\Documents\MEGAsync Downloads\Intertwined_0.4\Intertwined-0.4-pc\renpy\display\layout.py", line 995, in event
    rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)
  File "C:\Users\Michael\Documents\MEGAsync Downloads\Intertwined_0.4\Intertwined-0.4-pc\renpy\display\layout.py", line 241, in event
    rv = d.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, st)
  File "C:\Users\Michael\Documents\MEGAsync Downloads\Intertwined_0.4\Intertwined-0.4-pc\renpy\display\layout.py", line 995, in event
    rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)
  File "C:\Users\Michael\Documents\MEGAsync Downloads\Intertwined_0.4\Intertwined-0.4-pc\renpy\display\layout.py", line 241, in event
    rv = d.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, st)
  File "C:\Users\Michael\Documents\MEGAsync Downloads\Intertwined_0.4\Intertwined-0.4-pc\renpy\display\behavior.py", line 907, in event
    return handle_click(self.clicked)
  File "C:\Users\Michael\Documents\MEGAsync Downloads\Intertwined_0.4\Intertwined-0.4-pc\renpy\display\behavior.py", line 842, in handle_click
    rv = run(action)
  File "C:\Users\Michael\Documents\MEGAsync Downloads\Intertwined_0.4\Intertwined-0.4-pc\renpy\display\behavior.py", line 315, in run
    return action(*args, **kwargs)
  File "renpy/common/00action_file.rpy", line 372, in __call__
    renpy.save(fn, extra_info=save_name)
  File "C:\Users\Michael\Documents\MEGAsync Downloads\Intertwined_0.4\Intertwined-0.4-pc\renpy\loadsave.py", line 436, in save
    location.save(slotname, sr)
  File "C:\Users\Michael\Documents\MEGAsync Downloads\Intertwined_0.4\Intertwined-0.4-pc\renpy\savelocation.py", line 405, in save
    l.save(slotname, record)
  File "C:\Users\Michael\Documents\MEGAsync Downloads\Intertwined_0.4\Intertwined-0.4-pc\renpy\savelocation.py", line 149, in save
    record.write_file(filename)
  File "C:\Users\Michael\Documents\MEGAsync Downloads\Intertwined_0.4\Intertwined-0.4-pc\renpy\loadsave.py", line 348, in write_file
    shutil.copyfile(self.first_filename, filename_new)
  File "/home/tom/ab/x64lucid-deps/install/lib/python2.7/shutil.py", line 82, in copyfile
IOError: [Errno 2] No such file or directory: 'C:\\Users\\Michael\\AppData\\Roaming/RenPy/Intertwined-1555922160\\17-2-LT1.save'

Windows-8-6.2.9200
Ren'Py 7.1.0.882
Intertwined 0.4
Tue Sep 15 11:29:13 2020
 

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theres an error when you meet alexis on the street and she ask you to a concert after that you cant save anymore heres the error
Code:
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
  File "renpy/common/00action_file.rpy", line 372, in __call__
    renpy.save(fn, extra_info=save_name)
IOError: [Errno 2] No such file or directory: 'C:\\Users\\Michael\\AppData\\Roaming/RenPy/Intertwined-1555922160\\17-2-LT1.save'

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "renpy/common/_layout/screen_load_save.rpym", line 35, in script
    $ ui.interact()
  File "C:\Users\Michael\Documents\MEGAsync Downloads\Intertwined_0.4\Intertwined-0.4-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 882, in execute
    renpy.python.py_exec_bytecode(self.code.bytecode, self.hide, store=self.store)
  File "C:\Users\Michael\Documents\MEGAsync Downloads\Intertwined_0.4\Intertwined-0.4-pc\renpy\python.py", line 1913, in py_exec_bytecode
    exec bytecode in globals, locals
  File "renpy/common/_layout/screen_load_save.rpym", line 35, in <module>
    $ ui.interact()
  File "C:\Users\Michael\Documents\MEGAsync Downloads\Intertwined_0.4\Intertwined-0.4-pc\renpy\ui.py", line 289, in interact
    rv = renpy.game.interface.interact(roll_forward=roll_forward, **kwargs)
  File "C:\Users\Michael\Documents\MEGAsync Downloads\Intertwined_0.4\Intertwined-0.4-pc\renpy\display\core.py", line 2662, in interact
    repeat, rv = self.interact_core(preloads=preloads, trans_pause=trans_pause, **kwargs)
  File "C:\Users\Michael\Documents\MEGAsync Downloads\Intertwined_0.4\Intertwined-0.4-pc\renpy\display\core.py", line 3467, in interact_core
    rv = root_widget.event(ev, x, y, 0)
  File "C:\Users\Michael\Documents\MEGAsync Downloads\Intertwined_0.4\Intertwined-0.4-pc\renpy\display\layout.py", line 995, in event
    rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)
  File "C:\Users\Michael\Documents\MEGAsync Downloads\Intertwined_0.4\Intertwined-0.4-pc\renpy\display\transition.py", line 47, in event
    return self.new_widget.event(ev, x, y, st)  # E1101
  File "C:\Users\Michael\Documents\MEGAsync Downloads\Intertwined_0.4\Intertwined-0.4-pc\renpy\display\layout.py", line 995, in event
    rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)
  File "C:\Users\Michael\Documents\MEGAsync Downloads\Intertwined_0.4\Intertwined-0.4-pc\renpy\display\layout.py", line 995, in event
    rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)
  File "C:\Users\Michael\Documents\MEGAsync Downloads\Intertwined_0.4\Intertwined-0.4-pc\renpy\display\screen.py", line 697, in event
    rv = self.child.event(ev, x, y, st)
  File "C:\Users\Michael\Documents\MEGAsync Downloads\Intertwined_0.4\Intertwined-0.4-pc\renpy\display\layout.py", line 995, in event
    rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)
  File "C:\Users\Michael\Documents\MEGAsync Downloads\Intertwined_0.4\Intertwined-0.4-pc\renpy\display\layout.py", line 241, in event
    rv = d.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, st)
  File "C:\Users\Michael\Documents\MEGAsync Downloads\Intertwined_0.4\Intertwined-0.4-pc\renpy\display\layout.py", line 995, in event
    rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)
  File "C:\Users\Michael\Documents\MEGAsync Downloads\Intertwined_0.4\Intertwined-0.4-pc\renpy\display\layout.py", line 241, in event
    rv = d.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, st)
  File "C:\Users\Michael\Documents\MEGAsync Downloads\Intertwined_0.4\Intertwined-0.4-pc\renpy\display\layout.py", line 995, in event
    rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)
  File "C:\Users\Michael\Documents\MEGAsync Downloads\Intertwined_0.4\Intertwined-0.4-pc\renpy\display\layout.py", line 241, in event
    rv = d.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, st)
  File "C:\Users\Michael\Documents\MEGAsync Downloads\Intertwined_0.4\Intertwined-0.4-pc\renpy\display\behavior.py", line 907, in event
    return handle_click(self.clicked)
  File "C:\Users\Michael\Documents\MEGAsync Downloads\Intertwined_0.4\Intertwined-0.4-pc\renpy\display\behavior.py", line 842, in handle_click
    rv = run(action)
  File "C:\Users\Michael\Documents\MEGAsync Downloads\Intertwined_0.4\Intertwined-0.4-pc\renpy\display\behavior.py", line 315, in run
    return action(*args, **kwargs)
  File "renpy/common/00action_file.rpy", line 372, in __call__
    renpy.save(fn, extra_info=save_name)
  File "C:\Users\Michael\Documents\MEGAsync Downloads\Intertwined_0.4\Intertwined-0.4-pc\renpy\loadsave.py", line 436, in save
    location.save(slotname, sr)
  File "C:\Users\Michael\Documents\MEGAsync Downloads\Intertwined_0.4\Intertwined-0.4-pc\renpy\savelocation.py", line 405, in save
    l.save(slotname, record)
  File "C:\Users\Michael\Documents\MEGAsync Downloads\Intertwined_0.4\Intertwined-0.4-pc\renpy\savelocation.py", line 149, in save
    record.write_file(filename)
  File "C:\Users\Michael\Documents\MEGAsync Downloads\Intertwined_0.4\Intertwined-0.4-pc\renpy\loadsave.py", line 348, in write_file
    shutil.copyfile(self.first_filename, filename_new)
  File "/home/tom/ab/x64lucid-deps/install/lib/python2.7/shutil.py", line 82, in copyfile
IOError: [Errno 2] No such file or directory: 'C:\\Users\\Michael\\AppData\\Roaming/RenPy/Intertwined-1555922160\\17-2-LT1.save'

Windows-8-6.2.9200
Ren'Py 7.1.0.882
Intertwined 0.4
Tue Sep 15 11:29:13 2020
Hmm.. Doesn't really look like a script error. More likely a save file corruption or something got deleted.
Do you use mods?
I have no problem saving the game at that specific point in the game. So, I can't recreate this error.
 

mdmnsjs1

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Hmm.. Doesn't really look like a script error. More likely a save file corruption or something got deleted.
Do you use mods?
I have no problem saving the game at that specific point in the game. So, I can't recreate this error.
i got it to save on the next page of saves thanks for4 looking at it
 

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I get the MC was all hot and bothered with dick in hand when he was interrupted but there's no way he wouldn't have recognised Laylas voice. Unless he's an idiot but there's been nothing to suggest that's the case, indeed quite the opposite.

I could believe Alexis and Eryn are friends but if they were friends when the MC professed his love then he would know her. If the object of your love starts hanging out with other people you take note of who they are. Unless he's forgotten and we go back to the "MC is an idiot" idea
The 1st encounter with Alexis on the plane MC thinks that she looks familiar and if he met her somewhere.
 

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The 1st encounter with Alexis on the plane MC thinks that she looks familiar and if he met her somewhere.
TBH the whole dichotomy of either he knows or he’s an idiot is frustrating. Everyone has failed to remember people or not recognized a voice when they didn’t expect to hear it at some point in their lives.

As to the airplane and not recognizing Alexis, if she is Erynn’s friend, it’s not that difficult for me to believe that 5 years can change someone’s appearance drastically as well as your memory of them. Especially when you encounter someone where you don’t expect to see them in that setting. The MC thinks she looks familiar (and I think Alexis does have a similar thought as well) but can’t place her.

As to not recognizing Layla’s voice while buck naked, horny, in a shower. Layla would be talking through a door, while water was running (initially) and Lexi and MC were fucking. Everyone isn’t going to instantly recognize a voice especially one of the last voices you ever expected to hear at that moment. The MC’s focus wasn’t on the voice of the coutis interruptis at that moment.

Shit, when people call me from an unfamiliar phone number (if I answer) half the time I don’t recognize the voice instantly.
 
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Hmm.. Doesn't really look like a script error. More likely a save file corruption or something got deleted.
Do you use mods?
I have no problem saving the game at that specific point in the game. So, I can't recreate this error.
I am big fan about you and ur gaming script.graphics and story both are absolutely perfect but my small request to you that intimate scenes are should be better if there are many choice when MC Cumming to the other girls and show the ejection of cum.many players attract of that.let the player decide how they want end on that particular scene.please create many scene into one intimate scene.this is my small request.now it's upto u.except all that this game storyline are really great.
 
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I think... my biggest problem... with this game is... that the writer... doesn't realize the ellipsis is not... the only form of punctuation that exists...
 
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Thoughts:
  • This guy is a Chad among Chads, he seriously doesn't need to do much besides look like a magazine model and act casual and the girls hop on his dick like it is the cool thing to do. Fun. It is nice to see a really well defined male protagonist, not just with a tiny backstory and same old same old appearance.
  • Drama: This felt more like playing an episode of Big Brother UK or Love Island. People fucking everywhere, relationships mixing together, and everything is getting... interweaved. (there must be a better work for this, if only I could think of it)
  • Sleep sex: It doesn't exist. Played through to the end right now, and the closest is when you find the next door neighbor topless. However after having finished this current version, I don't see this tag fitting. The guy is not a creeper or a huge pervert, he doesn't need to pork his mom while she's passed out, he can simply walk into a bar and suddenly there's a girl sucking him off. Maybe remove the tag, unless the content is actually incoming.
Ah thank you good man, i asked about that task in particular and got totally ignored. It really did give off the vibe that it would be pretty misplaced and non existant. A shame honestly, the very thing i came here for
 
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