VN Ren'Py Abandoned Home Trainer - Domestic Corruption [v0.2.1] [Deviant_smite]

[smite2001]

Does anyone know of any similar games (with a Mac version available)?

I'm making this game because I could not find anything quite like it, so I'm interested as well.


Due to apparent popular demand (and my own impression after looking at it again) I will make the protagonist's dick more reasonable. It will still be suitable for punishing misbehaving little sluts though.

 

[ShiftingMTGO]

I'm making this game because I could not find anything quite like it, so I'm interested as well.


Due to apparent popular demand (and my own impression after looking at it again) I will make the protagonist's dick more reasonable. It will still be suitable for punishing misbehaving little sluts though.

no its fine do not let it worry you

 

[grohotor]

listen as much as i like girls with puffy cheeks this is too much. She looks like she needs a dentist.i know you're riding a fine line with the facial features but you've gone past into the abnormal. maybe tone it down a little ?

 

[Sotak]

I will do a quick android port straight away and attach it to this post here.
It will be an unsupported, "unofficial" version of the game though, because I do not own an android device right now, and unlike with the mac version, the android compiler uses some unique variables in the code that I did not touch.
You should have some different menu colors, I can already tell you that.

EDIT:

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I have emulated it and the character portraits are partially blocked by the textbox overlay. I might make a better android build for the next version if I have some time to do so. On the upside you can choose your character's name.

Unfortunately (for some reason) anonfile android port link doesn't work. If and when you make android port again maybe try mega instead. Will be waiting. Thanks.

 

[a1fox3]

I like how this is started but if it goes to the " Planned Fetishes" then I will have to give it a pass.

I am into more love/romance than hard core BDSM, light BDSM like spanking is ok but hard core is not for me.

I hope some of the fetishes can be turned off like "water sports" and such.

 

[khalidevil]

Question to the Dev
I don't know if it was asked before or not, are you going to add Impregnation or/and pregnancy to the game? Good luck with the game dev

 

[Nicke]

So many people pushing and pulling in different dirs "need this", "change that", "I'm out if X happens", and so on.

Dev, make the game you want to make. You try to please everyone, you probably won't like where your own game is going.

Also, no reason you should listen to me any more than anyone else I guess

 

[Challenge]

I'm in agreement with Nicke. I stuck around to see what your first update was going to look like because I liked the story you were making. Letting people pull you away from your vision of the game, and what will or will not be in it, is the fastest way to get unhappy with your own game -- because it won't be yours anymore.

I want to see your game. Remember, a Platypus is an animal designed by committee.

 

[COShepard]

See picture 6
I''m not sure what is happening but this is funny

 

[superinconspicuosname37]

great game keep it up

 

[kookieman12]

I like the game so far but it ended way too fast. Need some similar alternative games pleasee ??

 

[PotatoNinja]

Solid start, and the dev seems to have a good grasp on the psychological aspect of BDSM.

 

[Davewatch]

If he inserts that thing down below he will be getting a BJ at the same time, double wammy. Thanks for the nice update and please keep up the good work.

 

[slickwilli2020]

Awesome game, it's looking like it could be one of the best! The only thing I would add is some pregnancy in the future. Looking forward to the next update.

 

[MasterDk78]

No pregnancy thank you
If that is possible, or another route

Having a kid is not really such a sweet deal. screaming all night long, puking on you, smell like shit everywhere

 

[trundlebundle]

Definitely a good start. Looking forward to seeing where this goes.

 

[Spfjolietjake]

So many people pushing and pulling in different dirs "need this", "change that", "I'm out if X happens", and so on.

Dev, make the game you want to make. You try to please everyone, you probably won't like where your own game is going.

Also, no reason you should listen to me any more than anyone else I guess

I'm in agreement with Nicke. I stuck around to see what your first update was going to look like because I liked the story you were making. Letting people pull you away from your vision of the game, and what will or will not be in it, is the fastest way to get unhappy with your own game -- because it won't be yours anymore.

I want to see your game. Remember, a Platypus is an animal designed by committee.

Seriously agree with these two posters. So many posters have their own preferences they want or don't want to see.

Make your vision this time. Do it your way and learn. Its pretty damn good.

I'm following this because of what you came up. I don't want to see it turn into what any other group wants it to be cause there are hundreds of games that do that here. Your vn is unique.

 

[ArturiousDesign]

The illusion of choice is stupid af and a waste of time. Cut this out of your game.

 

[perverttyler]

The illusion of choice is stupid af and a waste of time. Cut this out of your game.

Dev has already stated here that the choices are only going to be for flavor text, they are not going to influence the rest of the game, you just get different dialogue options from it.

Also, and more importantly, it is their game they are developing they are free to do what they want with it.

 

[smite2001]

listen as much as i like girls with puffy cheeks this is too much. She looks like she needs a dentist.i know you're riding a fine line with the facial features but you've gone past into the abnormal. maybe tone it down a little ?

I think the worst offender here are the portraits, which I plan to overhaul in one of the upcoming versions. I'm personally not happy with them.

Question to the Dev
I don't know if it was asked before or not, are you going to add Impregnation or/and pregnancy to the game? Good luck with the game dev

I think some people have brought it up now, so I will just use your post to address the issue. The short version is: not sure. After the intro the game will have a day counter, so it would not make sense to "impregnate" girls and then not have them get visibly pregnant after a while, which would be a huge mess development wise. Risky sex is another thing. The protagonist will probably not make sure that every chick he dumps his loads in is on birth control.
Once I get to endings I will make sure to include pregnant girls, but that is way down the line. Still, I don't know. If inspiration strikes me, there might be a story line involving a girl getting pregnant.

The illusion of choice is stupid af and a waste of time. Cut this out of your game.

I'm really new to ren'py, and the choices that are in the game right now are just the result of me testing things out. I'm not really married to any of the choices currently in game, and I actually agree that on their own they feel too cheap.
I will implement a basic gameplay and progression mechanic in 0.3, and at that point I will add choices that make a small difference, including some for the intro that then carry over.


Regarding me changing things due to popular demand:
I have a pretty strong vision of what I want the game to be like. There is very little chance that I water things down or spend too much time on content I don't like. I want this game to become the game I always wanted to play but could never find.