VN Ren'Py Completed Secret Summer [v1.0 Epilogue] [SuperWriter]

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Dhoulcmagus

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Alright. So I finished the current version 0.6, and I've enjoyed it so far. That being said, I still get the feeling of every story to be hardly connected with each other, probably even more so than what happens in Picture Perfect.

I get how the updates work, focused on one or two characters each, but they give me, for the most part, too much of an isolation feeling. I'm not sure how I'd amend it. For most of the players, it doesn't seem to need any change. But... I don't know. Maybe after each character cycle is completed, come up with an update revolving around all of the LI interacting with each other?

Maybe it's just a matter of personal taste.

BTW... I'm not too fond of MC's behavior in the last update towards Irene at the end of the night. It's hard to blame him, with a bombshell like Irene throwing herself at him, I get it. And she even reasserts on her commitment the next morning. However... I can't shake the feeling off my head that the MC kinda took advantage of Irene at her weakest moment, after going through a traumatic experience and finally realizing what a dick she's married to. I think he should've given her some time to process it all.
 
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Dhoulcmagus said:
Alright. So I finished the current version 0.6, and I've enjoyed it so far. That being said, I still get the feeling of every story to be hardly connected with each other, probably even more so than what happens in Picture Perfect.

I get how the updates work, focused on one or two characters each, but they give me, for the most part, too much of an isolation feeling. I'm not sure how I'd amend it. For most of the players, it doesn't seem to need any change. But... I don't know. Maybe after each character cycle is completed, come up with an update revolving around all of the LI interacting with each other?

Maybe it's just a matter of personal taste.

BTW... I'm not too fond of MC's behavior in the last update towards Irene at the end of the night. It's hard to blame him, with a bombshell like Irene throwing herself at him, I get it. And she even reasserts on her commitment the next morning. However... I can't shake the feeling off my head that the MC kinda took advantage of Irene at her weakest moment, after going through a traumatic experience and finally realizing what a dick she's married to. I think he should've given her some time to process it all.
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Having all or multiple girls thrown at you at once doesn't allow the time to get to know each one individually. This is basically like a dating simulator, so you get to know each girl more and more one at a time. There's really no need for you to be with them all at the same time, because it does not move the story forward.

Could I show them all hanging out at the mall together? Sure, but like I said, it is just filler and does not do anything to help the story move forward, personal struggles that you help them with.

As for the MC's behavior in the last update, he is a 20 year old, and Irene is almost 40. And she is far from a weak woman, as you know, so when she makes a move on him, she is sure about it. And when he brings up his concern that they're moving fast the next morning, she reassures him and says that she does not regret it and knows what she wants.

Hope I explained it well enough.
Traumatic events can often times bring people close together in a short amount of time, and that's what happened in this case.
 
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I defended this developer once, but now I feel really hypocritical because now I won't touch his games because I know the updates aren't worth shit because he has way too many projects running at once. Finish a project and the things you learned from the first, you carry over to the next. That's the way development is supposed to work. The way it is now, you'll either finish a bunch of games with shoddy quality, or you'll spend half your time remaking them, like you did with PP. That's just from someone who will never drop a dime on a patreon with so many projects going on at once, so take it or leave it. I don't mean to offend and there will of course be "porn patrol" around to tell me what I can or can't say just cause I'm not paying. Good thing they aren't moderators.
 
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Can someone build a mod for this developers games that gives me infinite points for every character? I'm beginning to see a point system pattern which is rather aggravating
 
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jhustrue said:
I defended this developer once, but now I feel really hypocritical because now I won't touch his games because I know the updates aren't worth shit because he has way too many projects running at once. Finish a project and the things you learned from the first, you carry over to the next. That's the way development is supposed to work. The way it is now, you'll either finish a bunch of games with shoddy quality, or you'll spend half your time remaking them, like you did with PP. That's just from someone who will never drop a dime on a patreon with so many projects going on at once, so take it or leave it. I don't mean to offend and there will of course be "porn patrol" around to tell me what I can or can't say just cause I'm not paying. Good thing they aren't moderators.
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I do this full-time, so I work every day. Most developers aren't fortunate enough to do that, which is why I can do 3 and release as often as I do. I would understand your comment if I was taking long to release updates or you thought my updates were lazy with a lot of mistakes, but all comments are pretty much positive on every one of my game threads.

I work HARD to give you guys games to play with the best of my ability, and I'm having a lot of fun doing it. I'm sorry if you don't like my style of developing, but I'm going to continue making these games for the fellow pervs that enjoy them.
 
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