Venoma

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Note that "Terminal" site is picked by Norton as a "known dangerous website" and when on it not only didn't it download, but trying to leave redirected to another "known dangerous website."
It's a anonymous host website. I wouldn't read too much into what Norton says there.


Filed scanned fine for me with bitdefender btw. 2 minute download too.
 

Pi Quantum

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God start, but this update is only lesbian crap. :(
Jennifer can have sex with 2 guys and 2 girls in this update (unless I missed one), which seems balanced. If you gave Ian the taxi driver a BJ in Ep1, the guy paths are closed off in this episode as a result. :)
 
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ijako3

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Update was nice, but not gonna lie, scenes with the annoying boyfriend aint that interesting.

Hoped for another scene with the bad guy neighbour.
 

RottenPlum

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If you gave Ian the taxi driver a BJ in Ep1, the guy paths are closed off in this episode as a result. :)
How the fuck does that even make sense. That's why i hate choice based bullshit where some previous decision for some reason lock out scene. If she gave BJ to taxi drive, shouldn't she be more encouraged then to get fucked. Instead if she avoided that, then now suddenly she wants to get railed and previously she was grossed out by taxi driver.
 

Pi Quantum

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If she gave BJ to taxi drive, shouldn't she be more encouraged then to get fucked. Instead if she avoided that, then now suddenly she wants to get railed and previously she was grossed out by taxi driver.
She doesn't want to call the taxi driver in Ep2, because he basically forced her to give him a BJ in Ep1. Her decision to have sex with him and another guy in Ep2 makes sense after you see the events leading up to it. Simplest workaround is to walk or take the subway to her job interview, rather than the fast taxi ride.

Profile pic is Melissa Morrison, from Family, Friends and Strangers.
 
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AlfredBundy4

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Solid title so far but I agree that it makes very little sense. Which is fine but if this is what it is, that's what it is. It moves very fast (better than not at all, like some we know). I mean she's banged all but one male so far after E2. Know going in what this is.

The model is hot and the quality if fine! It just has very little buildup or suspense and the events that lead to sex make no sense whatsoever.
The taxi driver is a perfect example, as mentioned above. If she sucks him off in E1 she won't call him in E2. Yet, if she didn't in E1 she will call him in E2 where she will/can blow and then fuck him. It makes almost zero sense. She sees her husband talking to a woman so she bangs the cab driver, lol.

Then the apartment receptionist guy. She bangs him if she cleans the puke. He comes, helps and then...they bang in the elevator that was just full of puke. At best it smells like heavy cleaning solutions, lol.

So far the best angle is Jimmy, the scummy apartment neighbor/maintenance guy and that's not touched on at all in E2.

If I were the dev I would take everything they have so far and start over. Not a total re-do! Keep everything made so far and just...reformulate it. Slow it down a little bit by removing the early sex but keep the work for later use, etc. Maybe rewrite the sections dealing with other men to slow it down a bit. Make her less of a skank that'll fuck a cab driver if her man so much as talks to another woman or fucks the apartment receptionist in a puke smelling elevator for, essentially, the same reason. All on the 2nd or 3rd day of her living there, btw. Lmao.

Nobody wants another AWAM pace but this is a bit much. Slow it down and make her more of a catch. Don't draw it out over 50 updates and 6 years but add a bit of suspense.
 

Venoma

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I had pretty high hopes for this one given the dev making and writing it.

But man, and right off the bat....every male with the constant extra internal creepy monologue add on comments. Why oh why does any writer ever think that actually adds anything but an unnecessary amount of cringe to the game? The first couple of times it was done in a game was bad enough. The next 3048 times it's been copied in every female MC game since never made it any different :cautious:
 

ssj782

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Having trouble seeing the elevator cheating scene. Can someone give me the choices needed to see it? I've seen every other scene according to the animation files.
 

RottenPlum

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She doesn't want to call the taxi driver in Ep2, because he basically forced her to give him a BJ in Ep1. Her decision to have sex with him and another guy in Ep2 makes sense after you see the events leading up to it. Simplest workaround is to walk or take the subway to her job interview, rather than the fast taxi ride.

Profile pic is Melissa Morrison, from Family, Friends and Strangers.
Ok, but still we as players should have an option to call taxi driver again and even she as character should have an option to decide to do so because of her corruption inner slutiness or whatever. Locking out scenes is bad, because if people wanted to trigger lewd scenes in previous version now suddenly they are cut off off new ones because of their previous decision. It's not a fucking rpg like ME or Witcher but simple porn fap game.
 

Pi Quantum

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Having trouble seeing the elevator cheating scene. Can someone give me the choices needed to see it? I've seen every other scene according to the animation files.
Call Ian, go for taxi ride, stop the car when you see boyfriend, take him upstairs, clean elevator, stay in elevator to talk with Paul as he mops up the vomit. That should do it?
 

ijako3

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like i said that i think the update was nice besides the boyfriend parts, but i feel like with Paul the whole "i have feelings for you" went kinda too fast, like at least make it heat in the moment type of scenario and more on corruption side.

Im fine with sex already but it would be better that mad, tipsy jennifer just kinda jumps on Paul and things happen without deeper feelings and regrets later, like with the taxi guy.

Also Mark "cheating" on two paths kinda kills the corruption part of Jennifer doing stuff on her own behind his back and him being the faithful boyfriend.
 
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khronnus

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Solid title so far but I agree that it makes very little sense. Which is fine but if this is what it is, that's what it is. It moves very fast (better than not at all, like some we know). I mean she's banged all but one male so far after E2. Know going in what this is.

The model is hot and the quality if fine! It just has very little buildup or suspense and the events that lead to sex make no sense whatsoever.
The taxi driver is a perfect example, as mentioned above. If she sucks him off in E1 she won't call him in E2. Yet, if she didn't in E1 she will call him in E2 where she will/can blow and then fuck him. It makes almost zero sense. She sees her husband talking to a woman so she bangs the cab driver, lol.

Then the apartment receptionist guy. She bangs him if she cleans the puke. He comes, helps and then...they bang in the elevator that was just full of puke. At best it smells like heavy cleaning solutions, lol.

So far the best angle is Jimmy, the scummy apartment neighbor/maintenance guy and that's not touched on at all in E2.

If I were the dev I would take everything they have so far and start over. Not a total re-do! Keep everything made so far and just...reformulate it. Slow it down a little bit by removing the early sex but keep the work for later use, etc. Maybe rewrite the sections dealing with other men to slow it down a bit. Make her less of a skank that'll fuck a cab driver if her man so much as talks to another woman or fucks the apartment receptionist in a puke smelling elevator for, essentially, the same reason. All on the 2nd or 3rd day of her living there, btw. Lmao.

Nobody wants another AWAM pace but this is a bit much. Slow it down and make her more of a catch. Don't draw it out over 50 updates and 6 years but add a bit of suspense.
Totally agree, this game paths are confusing, the choices you make don't have any lead to where the game will go. e.g: In the cab scene, where you can choose to leave or stay in the car, totally changes what's going to happen, I had to replay the game many times making different choices until I got this one and could finally meet Kelly. As someone said some posts earlier, this is starting to feel like a walkthrough is mandatory to see the scenes you want.
 

SerHawkes

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Model wise, looks amazing. Not a fan of the boyfriend already though. Curious how this pans out.
 

ssj782

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Call Ian, go for taxi ride, stop the car when you see boyfriend, take him upstairs, clean elevator, stay in elevator to talk with Paul as he mops up the vomit. That should do it?
Thanks very much. I have the last of the scenes, I think. Now time to wait for the next update, lol.
 
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