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I'll get it uploaded to mega, can you tell me what you mean by "won't let download"? If there's a problem with the provider I'd like to know what it is.
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If you don't mind can you explain it a little more? On which chapters the grammar become disturbing?
Ah, This image got reported just after the upload of the game and I couldn't fix it on this release but I'll make sure to attach it in the next update
Can anybody please give me the IC patch for chapter 6 or the mod gallery + the walkthrough mod both files when I extracted it is empty .
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I can't really go into those details, as I haven't really kept up with where exactly I was in the story, but if I had to guess, I'd say around chapter 3-4 is when the Grammar degraded too much for me to enjoy the story...
That being said, the first couple of chapters where absolutely AMAZING and it saddens me that the grammar is what ended up killing it for me...
The only other complaint I could really think about would be the "tube" penis that MC has... Although stuff like that is just nit-picking and overall not something that really bothers me.
But again, Keep up the good work, and maybe sometime down the future you could hire a professional proof-reader to iron out the grammar issues?
I'll probably pop my head in in an update or 2! c:
Don't mind them dev. These grammar Nazis are nothing more then trolls. On personal point of view, You have done extra ordinary job. I loved the graphics, character, scene and lot more. All I can say thank you for sharing your hard work. I am grateful for that.
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I would like this more if there was less talking and narration during the sexual content. In fact, this seems to have a lot of frivolous dialog that doesn't help move the story forward. I always laugh when there are kissing scenes because the characters involved look like they are two snakes dancing together rather than people passionately kissing. I rather like the women and think there is a good variety of beautiful women. I think the concept for the story is interesting, but I often find myself just clicking through and skim reading because most of the dialog bores me to tears.
I am not sure if you really have taken any interest in dialogue at first place.
If you just stop looking for Sex secen then you will find conversation is basically sometime normal and somtime really good. Like you said you goal is different then spending some time on conversation.
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I don't just look for sex scenes. Not sure where you got that from. I'm saying that I personally don't enjoy the dialog in this story, to the point where I just give up and start clicking through it to find something more interesting.
Personally, I think the dialog has the right sense of banter, sexiness and story telling with past actions taken into consideration. On top of that dev has been keeping track of branching paths, e.g. Freya's talk with MC after she has the baby and dialog changes if you are in or out of a relationship with Imogen.
I'm having trouble figuring out how to unlock Mary's 4th gallery scene and Kaylie's 4th gallery scene.
Anyone remember how you triggered those?
Anyone remember how you triggered those?
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Just recently finished the current version of the game, love the story and characters, especially Melinda. This is one of the rare 3D VN games that I actually like where the characters don't just look like a prostitute you find in GTA V. Very good job on this and can't wait to see further updates!
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