VN Ren'Py Completed Karma [v1.0 Extended] [PowerPlower]

[Armoreau]

I just finished playing.
Overall good quality. I liked the little NTR part, it made me feel.
I find the renders to be beautiful and the models are good. Well done on that part!
It's with the writing that I have a problem: not realistic enough for me. People don't act like normal persons. PC is edgy and more of a mentalist than a psychologist.
I want to see what the Dev will make in the futur.

 

[EvolutionKills]

Wow, only 10 minutes in and there is a lot here that is really rough. Want to power through and finish it, hoping it gets better before I go into a full critique. But so far I've had half a dozen instances of bad writing, bad grammar, or bad plot, shattering my suspension of disbelief with all the subtlety of a nuclear powered sledgehammer.

 

[makian]

So in the playable portion is

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With different options does the game continue to other potential LIs?

 

[NewTricks]

This is a really weird game. On the first playthrough, nothing much happens if you act like a decent person. On the second you have more options. Each time you end up at the bar with your secretary and she tells you what you did wrong and encourages you to replay like you are trapped in one of the stranger episodes of Black Mirror. I can only imagine how this Russian nesting doll of psychotic episodes will look when the game is completed. But I have to admit that I kind of dig it.

 

[EvolutionKills]

This is a really weird game. On the first playthrough, nothing much happens if you act like a decent person. On the second you have more options. Each time you end up at the bar with your secretary and she tells you what you did wrong and encourages you to replay like you are trapped in one of the stranger episodes of Black Mirror. I can only imagine how this Russian nesting doll of psychotic episodes will look when the game is completed. But I have to admit that I kind of dig it.

Well, it seems the answer to that is being a super 'alpha' douchebag yourself, but with a touch less insecurity. If you don't ask any follow-up questions when given the chance during therapy, then during the high school flashback you get the option to enact a revenge plot. So the girl you liked but didn't make a move on ditches you for someone else, so you trap them with some stink bombs in the storage room they use to fuck in at school. It ruins their relationship because Mark beats the girl when they both lose their shit during the ordeal. Fast forward in time, if you then abuse the trust and use your mentally ill patient for your own means to setup Mark (which gets him assaulted and in the hospital), you get both girls. But it's not a big happy mutually respectful ménage a trio, it's the MC as douchebag 'alpha' commanding both Clara and Sandra to be subservient and to compete with each other for his affection.

So the author's solution to being a timid incel is to become a manipulative user of a douchebag. Hooray...

 

[Rectory]

Maybe someone needs to help me with the word cucked. Because so far MC has not been in a relationship at any point in the game. I know how it feels, but I wouldn't have counted it as cucked or ntr. The situation with Sam feels humiliating. But things like that happen in life. No one of you ever had a crush where she showed you her boyfriend at some point, or tried to hold you as a back up? Hit on a Girl in a Club, or even brought her there, and she went home with someone else? If no, by any chance, is Henry Cavill your ugly cousin?

In this game you got the chance to get back at the guy. If you don't like humiliation/cuck&ntr-feeling I really advice you not to fuck up. If you don't fuck up, you are winning and it will not be just sweet, but you will also know that it could have been different.

I believe that there is no winning, if there is no losing (Game over screen would be too cheap). I think it's one of the main flaws of many adult games today. That it's just grinding or doing something until something happens. I do understand that if there is more than one path, there is a lot more work to be done. But great thing about games is that you can make choices, chose/influence your path.

If you can just hit ctrl and pass all unread messages, hit some random choices, until the scene you expected arrives, then I believe we failed as Developers.

As in the beginning stated, regarding being a patreon, you should wait anyway.

PS: I've read the comment about getting back at Sam as well.

You really didn't understand well about the audience at all. Particularly vanilla people. If what you are saying would be true, then most of the famous games here should be "optional NTR" games. But No. Still, the most playing games in this site are 100% Non-NTR content focused.
And in most of "optional NTR" game threads, you only see "daily wars" between ntr fanbase vs non-ntr fanbase. Truth is hard but truth is truth. Anyway, good luck.

 

[Ceesko]

Is there any other games with similar themes to this? I don't necessarily mean NTR, but getting revenge on someone who wronged you, something like the "Count of Monte Cristo" themed games? Cheers!

 

[E_O_N]

Is there any other games with similar themes to this? I don't necessarily mean NTR, but getting revenge on someone who wronged you, something like the "Count of Monte Cristo" themed games? Cheers!

We somehow got into the same casket vicinity than fucking Count of Monte Cristo? Even if we are just talking about the theme...

Sadly I don’t know any similar themed games. But it’s a big community, I am sure some exist and hopefully someone has answers for you.

 

[Kazy]

The android version is not working, anybody has a new one or another link?

 

[B-52reloaded]

How can I save my files? There is always an error showing when trying to save .. any help with this?

 

[Osamabeenfappin]

Kind of curious to see where this goes next. Does MC get a chance to destroy the Ginger from the past, does he get another unrelated case? Looking forward to seeing how this is developed

 

[Ursus4321]

I don't get it, whatever I do I get this. How do I get the option to plan revenge?
Because then I follow the game and give the options that Tom always ends up badly

 

[Trasher2018]

from 0.3 to 0.9 and done? .... oookay.

 

[hoborg]

How can it be listed as an Alpha and also completed?
Wouldnt that just make it a beta?

 

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[Avaron1974]

Both the girls were great but fuck is the MC is a massive cock holster.

 

[HikariNova]

question: how is a 0.9 Alpha considered Complete? unless you're dropping it and just marking it complete as to show you're not working on it anymore?

 

[Avaron1974]

question: how is a 0.9 Alpha considered Complete? unless you're dropping it and just marking it complete as to show you're not working on it anymore?

It's finished complete with endings.

 

[skyteam]

Eon Able i played the game, and got the Solo Clara ending; Clara and Sandra ending; help the douche ending; try to destroy him, but chose the wrong answers (no NTR); try to destroy him, but chose the wrong answers (NTR)... are those 5 the only endings? i was hoping for a ending with Clara, Sandra and Melissa, also while getting revenge on Sam in the present of the game... that would be for me, the best ending

 

[v1900]

Both the girls were great but fuck is the MC is a massive cock holster.

How so? I am hesitant to try this.
Is this any good as a revenge story or does it veer off from the OP summary?