Ren'Py Magical Journey to Hell [v0.5] [Capyboobies]

[MidnightKing]

Suggestion: Get some background music going. Playing a visual novel with no sound feels strange (to me at least). Good job on the character designs though, they caught my interest enough to check out the game and follow it for awhile. Good luck on making your game!

 

[Adrianastro]

keep the dark tags and make lots of it and youl get my sub

 

[OrcDra]

I like it so far, just not too much content with the current 0.01 release (of course). Hope to see more soon, we need to see the muscle girl for real! xD (I know she was in, but that was kinda after the story content in some meta way.)

 

[HansDampf788]

Looks good.
Reading the tags ... bestiality, blackmail, rape ... and I'm out.

 

[Capyboobies]

Working hella fast to get yall some actual content asap. Meanwhile, why not some previews of v0.1

 

[voyeurkind]

I liked it for the most part. I do think some of the characters are a little too glib--right now, it feels like every character is a stand up comedian who's trying too hard for a dead room--but I like the premise and I think it has some promise.

One other thing: defining relatinoships is hard when you have no idea what the relationship is supposed to be. I suggest adding a mechanism to easily change it if you're unsatisfied with the results.

 

[etann]

decryption key for mega?

 

[PsybehrWolf]

Ok, I loved it! You got my attention with Adam West as the default MC Name, my man, that is just hysterical! You got me further with "Worked for George Martin, right?", and the line that sealed it, was about how much Stephen King References was to much! Still no clue how THAT scene made it past the censors all those years ago, but money talks...all the rest of the razzle-dazzle was the icing on the cake, the worm on the hook! This shit had me rollin' somethin' fierce, and I am lookin' forward to more!

 

[Capyboobies]

a stand up comedian who's trying too hard for a dead room

Yup, that's me alright

One other thing: defining relatinoships is hard when you have no idea what the relationship is supposed to be. I suggest adding a mechanism to easily change it if you're unsatisfied with the results.

Hmm I'll see if I can implement that, tis a good idea.

decryption key for mega?

Ah, I fucked up the link for a change, it should work now.

Ok, I loved it! You got my attention with Adam West as the default MC Name, my man, that is just hysterical! You got me further with "Worked for George Martin, right?", and the line that sealed it, was about how much Stephen King References was to much! Still no clue how THAT scene made it past the censors all those years ago, but money talks...all the rest of the razzle-dazzle was the icing on the cake, the worm on the hook! This shit had me rollin' somethin' fierce, and I am lookin' forward to more!

Yeeeeeeeeeeah! Glad you had a riot!!

 

[PsybehrWolf]

One thing I might suggest: set up SubscribeStar instead of Patreon. Patreon might work for your initial Tags (3DCG, Animated, Male Protagonist, Ahegao, Big Ass, Big Tits, Exhibitionism, Harem, Masturbation, Teasing, Humor), but your future ones (not these ones; Anal sex, Blackmail, Bukkake, Corruption, Group Sex, Humiliation, Titfuck, Vaginal Sex; but these three in particular: Bestiality, Rape, Incest)....they will cut you off. Just a thought for you. Hate to see you set up Patreon knowing these tags are in the works, just to have them cut you down in the future.

 

[Capyboobies]

One thing I might suggest: set up SubscribeStar instead of Patreon. Patreon might work for your initial Tags (3DCG, Animated, Male Protagonist, Ahegao, Big Ass, Big Tits, Exhibitionism, Harem, Masturbation, Teasing, Humor), but your future ones (not these ones; Anal sex, Blackmail, Bukkake, Corruption, Group Sex, Humiliation, Titfuck, Vaginal Sex; but these three in particular: Bestiality, Rape, Incest)....they will cut you off. Just a thought for you. Hate to see you set up Patreon knowing these tags are in the works, just to have them cut you down in the future.

Good idea! I'll make one as a backup. I am, nonetheless, going to try to implement those tags in such a way that it might not raise too many eyebrows (like incest, which is up to the user in choosing their relation to Eva *wink, wink*) and possibly evade Patreon's judging gaze. Maybe a patch. Maybe something else entirely. Who knows. Definitely not me.

Thanks for the heads up!

 

[Hordragg]

[…] are you sure you did not meant "furry" instead of bestality?

They are. See second spoiler in this post.

 

[Capyboobies]

Yea, PsybehrWolf is right!
SubsribeStar and Itch.io have most "elastic" rules in present time. Patreon blocks furry(sometimes),bestality, incest and too young looking characters in games, also games are banned for politic quotes and copyrights (like "Leaf on Fire" for using Pokemon characters).

Patreon is a bitch

About bestality tag, are you sure you did not meant "furry" instead of bestality?

Hordragg answered already, but yeah, actual beasties. I wouldn't mind adding furries it's not my kink(?) ...but god damnit does Mega Lopunny whisper nasty things to me... fuck, maybe I am furry but I haven't found a decent furry mod for HS2 either there isn't one or I absolutely suck at searching. For now I've just found real cartoonish ones that stick out too much. Ah well :/

 

[Capyboobies]

Sorry for asking again, i just missed that spoiler in your previous post
I will try to search some good furry mods by myslef.
Your characters looks great and i'm waiting to see next updates.

Np, if you do find any nice ones hit me up glad you like the models, hope not to disappoint

https://f95zone.to/threads/illusion...lect-2-card-sharing-thread.44248/post-5786707
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Weird face but this...this is workable. I'm gonna play around with it.

 

[Capyboobies]

Monday, already? Mondays suck! Have a buff preview to cheer up!


So, v0.1 is progressing, though not as fast as I would like(?) I'm gonna blame my potato PC. Deflecting blame is tight. I'm currently at 200+ new renders, and 3000+ new lines of dialogue, which in and of itself is already more than double what v0.01 has! Not the greatest metric to compare, but it's what we got. I am aiming for approximately double that amount for v0.1 (so, around 500+ render and 7000+ lines). Lewd wise, I've only finished one event with 7 animations, but I think I got the knack on looping them decently. I think. Also I am very proud of that event even though it's light BDSM so not everyone will watch it smh. I want to add at least 2 more animated lewd events, unless I get hyper motivated and make 3-4. But I don't want any of them to feel half-assed, so for now let's say 2 more.

And that's about it for now. If all goes well, early next month I'll be able to drop the official v0.1! If I don't forget, I'll do another quick update on Friday. If.

 

[Hordragg]

Deflecting blame is tight.

Wow. wow. wow. wow! I understood that reference!

 

[SkyRhythm]

Big b... Download. Thank man

 

[Capyboobies]

I suck at marketing so all I'm gonna say is that v0.1 has just been released! Yay!

Hope yall enjoy it! Have a blast and rip me a new one with feedback

Cheers,
Capyboo

 

[HogRocket]

I suck at marketing so all I'm gonna say is that v0.1 has just been released! Yay!
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Hope yall enjoy it! Have a blast and rip me a new one with feedback

Cheers,
Capyboo

Capy, I haven't gotten very far in yet but had to ask - is that a Marx Brothers reference? (password)

 

[loikl]

It looks good, however the concept is similar to Mythic Manor or Harem Hotel, this is not bad but I hope that in the future something original will be seen that will make it shine by itself.

Good luck to the dev.