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eh... not really.. I mean she wanted to lose weight because she wanted to become more popular basically .. because she wanted to connect with people not because it was the healthy thing to do... so .. she basically wanted to lose weight for the wrong reasons ..
But this is her reason in the game. Wolf claims that it is because of people here that forced the dev to make it like this, but as I see it, this was always part of the game. Would it have been an option for a different way to tell the story? Sure, but it is Zargon's story and this is the way he wanted to tell it.
 

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But this is her reason in the game. Wolf claims that it is because of people here that forced the dev to make it like this, but as I see it, this was always part of the game. Would it have been an option for a different way to tell the story? Sure, but it is Zargon's story and this is the way he wanted to tell it.
The truth is that Emma came up even before I started writing Y.A.'s story. I thought it was interesting the idea of a character changing her physical appearance as the chapters went by and I wanted to explore that. Of course it could've been done differently, but no one influenced me to make it happen this way.
 
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But this is her reason in the game. Wolf claims that it is because of people here that forced the dev to make it like this, but as I see it, this was always part of the game. Would it have been an option for a different way to tell the story? Sure, but it is Zargon's story and this is the way he wanted to tell it.
I don't really claim that. I've even said that if it was always the dev's idea to do so, then that's fine. I just see the posts and that's what I base my opinion on. I don't put it out as fact.
 
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Sorry if I misunderstood you then. It's just that by now I know Zargon and I was sure that he wasn't swayed by people here or on Patreon but had this in mind from the beginning.
 

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Sorry if I misunderstood you then. It's just that by now I know Zargon and I was sure that he wasn't swayed by people here or on Patreon but had this in mind from the beginning.
Yeah. No worries. I'm glad Zargon_games replied here about it. I, for one, feel better that it wasn't as people have made it out to, myself included. My opinions are just that, mine. I don't live inside of anyone else's head, I have enough of a mess in my own. :ROFLMAO:
 

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You know, to add to criticism of the principal sex scene, there's a distinct lack of recognition for the MC having been saved and also being the cause of Paul's death. Natalie never brings it up, the MC doesn't apologise to her or even lay thanks and praise on her late husband to her, Emma acknowledges it a bit but Lucas barely gives a shit his dad died saving his friend. I get that Paul was something of a ghost in his family but you'd expect these people to make more of the situation with the MC given he's the cause of his death and the one he saved... just seems like a footnote when it should be a recurring thing.

I do like this game so don't think i'm just shitting on it cause i'm pulling it up on a few short comings.
 
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You know, to add to criticism of the principal sex scene, there's a distinct lack of recognition for the MC having been saved and also being the cause of Paul's death. Natalie never brings it up, the MC doesn't apologise to her or even lay thanks and praise on her late husband to her, Emma acknowledges it a bit but Lucas barely gives a shit his dad died saving his friend. I get that Paul was something of a ghost in his family but you'd expect these people to make more of the situation with the MC given he's the cause of his death and the one he saved... just seems like a footnote when it should be a recurring thing.

I do like this game so don't think i'm just shitting on it cause i'm pulling it up on a few short comings.
Why? I think it's best to let it go. Dwelling on death only makes a game depressing and no one needs that shit.
 
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Zargon_games I see that the final version of Ch13 "Chapter 13 Public" has been released. Does it contain any bug fixes or is it the same as the Early Release version? I was waiting for the Public release to check it out, but your Patreon post for it is Locked and I am not sure if you plan to share it here or not.
 

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Zargon_games I see that the final version of Ch13 "Chapter 13 Public" has been released. Does it contain any bug fixes or is it the same as the Early Release version? I was waiting for the Public release to check it out, but your Patreon post for it is Locked and I am not sure if you plan to share it here or not.
Luckily no bugs have been found in the early version, so the final release is the same.
 
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