Ren'Py Abandoned Coming Back Home [v1.1.2] [Hidden Life Studios]

[CptValor]

havent played it yet, but the screenshots have my attention! your renders look nice but there are a few that are slightly dark! dont know if thats intentional to add a mood to the story your telling but if not i might suggest bringing in a bit more lighting in some of the darker scenes just so its more clear as to what we are looking at without straining our eyes. once again i havent played it yet (but plan to when i get some "free time"), but this is just what im picking up from the screenshots. looks good though! defiantly gonna be watching this one!

 

[2MoshPit]

I don't understand, why are so many users mentioned the same "issue" about the title of this demo/game (about 4 or 5 pages)...the same goes to the length of it: 1 click on one of the hosters and you will get a hint of "how long" you will get to "play" on this.
All in all I was triggered by the "incest"-tag (and the others too, of course) and I wish the dev/s good luck with this release - I keep looking for it.

best regards

 

[Hidden Life Studios]

havent played it yet, but the screenshots have my attention! your renders look nice but there are a few that are slightly dark! dont know if thats intentional to add a mood to the story your telling but if not i might suggest bringing in a bit more lighting in some of the darker scenes just so its more clear as to what we are looking at without straining our eyes. once again i havent played it yet (but plan to when i get some "free time"), but this is just what im picking up from the screenshots. looks good though! defiantly gonna be watching this one!

Thank. Yes, some renders are dark because when I rendered them I didn't figured out how to use the lights.
Then, I didn't bother to re-render them because this is only a demo and I didn't wanted to spent too much time on it.
For the same reason, wait for the first release before playing it if you don't have much free time. For now is super short and without anything interesting.

 

[Beastofvalhalla]

while the renders are somewhat nice this couldnt be considered a proof of concept or a demo there is barely an introduction and thats all this is, maybe 2 minutes of reading for the slowest reader.
Maybe in the future it might be worth a look but for now it takes longer to download and unpack than actually read through

 

[Deckard81]

{Do you want to skip the Intro}

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Yes <---

No

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The End



Joking aside, I'm looking forward to an actual chapter to be released, I'll hold off judgement till then

 

[Deleted member 3299623]

Thanks for the quick glimpse at what's to come. For your first game and time using Daz3D the renders are good and I am sure they will get even better as you progress. So gg to you for that, I look forward to playing the first chapter and I wish you all the best with it.

 

[PurityChant]

I would have waited to release this until you have at least gotten somewhere past the intro. There is no point in releasing a game where there is basically no actual game outside of customizing the characters. Outside of the spelling and grammar errors it seems like it could be a good game but I would have waited to release until there was even a semblance of an actual game. Continue working on it and I hope for more content later.

 

[EvilTat3r]

Looks good any android release in future?

 

[Damienkol]

I will not say what happen to the father/where he is.
Is not as obvious as it might appear and is a little mistery that the story will uncover much later on.

yep. Is extremely short for two reasons:
1- This is my first time with Daz3D. I had to learn everything from zero, build me an assets library and understand how to do what I wanted.
2- This is just the intro. Is like a demo of the game, despite consisting almost totally of a flashback. I'm already on the first chapter that will be much longer.

Anyway, thank for the replay. You are the first except me to see my work, so, I'm glad you didn't say "eww"

I wish success to your project and hopefully you'll have fun developing it

 

[♍VoidTraveler]

Ouw... That Hurt... They are at Least 18

Naturally, as if anyone would openly admit otherwise.

 

[bobdillan]

"Back to home" is most definitely grammatically incorrect in my books. It would need a possessive preceding "home" to be allowed. ie: "back to my home", as you suggested.

I'll take your word for it.

 

[bobdillan]

Everyone knows it's the dreaded MMMMF tag everyone hates. But I'm sure most are alright with the lighter MMMF tag, or the baby-rated MMF tag.

heh, honestly I was including all more than one M's in that

 

[bobdillan]

Thank you for you idea, I will do this rn.

I see that you had some interesting results.

Given you primary target audience (incest and harem lovers). I would suggest keeping it sole male. (i.e. only MC gets his dick wet).
So if you do add multiple pen, have it be because of sex toys.
And if you do add prostitution, don't have it be whoring an LI, instead have it be MC going to a brothel, or MC whoring himself out. (Just not an LI, that rubs people the wrong way).

Primary reason being, you will lose a lot of your main demographic simply including such content (optional/avoidable or not, it being avoidable/optional will only mean that you lose slightly less, but still lose a lot).
This is especially true for NTR and swinging/sharing, and beast stuff.

Also be careful with the futa (basically, don't have them doing stuff with an LI, and only MC). Cause that runs into the same problems as swinging/sharing if done a certain way.

Note: be careful of NTR with how you do any lesbian content, (females can steal from MC too).

I would also suggest banning any tags you personally don't like either, a surefire way to kill your motivation to make something is when you have to make content you dislike or even hate.
No amount of demand is worth selling your soul basically

 

[Cpt.SumTingWong]

We removed "Bestiality, NTR and Swinging" from the tags listed above because a lot of you were not happy about that. We remaind you that these three tags were not even pllaned in the game. They were only not crossed out from the possibility to be in it, but, if we spoke about the probability of them, it were very low.

Stand your ground

 

[crabboid]

This one is a little early, so I'm probably going to hold off, but I'm definitely going to keep an eye on it.

 

[UncleNanard]

I own an RTX 2060. I noticed too the noise and I am already working on it.
I used DAZ only for a little more than a month for now, so, is normal that I can improve in what I am doing.

Ask for the dev badge, and you can have acces to the hidden section with a lot's of tips for improve your renders !

 

[Crow Armbrust]

THX

 

[MissFortune]

definitely has potential judging by the render quality.

Uh, what?

Not to say that the renders are bad, but the noise is real.

 

[fidgetspinner]

We removed "Bestiality, NTR and Swinging" from the tags listed above because a lot of you were not happy about that. We remaind you that these three tags were not even pllaned in the game. They were only not crossed out from the possibility to be in it, but, if we spoke about the probability of them, it were very low.

I can respect not wanting it in your game. What I don't respect is caving to the very vocal but mostly non-supporting anti-NTR crew here. I don't have much hope in you development to be honest. Few reason why:


1: Your Patreon has 3 public messages. You're doing SAO parody. Then you're not doing it and now you do this.
2: Your game has (or planned) Incest and Loli. That's a big no-no on Patreon. You're so low on the radar you won't get found in the first few months, but it's gonna happen. I'd suggest moving to Subscribestar right now instead of having the banhammer force you once (if) you build a patron base.
3: Storyline is very derivative. This ain't 2018 anymore you have to have something to push it beyond.
4: You said you just started 3dcg. It shows. Looking at the still they look very grainy. I'm no artist, don't ask me how to do better i'm not that guy. But I can see if the pie is half-baked and that's what i see here. Not really good.
5: Shortness of the first "release". This reminds me of my younger days as a fanfiction writer. As soon as I wrote the first chapter draft I HAD to release it. Except I never wrote a second chapter, either got bored of it or had no inspiration. Well at least I didn't try to monetize it.

That being said, good luck on your future endeavors!

 

[Larry2000]

Back to the Start - The MC does not start from the beginnig.
Where you Belong - "Where I Belong" it might be more fitting.
Coming Back Home - Yes, or maybe "Back To My Home"
The March Home - I don't understand this.
A Fresh Start - This is a really cool idea for a title, but I don't think it fits to the future of the story.
Weenie Hut Home - I don't understand this either.
Back to Bang My Sisters, Mom and Find out the Mystery of my Absent Father - This is simply PERFECT ahahah. You forgot to add "And my friends and anyone else I can find" though. Sadly, is too long.

Anyway, "Coming Back Home" and "Back To My Home" are possible candidates.
I will not scrap "A Fresh Start" and I'll might use it for another game, in a very long to come day.
Thank you for your help. If I choose one of you suggestions I'll credit you in the "About"

I just came up with those in like 2 minutes. It was more echoing the theme of your original title. I have no idea what your game will be so I can't know how they'll be used.

The March Home is like making your way back home. It can have a neutral or negative connotation. Like it's something you must do, or something you're forced to do.

Weenie Hut Home is a reference to Spongebob Squarepants.

OH! I just realized you used my title GOOD LUCK!