Ren'Py Magical Journey to Hell [v0.5] [Capyboobies]

[juan palote]

The game has too many irrelevant choices.... Whats the point of a menu of choices when it doesnt change anything? The only thing it does is disrupt the flow of the story

And there are too many instances of trying to be funny. A couple of bad jokes here and there spice a story, using them every two dialog lines just become annoying.

Closed the game before even finishing day 2 because of that.

Suggestions to the Dev: Reduce the amount of menu's by removing at least half the irrelevant options, ideally all of them and chill out with the humor parts, you dont need them on every single interaction

EDIT:
I may continue playing it later, because i like the general idea of the game, but it was just too much for now

 

[share_or_fail]

Dear sir in pic #7, you have a catepillar of some kind bellow your nose. How are you not feeling that?

 

[NekoGirlHentaiGamer18]

~>oh it's kinda sad there's split route I prefer to play game in 1 go well I'll take what I can then.

 

[Capyboobies]

Aight, seems F95s definition is so broad that I'm just better off slapping the tag on. It's not that I was avoiding it, I just really didn't see how that it was the case, but if even swinging/sharing is considered NTR here then... welp that's that. I'll add the tag and let that be the end of it.

As an aside, I'll check out Sam's stuff. I thought I have fixed it all but obviously not.

As an aside aside, thank you all for your feedback and opinions!

 

[Chalker]

Aight, seems F95s definition is so broad that I'm just better off slapping the tag on. It's not that I was avoiding it, I just really didn't see how that it was the case, but if even swinging/sharing is considered NTR here then... welp that's that. I'll add the tag and let that be the end of it.

As an aside, I'll check out Sam's stuff. I thought I have fixed it all but obviously not.

As an aside aside, thank you all for your feedback and opinions!

I wouldn't necessarily put the ntr tag if you genuinely believe it is not the case, but definitely add a swinging tag. You can also add custom tags into the game description to further avail any confusion such as "mmf threesome" or "cuckoldry".

 

[ahxjosu]

what kind of ntr?

 

[ahxjosu]

who is eva to mc

 

[PsybehrWolf]

I lived through America 2016-2020. I already had my Magical Journey to Hell. Less sex, though, so that's an improvement in this one.

Damn.....very well played....my hat off to you!

 

[mrttao]

what kind of ntr?

IIRC so far the author told us he plans to have:
1. swinging & orgies
2. MMF sharing, or even more males than that
3. inviting a guy to fuck your girl while you watch
4. your girl gets bukkake by other men while you watch

in all cases it will be done with the MC's consenting in character.
I don't quite recall if you are actually going to be able to choose to not do those scenes at all.

Capyboobies can you clarify? would the player be able to choose to not do any of the above?
Also have I made any mistakes in the summary above?

 

[ahxjosu]

ahh ty i wont play it then

 

[Capyboobies]

IIRC so far the author told us he plans to have:
1. swinging & orgies
2. MMF sharing, or even more males than that
3. inviting a guy to fuck your girl while you watch
4. your girl gets bukkake by other men while you watch

in all cases it will be done with the MC's consenting in character.
I don't quite recall if you are actually going to be able to choose to not do those scenes at all.

Capyboobies can you clarify? would the player be able to choose to not do any of the above?
Also have I made any mistakes in the summary above?

That is very much correct! Those are currently the plans, and of course all of these scenarios will be completely optional! The only times a sexual encounter won't be optional is when it
1- is required to happen story wise and
2- is a vanilla experience

 

[Capyboobies]

Also, patch for Sam's buggy stuff, fixing the game ending error AND the logic with blackmail/selling out/etc.

You must be registered to see the links

 

[Vertius]

Oof, that planned Furry tag is tragic.

 

[Capyboobies]

Oof, that planned Furry tag is tragic.

Don't worry, you are allowed to look the furries in the eyes and say "not today, pendejas."

 

[Vertius]

Don't worry, you are allowed to look the furries in the eyes and say "not today, pendejas."

It's good that their content will be optional, but will they still show up frequently as side characters? Or will it be a case of characters you reject just won't really exist other than being spotted in the background?

Either way, thanks for replying.

 

[Capyboobies]

It's good that their content will be optional, but will they still show up frequently as side characters? Or will it be a case of characters you reject just won't really exist other than being spotted in the background?

Either way, thanks for replying.

More like rejecting their furry side will leave them only showing you their human looks, similarly to how you can choose to bang demons as humans or as red, horned critters, or if you even want to have intercourse with them in any way.

Np

 

[cheer1o_o]

This got me laughing so hard. Now I can't get rid of the thought that my cat has been meowing to me in Scottish all the time

 

[PsybehrWolf]

Finally did my play through today, and gotta say, it was worth the wait to play! (just had other stuff...I see that look....) I fell for this game from the first release, if just for the humor alone! From the idea that the original name for the MC was Adam West (BAM! SOCK! POW!), to the numerous Stephen King references...(I saw "It"...lol), maybe even a certain Magical Kingdom (of Lookover?! Where's the Kings Champion?! Oh, that's the MC....), the humor throughout is so much fun, and the characters and interactions...I spent most of my time laughing my ass off! It's nice to have certain things as avoidable (not a fan of ntr, but I can play when avoidable tags are there), but other ones looking nice, and so happy to get Devola back to form for the Climax of this Release! Oh, and Sis with her freakin' Piano! Keep up the great work my man, you keep me in the good kinda stitches!
btw - can I get the Number for Val in Accounting....she's REALLY Cute!

 

[cheer1o_o]

Damn, this is a lot of fun. It might be rude to compare, but it's like "The Inn" with it's humor and 4th wall breaking had an intercourse with "Weird shit is going to happen" (I guess there was a reference to it, wasn't there?) with it's mysterious plot that takes place in a hotel. You've got your own unique style of writing, though, and I really like it!
Let's hope this games gets much more attention. Keep up the good work!

 

[Capyboobies]

Thank you all for your kind words, I am really glad y'all are enjoying my game so

Eva sends good vibes in appreciation!