VN Ren'Py Going for Goal [v0.08 Hotfix] [DarkSkello]

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darkskello

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HI, the game has an error during the conversation with Rebbeca where the Renders show the conversation with the other girl.
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It is being corrected as we speak. Hoping to get a patched version up as soon as I can. Thanks to feedback such as this. Missed it myself to be completely honest.
 
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darkskello

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Is this going to be choose one LI at the end or will it be a harem?
It's planned on multiple endings so it would be down to the player eventually. With this essentially being an introduction, No values are yet added in so everything in right now choice wise will just be your choice and has no meaning to the end product so far.
 

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It's planned on multiple endings so it would be down to the player eventually. With this essentially being an introduction, No values are yet added in so everything in right now choice wise will just be your choice and has no meaning to the end product so far.
I see in the banner there are 10 LI, so if there are multiple endings with each girl does that mean you have to play the same game 10 times to get all the endings? Pretty nerve-wracking…a harem route would be helpful…an all-girl ending.
 

darkskello

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I see in the banner there are 10 LI, so if there are multiple endings with each girl does that mean you have to play the same game 10 times to get all the endings? Pretty nerve-wracking…a harem route would be helpful…an all-girl ending.
Maybe, maybe not. I already know it will be a pain to do so many paths. Depending on your choices it will be a short game or a long game... Or at least thats the plan
 
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bruce555

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Maybe, maybe not. I already know it will be a pain to do so many paths. Depending on your choices it will be a short game or a long game... Or at least thats the plan
Ok, that's your game...but rest assured that many people don't like to replay the same game over and over just to have an ending with a different girl. It would be preferable to be able to choose between a harem path or a path with a single LI.
 

CamaroFan432

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Maybe, maybe not. I already know it will be a pain to do so many paths. Depending on your choices it will be a short game or a long game... Or at least thats the plan
I agree with bruce555, better make a few endings with some girls and a harem ending. Otherwise a bunch of people will just skip the game. Many people here play a VN once, maybe twice, not 10 times. Also keep in mind, the more pathing you implement with choices, the more work it will be for you. And the longer it will take to develope and finish the game. But it's your game and your decision.
 

darkskello

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Ok, that's your game...but rest assured that many people don't like to replay the same game over and over just to have an ending with a different girl. It would be preferable to be able to choose between a harem path or a path with a single LI.
Chances are you will still have a Harem path it would more so be how many are in said Harem. People may not like the look of certain characters or their behaviour and banish them from said players playthrough
 
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darkskello

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I agree with bruce555, better make a few endings with some girls and a harem ending. Otherwise a bunch of people will just skip the game. Many people here play a VN once, maybe twice, not 10 times. Also keep in mind, the more pathing you implement with choices, the more work it will be for you. And the longer it will take to develope and finish the game. But it's your game and your decision.
For most of them I have it planned out. If you reject them they will not feature in scenes of a sexual nature. So you can have whoever you wish. It's more work but for the user experience, I would be happy to do so. Their paths would be a seperate path the story path however. They are in the story for the player to enjoy afterall. The story itself will be impacted otherways rather than impacted by your relationships. Or at least thats what I have planned
 
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bruce555

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Chances are you will still have a Harem path it would more so be how many are in said Harem. People may not like the look of certain characters or their behaviour and banish them from said players playthrough
Sorry my native language is not English and I might have interpreted it differently. But you could let the player choose who will be part of the harem. Make the game you want and how you intended it. They were just my thoughts. Good luck to you and your game.
 

darkskello

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Sorry my native language is not English and I might have interpreted it differently. But you could let the player choose who will be part of the harem. Make the game you want and how you intended it. They were just my thoughts. Good luck to you and your game.
I just want the chance for those players who like a particular girl to go with and not the rest. It is me trying to accomodate is all. The Harem path is the canon path. Though not all of them need to be in it if you choose not to have them in your love life. I hope this clears it a little bit
 

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I just want the chance for those players who like a particular girl to go with and not the rest. It is me trying to accomodate is all. The Harem path is the canon path. Though not all of them need to be in it if you choose not to have them in your love life. I hope this clears it a little bit
Ok, now it makes much more sense. Earlier it read like choosing just 1 LI would be canon and harem wasn't planned at all. Sorry, that I got that wrong. However, letting the player choose which LIs are part of the harem is and not forcing the player to be with a LI, they don't like, is a very nice thought. It will make quite a bunch of people very happy.
 

darkskello

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Does the game will have a lot of choices and does the choices will matter for the game or its a linear path? How many girls the game will have?
Three main story lines for the ending. The Harem itself is planned on those the player wants in it. The plan is to reject those you don't want in. The story itself is planned to be a seperate thing with only two or three of the mains having a say in the story. Though they do not need to be on the relationship path for this. They would still be close but not that close if rejected.
 

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So when choosing relations the first one says landladiesstep- sister.. So she would be my aunt at age 24? or big sister?
 
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darkskello

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So when choosing relations the first one says landladiesstep- sister.. So she would be my aunt at age 24? or big sister?
Aunt is the canon but she can be who you want her to be. Of course this will probably mess with the relationship coding between her and the others but it is what it is in that regard
 
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CamaroFan432

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Aunt is the canon but she can be who you want her to be. Of course this will prbably mess with the relationship coding between her and the others but it is what it is in that regard
I played it and finished just now. It seems that a variable for the relationships is missing. The player doesn't get asked what the MC is to the mom (would be son, right?), and so it messes with some of the text. During the talk between her and the MC, she calls him "my tennant" a few times. I suggest to fix it, if that wasn't intended. Also there are a few spelling mistakes. Maybe it would be good, if you can someone to proofread it. Nothing too bad though. Considering you have some characters speaking German, you're from Germany? If so, give me a pm, I'm willing to help you with some minor translations, being from Germany myself.
 

michael1984

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Well first off that incest tag doesnt have to be on there since no one is actually related even if u change relations

The women in this game have weird faces imo

Story so far is more or less ur a football player and with a contract fuck up u have to move to another team and pay back some money to ur original club

But yeah imo there should be some facial improvements of the women
 

darkskello

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I played it and finished just now. It seems that a variable for the relationships is missing. The player doesn't get asked what the MC is to the mom (would be son, right?), and so it messes with some of the text. During the talk between her and the MC, she calls him "my tennant" a few times. I suggest to fix it, if that wasn't intended. Also there are a few spelling mistakes. Maybe it would be good, if you can someone to proofread it. Nothing too bad though. Considering you have some characters speaking German, you're from Germany? If so, give me a pm, I'm willing to help you with some minor translations, being from Germany myself.
I am not. Though the plan is for the club the mc is moving to is going to be a Club that had fallen from glory in the past and is on the way to the top again. The club is based in Bavaria, Bovaria for the game, so Germany is correct. They refer to it as Germiny as it fits with all the locations being slightly changed. In terms of bugs and other issues, the matter appears to be sorted. I just want to add a slider for the dialogue box and it's ready to be patched. Work begins on the second release after this
 

darkskello

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Patch for the issues in game is ready for release. Once I gain ownership of the thread, the links will be updated with the patched files
 
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