MrFriendly

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I'm impressed, I like the concept and the renders however the grammar needs work. Definitely not the worst offender in the grammar department but this would be so much better if it was polished a bit more. I like all of the girls so far, though I really prefer Amanda with her pig tails, she looks much more innocent that way. Not sure that I like the "minigame" aspect of sex, much rather have longer animations and have to work less for it. But it isn't onerous so I'm sure I can live with it.

Honestly I was going to say I can't pick a favorite of the daughters but it's easy to do so right now. Felicia is well rendered and written. Helps that she is more forward and eager than the other two.

Anyway looking forward to more updates, hope the developer can find a proofreader to help with the grammar mistakes.
 

doe50818

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I'm impressed, I like the concept and the renders however the grammar needs work. Definitely not the worst offender in the grammar department but this would be so much better if it was polished a bit more. I like all of the girls so far, though I really prefer Amanda with her pig tails, she looks much more innocent that way. Not sure that I like the "minigame" aspect of sex, much rather have longer animations and have to work less for it. But it isn't onerous so I'm sure I can live with it.

Honestly I was going to say I can't pick a favorite of the daughters but it's easy to do so right now. Felicia is well rendered and written. Helps that she is more forward and eager than the other two.

Anyway looking forward to more updates, hope the developer can find a proofreader to help with the grammar mistakes.
In 0.4 content (and onward) you should definitely not see any grammar mistakes (maybe the odd phrasing here and there that are just certain mannerisms in speech that get lost in translation between hungarian and english with them not having any english equivalent to fall back to), 0.1 and 0.2 grammar varies, with 0.3 I'm basically rewording half the script. If the game had not been leaked early, I would have had the time to consolidate all of this and revise the whole script, now instead you just see my translation for 0.4 and what others have been doing before I jumped on board.

Piracy in this case is literally contributing to decreasing the overall quality of the content...
 

snowman97

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Oct 5, 2019
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How do you start the game with the reading mode after you've started a playthrough before? I don't have the choice anymore, even if I start a new game
 

BarbarrossaNA

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Well written and interesting.. depending on harem or not in the future there could be tons of playthroughs as you peruse the field.. so to speak. Renders are pretty good and looking forward to more. Nice work.
 

moose_puck

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I wrote a ghetto imod for myself (Sorry, won't post it.. I made it too custom for me) - It wasn't that hard. Beyond changing any of the normal things, like stepdaughter to daughter and what not, you also have to read the dialogues to change the conversations somewhat. Otherwise, it sounds too weird.

For example, there's a spot where one of Tegan's friends mentions that she didn't know Tegan had a father and Tegan respond's ""In fact, he's just my STEP-father, but that's a long story, maybe I'll tell you one day..." - That would sound weird just changing it to father, so i changed it on my game to "Well, he was never around to be my father, but that's a long story, maybe I'll tell you one day.."

Right now though, the game only really has two paths... good route and rude route. Not much of anything you do (other then that main choice at the beginning) will make much difference. Except, I think, getting them all angry at you. I really think this game should just be a straight linear VN. It sure isn't built to be a sandbox.

The point system is also very confusing. Why do you lose points for staring at someone's ass when they don't see you do it? And to make it more confusing, you gain points for staring at Hannah's ass - WTF?

Progression is also way too fast. By the end of this chapter, I had every LI in the game wet for the MC after only - what? - 3 days?

Anyhow, I like the concept and I really hope the dev fleshes out the MC's backstory from prison. It's refreshing playing a game where the MC is not some dork with a horse cock.
 

doe50818

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She has not much of an ass, so staring at it is something special and shows her that mc is really interested in her which she liked ...
That's exactly it. Different women will react to the same gestures differently.

The point system is also very confusing. Why do you lose points for staring at someone's ass when they don't see you do it? And to make it more confusing, you gain points for staring at Hannah's ass - WTF?
The points are not for the girls, they are for you. When you are rude/perverted, you go in the negative, because that gesture you did is just one step toward the rude/perverted route... EXCEPT when the gesture is perceived by the one you extend it toward positive.
 
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MMaaggiicc

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Awesome game, I love it! At first it made me cry and why does a porn game have to produce this for me? How am I supposed to get turned on by this? I did not understand that need to achieve an affective bond with someone who then wants to completely dissociate me, but in part it puts you in the role and the story is clean and entertaining. And I must say that I LOVE PETRA .. I love that dominating potential; I hope to find more women with that role. Amanda is a sweetheart too =) :love:
 

ViperGts151

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anyone else getting this error when editing the script to enable incest or when replacing the script file with one posted on this thread and have any idea how to solve this problem?
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.
Before loading the script.
error: Error -5 while decompressing data: incomplete or truncated stream
-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------
Full traceback:
File "renpy/bootstrap.py", line 331, in bootstrap
renpy.main.main()
File "renpy/main.py", line 417, in main
renpy.loader.index_archives()
File "renpy/loader.py", line 244, in index_archives
index = handler.read_index(f)
File "renpy/loader.py", line 129, in read_index
index = loads(zlib.decompress(infile.read()))
error: Error -5 while decompressing data: incomplete or truncated stream
Windows-10-10.0.19041
Ren'Py 7.5.0.0n
Fri Nov 12 03:08:40 2021
 
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lord anubis

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Dec 12, 2017
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anyone else getting this error when editing the script to enable incest or when replacing the script file with one posted on this thread and have any idea how to solve this problem?
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.
Before loading the script.
error: Error -5 while decompressing data: incomplete or truncated stream
-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------
Full traceback:
File "renpy/bootstrap.py", line 331, in bootstrap
renpy.main.main()
File "renpy/main.py", line 417, in main
renpy.loader.index_archives()
File "renpy/loader.py", line 244, in index_archives
index = handler.read_index(f)
File "renpy/loader.py", line 129, in read_index
index = loads(zlib.decompress(infile.read()))
error: Error -5 while decompressing data: incomplete or truncated stream
Windows-10-10.0.19041
Ren'Py 7.5.0.0n
Fri Nov 12 03:08:40 2021
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ciderapple

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The difference is that fiction needs to be "believable" or "grounded in reality", while reality can be as fictional as it wants.
It's all about being internally consistent. So you can do anything you want, so long as the rules of the reality you set up all support each other and do not change on a whim.

It's like the star wars Last Jedi movie and the scene where they used 1 ship to destroy an entire fleet with the hyperdrive trick that was introduced.

Disney totally screwed the Star Wars Franchise series there because - if all you have to do is launch a ship at hyperdrive at something to destroy it, then why do we need an entire fleet to attack the death star? Why do we even need a death star for large scale destruction??

Now in Star wars all you need to do is put a droid in an old freighter and have it hyperdrive at whatever you wanted destroyed?
And this is why Star Wars is a dead franchise - Disney killed it because they are freaking morons for not staying true to the lore of the universe in many many ways. ... but I digress.

That was only one example, but it shows how even 1 scene, when it does not stay internally consistent with the rest of the lore in a story can entirely destroy the grounding for that story.

So basically write it however you want, but just keep the same rules throughout the series, and if something must change, then you better have a very well explained reason for that change.
 

fatattack

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It's all about being internally consistent. So you can do anything you want, so long as the rules of the reality you set up all support each other and do not change on a whim.

It's like the star wars Last Jedi movie and the scene where they used 1 ship to destroy an entire fleet with the hyperdrive trick that was introduced.

Disney totally screwed the Star Wars Franchise series there because - if all you have to do is launch a ship at hyperdrive at something to destroy it, then why do we need an entire fleet to attack the death star? Why do we even need a death star for large scale destruction??

Now in Star wars all you need to do is put a droid in an old freighter and have it hyperdrive at whatever you wanted destroyed?
And this is why Star Wars is a dead franchise - Disney killed it because they are freaking morons for not staying true to the lore of the universe in many many ways. ... but I digress.

That was only one example, but it shows how even 1 scene, when it does not stay internally consistent with the rest of the lore in a story can entirely destroy the grounding for that story.

So basically write it however you want, but just keep the same rules throughout the series, and if something must change, then you better have a very well explained reason for that change.

The mere mentioning of the existence of TLJ is an insult to most StarWars fans.
There is no episode VIII
period.
 

m0us3r

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How do you start the game with the reading mode after you've started a playthrough before? I don't have the choice anymore, even if I start a new game
Try to delete "persistent" file in "saves" folder (when the program is not running), then start a new game.
 
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michi04

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hello can someone tell me whether a mod is making a file that provides a template for a replay. would be very happy.
 
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