Ren'Py Abandoned A Better Tomorrow [v0.40 Part 2] [Gecko]

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Canto Forte

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After month1/2 juggling work/game development and private things, you complain not having a save files on an already leaked game?
Edit: I would have sent the files myself as an apology for waiting so long, but you guys never stop to amaze me!
Please o creator of the dames ... be the magnanimous sith we deserve
Revel in the amazement of granting us unworthy the graces of your wisdom
Do show compassion for the simple player and please bestow on this forum
any good fortune you can muster
-> we still hope for the betterment of Mankind.

Happy life, work and gaming, o...most exalted one!
 
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TheKingCobra

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Jarring, it keeps reiterating the relationships between MC and themselves, and it's incredibly annoying. "Big Roommate" apparently doesn't know social norms, which of course, we've seen before in these types of games. She proceeds to get upset over the kiss, calling him a pervert and stuff, then somehow, seemingly from out of nowhere she is attracted to him and thinks that the kiss was "hot".

The MC and Landlady development to a somewhat intimate relationship ready to take the next step seems to have happened before the story, which I suppose is fine. Minor nitpick, but you didn't even try the pizza? If you didn't have a slice during the entire time your landlady was away on an interview, that's on you MC. The dialogue with the mother in the kitchen is... yikes. Also, if you're caught in such a compromising position, I'd probably move to the other seat and coffee cup. Not take off running across the kitchen.

On the other hand.. Her shirt did get pulled up suddenly. That lady did not lie. However, a lesson for everyone, everywhere.. DON'T COCKBLOCK YOURSELVES. Also, I got the feeling that the elder tenant is more prudish than to suddenly show her panties. On a side note, I could totally see the pope running a strip club for the mafia. Also, don't repeat "my love" every single dialogue.

All in all, more attractive characters than we usually get in these games. Dialogue needs the most improvement but shouldn't be too difficult. The story seems fine for what it is and tries to be.

I like this game just fine (y)
 
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botc76

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After month1/2 juggling work/game development and private things, you complain not having a save files on an already leaked game?
Edit: I would have sent the files myself as an apology for waiting so long, but you guys never stop to amaze me!

Well, it's stuff like broken saves and provided or not-provided save games that might decide over whether I support a game or not.
You can act as high-strung as you want, but believe it or not, I try to give constructive advice to devs, stuff that if implemented would make me seriously consider supporting a game, if I manage to scrounge together a few bucks for it.

Keep in mind that what is inconvenient for us evil and mean pirates here is as inconvenient for your patrons, unless you provided them with said save game, if that, good for you.
 

ThunderRob

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the MC's status thingie is fubar..needs work or needs to go..i can pee(and get the star wars clip) 10 times in a row and he still hasta pee..lol..i can take 5 showers in a row and he is still stinky..its broken :p also..i cannot "take" the remote..at no time has that option appeared..only watch fashion action porn or back...this game is so unintuitive...desperately needs a WT even with so little content...i love the dames..they are as pretty as it gets..but the game itself is currently a mess.
 
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