VN Ren'Py Abandoned A Cowboys Story [v0.4b] [Noller72]

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Lt. Aldo Raine

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Overview:
You take the role of a lonesome Cowboy who travel to this little town, and there the adventures begin.
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Features:
  • Each character with their own story, quests and twists.
  • Detailed major storyline.
  • Many quests around an in the town (In progress)
  • Custom HD GUI in western environment style (in future updates)

Updated: 25-Jan-2019
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Version: 0.4b
OS: Windows
Language: English
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voyeurkind

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One other minor thing: a distinct name for the file would be useful. I put all of my games under the same folder, and it would be much easier to find this one if it were named something other than "game.exe".
 
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voyeurkind said:
So the premise sounds fine. and now that I've played through the demo, I have a few thoughts:

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How about things you found were done well? Think this is the devs first game, prob help him if he also got feedback on positives.
 
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Lt. Aldo Raine said:
How about things you found were done well? Think this is the devs first game, prob help him if he also got feedback on positives.
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Fair enough. I think it's a good start. I liked the facial expressions on the models, even if they did seem fairly exaggerated. It made the models look new and fresh.

I do think the basic premise is good, and not just a recycling of every other game you see out there. An old West game has some potential.

I like having quests to accomplish. While an open world/sandbox game can be fun, they can also get either too grindy or too easy. If I just wanted to see porn, I'd watch porn. If I'm playing a game, I want to play the game, and I want some challenges, not just choose this girl and fuck her. As long as there's good balance between sexual content and game play, that's what I'm looking for.
 
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Zippity

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This visual novel/game has a very unique and creative concept from most other erotic/adult visual novel/games... And some of the game play ideas also look interesting... But the current content and game play mechanics still have a LOT of work that needs to be done... The story itself feels extremely rushed going from one scene to the other rapidly, and the cowboy twang looks completely off when mixed with spelling/grammar errors... Even with all the many flaws this VN/Game has, I still like the idea behind it... I went ahead and made a review...
 
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Because I like a good western I broke my own rule of not playing first releases and dl'ed this. Zippty's review pretty much already said everything I was going to comment on.

The renders range from Ok to terrible. I think dwarfs do not get enough attention in media so was happy too see the attempt to include one here but what we actually got was a laughable leprechaun. I enjoyed the visuals of the sheriff but since everything else tries to be somewhat authentic to the setting, she is completely out of place. The main character rides into town desperate for a bath and a shave, but he's got a shaved head! Huh?

The grammar and spelling is bad enough, but the actually story telling is pretty bad. Hopefully the dev can get someone to actually do the writing for this in the future as I would like to come back in several updates down the road and give this another try.
 
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i remember to have see some pics on HUB :) and talked with dev.

good luck with the project ! best wishes !


dont worry about bad comment, you cant start good from the beginning.
and as i always think, its better to improve than decrease :D
peoples should give the game a few time to see how it go before giving specific description
( yes, i talk about that review... making a review just at the first release is... not very descriptive )
 
Noller72

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Thanks for your response, all of them, i liked the review, it points me to the things i need to do better, i dont take it as something bad.
The Poker game is just temporary, it comes in a later version.
And the sex scenes will also be different and animated.
Thanks for pointing out that i need to name the exe file.
Spelling and grammar yes that is ongoing right now hope it wont take to long.
Again thanks for the response.
 
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