brick257

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I just hit the end of the the content (other than the christmas storyline) and am exceedingly ready for what comes next.

3 small things i noticed to consider:
1.) All (or at least half) of Sidney's photos should be under the "supporter" page for verisimilitude's sake.

2.) Sidney needs another interaction to boost her libido once the bedroom scene has reached its conclusion. Then, you can display the pop-up "talk to her/go to sleep" when she has 8-10 libido and we won't have to clickso many extra times before going to sleep when we're just trying to progress.
I think 2 voice options in her "i'm busy designing" loop might be the best bet. if her submission is above 15, you can "tease her" to increase her libido by 1, if her Libido is 10, you can "compliment her" to increase her affection by 1. Try the compliment with 9 or lower: -2 submission "you're just trying to get in my pants." Try the Tease while her submission is 9 or lower: -2 affection "What is WRONG with you? You shouldn't talk to people like that."
Short loop, easy to program, saves a lot of clicks/headache with the bed options!

3.) I would, as stated above, very much like opportunities to /not/ do some of the niche sexual choices. For me, the "serve your tits on a platter" did absolutely nothing. Having an option there "Show me their unadulterated glory" or "serve them to me on a silver platter" could have been a pretty easy programming option. One she crouches by a platter, the other she stands there, arms folded underneath her breasts.

The game has great bones and I was /hooked/ by it for my first playthrough. I think you're doing a really good job hitting a lot of high points, despite the low points people have pointed out. Your game shouldn't be FOR everyone (and that's okay) but peppering in a few extra choices here and there could really give the game an astronomically higher feeling of "polish" and care.
Good luck! And if you ever need a writer/editor/playtester - let me know and I can send my references and rates!
 
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WillTylor

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Is the pregnancy in x-mas event a mandatory? Because I have never been more disgusted in a hentai-game...
Yes, the pregnancy is mandatory in the Xmas event, but it doesn't have any ramifications in the actual story. It plays out more like a dream where none of your actions have consequences. And if pregnancy isn't your kink, then the entire Xmas event is skip-able. So when the prompt comes up, just choose to skip it.
I'm always surprised at the amount of kink-shamers there are on an adult website, where you can choose whatever you want to play and whatever you want to avoid. Not to mention it's all pirated content. It's not like you had to pay for this, and now you need to demand a refund. If there's a kink you just aren't into, just say to yourself, "Nope, not this one." and move on. You don't have to take the extra effort to try to disparage someone else's kink.
So... I'm sure I'm not the only one weirded out by the clearly 12 year old MC. Tf is a little kid doing in an adult porn game? Like slapping on a "everyone is 18" disclaimer makes it ok... rofl. I'm even more weirded out by the high rating this game has. Jesus this community has some sick fucks. And this guy below me more disgusted by the pregnancy than the fact you're playing in the shoes of a child.
Maybe you're an old man who hasn't been around 18 yr olds for a long time. If you don't already have a court ordered ban from going with in a mile of a school, then maybe you should try driving by one sometime, and see just how young the 18 yr old seniors appear. If you're getting your standards from the 30 yr old actors playing teenagers on TV, or the pornstars with the implanted boobs and lips, then you're judgement of what an 18 yr old looks like, is going to be off. I teach a class once a week to 17-18 yr olds, and every one of my models could easily fit into that class. Patreon agrees with me, and has given me the green light to proceed to market my game using their name. F95 agrees with me, and hasen't banned my game because of loli/shota content. If you don't like my models, then just don't play the game.
 
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Yes, the pregnancy is mandatory in the Xmas event, but it doesn't have any ramifications in the actual story. It plays out more like a dream where none of your actions have consequences. And if pregnancy isn't your kink, then the entire Xmas event is skip-able. So when the prompt comes up, just choose to skip it.
I'm always surprised at the amount of kink-shamers there are on an adult website, where you can choose whatever you want to play and whatever you want to avoid. Not to mention it's all pirated content. It's not like you had to pay for this, and now you need to demand a refund. If there's a kink you just aren't into, just say to yourself, "Nope, not this one." and move on. You don't have to take the extra effort to try to disparage someone else's kink.

Maybe you're an old man who hasn't been around 18 yr olds for a long time. If you don't already have a court ordered ban from going with in a mile of a school, then maybe you should try driving by one sometime, and see just how young the 18 yr old seniors appear. If you're getting your standards from the 30 yr old actors playing teenagers on TV, or the pornstars with the implanted boobs and lips, then you're judgement of what an 18 yr old looks like, is going to be off. I teach a class once a week to 17-18 yr olds, and every one of my models could easily fit into that class. Patreon agrees with me, and has given me the green light to proceed to market my game using their name. F95 agrees with me, and hasen't banned my game because of loli/shota content. If you don't like my models, then just don't play the game.
Well maybe i would skip it, if there was a warning about it beforehand. Come on, dont tell me im the bad guy for not liking to watch at something i dont enjoy. You made an option to skip even at the beginning, but never you memtioned on the screen about kinks to be involved in the event
 

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Well maybe i would skip it, if there was a warning about it beforehand. Come on, dont tell me im the bad guy for not liking to watch at something i dont enjoy. You made an option to skip even at the beginning, but never you memtioned on the screen about kinks to be involved in the event
Yeah, that’s a good point. I’ll be sure to add that to the warning.
 

Brauggi

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Came back for the Christmas update, was not disappointed, loved the pregnant bodymorphs you put together, and despite my best efforts I couldn't even find a single bug (>_<)
Thanks for your hard work Will (^_^)

I agree with Brick, clicking through all the night-time Syndey dialogue gets pretty tedious while grinding other paths, making the night scene dialogue conditional and adding some extra dialogue options to the kitchen-afternoon loop seems like a great way to handle things.

A couple of suggestions i'd add on top of Bricks:
- Bricks idea, but instead of both affection and libido increases in the kitchen, maybe take libido to the bedroom.
Location/Time: Weekday Afternoon Laurens Bedroom.
Trigger: Syndey with affection >= 5 AND anger = 0.
Action: Sydney once again leaves the door unlocked to get changed, present MC with a choice: Use the spycam (for the normal spycam scene), or peek (could re-use the renders from the once-off peeking scene) where Sydney catches the MC again, she's upset but is secretly turned on by it.
Outcome: Sydney anger +5, affection -2, libido +1.
Notes: With Sydney generating anger the MC will need a way to offer her gifts and apologise, Kitchen scene works well for this.

- Advancing time with memes is funny, until you've seen them all, then it's tedious. This is especially true if Camille is left to last where the player needs to advance whole days at a time to progress with her. A quick clean time-skip function would be a great AFF. For individual time segments maybe clicking on the clock in the HUD to skip forward one. As for skipping days there's already the "sleep" option on the bed, instead of "i'm not tired yet" could we just advance time to the following morning?

- Call me a pervert if you want, but I'd personally love more sexual interactions with the Christmas fairy/ghost/angel characters, specifically while they're small. Perhaps put that on the ideas list for the next christmas update?

**Edit** Forgot to say "please" with those suggestions, sorry... (>_<)
 
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SummmerP

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and I missed all that shit... dafuq lol

Guess who'll be getting some quality time tonight?
:sneaky:

Oh yeah...
 
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Pinsel

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I am stuck in this Game.:mad: Cant progress with Lauren anymore. Sidney need too progress at Photoshop, but i only generate Libido and max 10, no Submissive points.
At home i must too talk too Sid, because the Maid uniform, but she never had time for me. So Cami never shows up at home.

And thats is why i hate Sandboxgames in general, stuck after some time becuse of bugs. Have too restart the whole game, but dont have motivation animore of the grinding part. So.... skip and delet.:cry: even it has nice renders and story.
 

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I am stuck in this Game.:mad: Cant progress with Lauren anymore. Sidney need too progress at Photoshop, but i only generate Libido and max 10, no Submissive points.
At home i must too talk too Sid, because the Maid uniform, but she never had time for me. So Cami never shows up at home.

And thats is why i hate Sandboxgames in general, stuck after some time becuse of bugs. Have too restart the whole game, but dont have motivation animore of the grinding part. So.... skip and delet.:cry: even it has nice renders and story.
You'll find the Aunt in the morning in the lounge. You've just got to look around a bit. Don't push the girls too hard in the photo-shoots and their stats will increase. You've got to read the dialogue or you'll miss the hints and directions. There are also hints on the phone, and a walkthrough on the OP.
 
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