VN Ren'Py A Father's Sins [Ch. 30] [Pixieblink]

[WastedTalent]

And you're pissed off venting because... what? Your mother caught you playing the game?
In MY humble opinion, you would be much happier playing something else.

You seriously going to tell me you played 21 updates JUST TO SEE if the mc would finally get laid?

Check the OP's Dev Notes. From day 1 of the game.



The MC does end up with one of the characters in the game, which one depends on a choice players have already made.

I've been racking my brains for the last 12 updates trying to figure out how to how to insert a few extra fap scenes without butchering the story. I've reached out to everyone that helps me out with the game. I've even posted it here a few times.

No one can offer any good way to pull it off. Or even any bad ways. Nada. Zip. Nothing.

But then again, I didn't ask YOU now did I?

All right. So I'm asking now. How should it have been?
If you've got a brilliant 20/20 hindsight idea how the story line should have gone now is the time to cough it up.

And if you answer something stupid like "uh, me I dunno dat's not my job" I'm going to crawl up your internet connection and Joob-Joob your ass.

It could have been done a lot of ways and still made sense... First instance when mc was in the coffee shop as your preview of the spinoff showed... alternate time lines or timelines where the mc was in two places at once... one for the story one for the fun lewd, that could have easily been implemented... instances where mc is talking with the sisters either individually or 2 at a time could have lead to some interesting interactions... agree with the other guy though there really isn't much of a horror aspect here, maybe an action/slasher type feel but even the slasher part is a bit of a stretch... that being said the story is pretty good overall, but making the spinoff a patron only deal is kinda pay wallish... and that's ok a lot of dev's go that route, but there are many players who will turn away because of it. it's like you decided to make a an avn but then went oh btw it's pay per view. I'm not mad at you and not trying to criticize just giving you my observation. It's your business so you should run it as you see fit, but you have to understand for those who stuck around there was a promise that there would be actual lewd in the story even if it wasn't the main focus. a place to add some could also be during training or whatever. There could have been a lull in the events of the story to fit the lewd in. again it's your story and your business not mine just saying there are ways things could have been done. There could have been things during the interactions with the grey lady she could have been a catalyst or something idk but saying there was no good way to add it in seems like you just weren't that willing to try. Either way this is just my thoughts so take them constructively or get mad it doesn't change anything. I don't wish you any ill will and I hope your game does well. EDIT: Btw I came up with all these ideas on the fly as I was writing this I didn't brainstorm at all... not trying to criticize you or whoever you asked for input but I would be shocked if none of these ideas were presented while brainstorming... js.

 

[JenMistress]

Short note:
Updated my WT Mod / port with Mod to the new game version Ep.19.
Info: In the port I included the gallery Mod from here, too.

Huh, I didn't know you made a mod for this. I just finished playing this update, but might have to check out your mod next month for the the next update. Thank you.

 

[LewdLife]

Is there anyone getting Trojan alert after installation virus scan for apks in the Android?

Or is it just me?

 

[cxx]

Is there anyone getting Trojan alert after installation virus scan for apks in the Android?

Or is it just me?

false pos.

 

[Deleted member 4732802]

Is there anyone getting Trojan alert after installation virus scan for apks in the Android?

Or is it just me?

Try KoGa3's android port.

 

[Pixieblink]

It could have been done a lot of ways and still made sense... First instance when mc was in the coffee shop as your preview of the spinoff showed... alternate time lines or timelines where the mc was in two places at once... one for the story one for the fun lewd, that could have easily been implemented... instances where mc is talking with the sisters either individually or 2 at a time could have lead to some interesting interactions... agree with the other guy though there really isn't much of a horror aspect here, maybe an action/slasher type feel but even the slasher part is a bit of a stretch... that being said the story is pretty good overall, but making the spinoff a patron only deal is kinda pay wallish... and that's ok a lot of dev's go that route, but there are many players who will turn away because of it. it's like you decided to make a an avn but then went oh btw it's pay per view. I'm not mad at you and not trying to criticize just giving you my observation. It's your business so you should run it as you see fit, but you have to understand for those who stuck around there was a promise that there would be actual lewd in the story even if it wasn't the main focus. a place to add some could also be during training or whatever. There could have been a lull in the events of the story to fit the lewd in. again it's your story and your business not mine just saying there are ways things could have been done. There could have been things during the interactions with the grey lady she could have been a catalyst or something idk but saying there was no good way to add it in seems like you just weren't that willing to try. Either way this is just my thoughts so take them constructively or get mad it doesn't change anything. I don't wish you any ill will and I hope your game does well. EDIT: Btw I came up with all these ideas on the fly as I was writing this I didn't brainstorm at all... not trying to criticize you or whoever you asked for input but I would be shocked if none of these ideas were presented while brainstorming... js.

I don't mind critique. I've always appreciated and encouraged suggestions. Hell, I've often ASKED for them.
And I'm actually fine with people trying the game out and not enjoying it. I understand it's not going to be for everyone.

But that post just rubbed me the wrong way. The guy was all pissed off because he's been playing for the last 19 updates and hasn't been able to pull a wank with it? The rest of the post is simply him justifying his outrage.

alternate time lines or timelines where the mc was in two places at once... one for the story one for the fun lewd, that could have easily been implemented...

Yes, that could work. AFTER the mc has learned about the alternative realities and the possibility of exploring them. How could I explain that away before the concept has been properly introduced in the game? It isn't until chapter 18/19 that all the lore pertaining to the ability of "walking the paths of futures past" come together.

but making the spinoff a patron only deal is kinda pay wallish

Uh, available at no extra cost to patrons of the game. Just like my older games the Prof, Prof II and Joob-Joob.

lewd in the story even if it wasn't the main focus. a place to add some could be during training or whatever.

Yeah, that's already in the works. The MC hasn't actually started training with the girls yet. But thanks for the suggestion.

There could have been a lull in the events of the story to fit the lewd in.

There could have. I've honestly been so focused on moving the main story ahead I hadn't considered spinning off story line arcs. But a little side trip with some of the women is a great idea.

I think there's a place in the game for that in the future. Mind if I use it?

And thanks for the suggestions.

 

[WaltS]

Immer diese schwachsinnigen Gangster Stories

Mate, this is an English-language board.
Please use Google translate or Deepl and don't post in other languages.

Google translate wishes to add:
Kumpel, das ist ein englischsprachiges Forum.
Bitte verwenden Sie Google Translate oder Deepl und posten Sie nicht in anderen Sprachen.

 

[moskyx]

It's funny because I didn't think anyone could be playing a game with a not-so-good story and badly composed renders for 21 months just because the dev made a vague promise of throwing in some lewd scenes in the future. But since he's part of a dev team, I took a look at their work. And hey, I'll admit that now it's even funnier to see him criticize a spin-off 'game' with lewd scenes that don't fit the actual game's narrative, because I saw that the development team this guy is part of has just released a 'fantasy scenes compilation' last month made of... well, lewd scenes that didn't fit their actual game's narrative, I guess? For the record, I've never played MrDots games because a quick glance at their art and the game's premise was enough for me to know their games wouldn't be of my liking, so I just moved on -I guess they are good enough for many people, but I won't waste my time playing something I suspect I won't like. That's why I'm having a hard time understanding how someone can keep following a game that is not delivering what they seek for 20 months in a row and suddenly act so enraged against a fellow dev who's barely making a fraction of what he's earning. Not cool at all.

 

[Éama]

Just keep doing what you are doing. I enjoy this VN immensely.

 

[WastedTalent]

I don't mind critique. I've always appreciated and encouraged suggestions. Hell, I've often ASKED for them.
And I'm actually fine with people trying the game out and not enjoying it. I understand it's not going to be for everyone.

But that post just rubbed me the wrong way. The guy was all pissed off because he's been playing for the last 19 updates and hasn't been able to pull a wank with it? The rest of the post is simply him justifying his outrage.



Yes, that could work. AFTER the mc has learned about the alternative realities and the possibility of exploring them. How could I explain that away before the concept has been properly introduced in the game? It isn't until chapter 18/19 that all the lore pertaining to the ability of "walking the paths of futures past" come together.


Uh, available at no extra cost to patrons of the game. Just like my older games the Prof, Prof II and Joob-Joob.


Yeah, that's already in the works. The MC hasn't actually started training with the girls yet. But thanks for the suggestion.


There could have. I've honestly been so focused on moving the main story ahead I hadn't considered spinning off story line arcs. But a little side trip with some of the women is a great idea.

I think there's a place in the game for that in the future. Mind if I use it?

And thanks for the suggestions.

Feel free they were just ideas off the top of my head and I would be glad to try offer input if you feel it would help. as I said I have no animosity here and I do like the story so I wouldn't have a problem trying to help but at the same time I don't want to overstep as the creative process here belongs to you. But yeah I can join your discord and we could discuss if you like up to you.

 

[hrimthyrs]

But since he's part of a dev team, I took a look at their work.

Holy moly. I got as far as "...it's a completely boring BS in my humble opinion", rolled my eyes, and scrolled on, so I missed that he's part of another dev team. That's a level of professionalism that deserves a place on my ignore list. Might explain why I've never been able to get into that studio's games despite trying repeatedly if their idea of a good story excludes this game.

 

[etool]

LOL at 'walls of text' to complain about a game you get for free, and even if you are a supporter, no need to cry about it just stop supporting it

Pixieblink ..... keep up the good work, some of us truly enjoy this title, the renders are good and the story is compelling enough to want to look for more

the complainers need to realize not all games are not for them, there are tons of games I do not like, even more I simply do not bother with, based on the tags and other reasons

I do not see the point of making walls of text to cry about something you did not need to download .... unless there is some 'personal' aspects between the dev and the critic

Pixie, keep being you, ignore the hate, some of us do like this game just the way you envisioned it, keep going

 

[Ivan the soso]

He has ring...Ring needs recharging sometimes quickly...Doing a little naughty to stop evil...

 

[Pixieblink]

He has ring...Ring needs recharging sometimes quickly...Doing a little naughty to stop evil...

Now THAT is an interesting idea! It honestly never occurred to me.
Thanks for sharing it.

 

[cxx]

Now THAT is an interesting idea! It honestly never occurred to me.
Thanks for sharing it.

seriously?

he charges it by doing good deeds so why not having good time with girls?

 

[Pixieblink]

seriously?

he charges it by doing good deeds so why not having good time with girls?

Just didn't. Seems obvious now though doesn't it?
A serious case of 20/20 hindsight vision.

 

[Dark Prince 19]

Just didn't. Seems obvious now though doesn't it?
A serious case of 20/20 hindsight vision.

Lol I would love to see the reaction of lady who walks the grey on this new approach to charge the ring lmao

Though in my personal opinion the alternate timeline thing of what could have happened makes much more sense, in that way atleast you can go all in on story in one game and all in on the fap elements in another, dunno how hard will it be for you to manage your workflow though but I trust your quality to be good so guess that's good enough for me!

Thanks for reading Dev, best wishes for ahead

 

[Coaxmetal]

Just didn't. Seems obvious now though doesn't it?
A serious case of 20/20 hindsight vision.

That’s really common so don’t beat yourself up about it. Fresh “eyes” see so much clearer.

The ring could also have a “desire aura” which gets stronger the emptier it is. Makes the girls initiate situations, so the mc doesn’t need to let them know it is in need of charging (or ask for it). Could get some levity also from the situation.

 

[moskyx]

Having the ring charged by having sex would be like the cheapest trope ever (in fact, I thought this idea was one of the first discarded ones as it sounds like the most obvious setting for a porn game). Also, it assumes having a good time with girls is doing a good deed, which would need an explanation since sex is not something they seem to need: Maddie needed a roof for the first night, Sadie needed a job, her mom needed some money, even Danny needed her tips, and all of them appreciate some kind words (I'm just stating the main choices that led to a ring's charge). Who needs sex, though? And, more importantly, it does not exactly solve the main problem: when and how do you fit those scenes in the current narrative?

 

[Dark Prince 19]

Having the ring charged by having sex would be like the cheapest trope ever (in fact, I thought this idea was one of the first discarded ones as it sounds like the most obvious setting for a porn game). Also, it assumes having a good time with girls is doing a good deed, which would need an explanation since sex is not something they seem to need: Maddie needed a roof for the first night, Sadie needed a job, her mom needed some money, even Danny needed her tips, and all of them appreciate some kind words (I'm just stating the main choices that led to a ring's charge). Who needs sex, though? And, more importantly, it does not exactly solve the main problem: when and how do you fit those scenes in the current narrative?

Quite true, I think Jehannes would pull out her sword to cut something if someone talks about sex at the current moment, but yea jokes aside things are so intense in the Vatican and Sanctuary that sex is the last thing on anyone's mind to be real