VN Ren'Py A Foreign World [Ep. 5.5] [HighbornTiger]

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JJohns2049

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HighbornTiger wrote about that in his discord View attachment 3981721
TLDR: pregnancy talk will happen, sex with big belly woman not in a foreign world
Exactly what I don't like, all those swollen bellies half way during the game. Woman when not fat, at least my woman, had the most beautiful body I could imagine, all the right curves, beautiful flat belly, a joy to watch in the nude. And then after the kids, she got a c-section cut. I hate those cuts. I see them sometimes with porn stars, it doesn't look good. But then it's my woman, so I don't mind of course, and it's been > 20 years, we can't stay young and beautiful forever.

It's also a burden on DEV, because he needs to create 2 versions of a render for ever pregnant girl, what about multiple girls in 1 render, where ever girl can have 2 options, that will create unmanageable long update delays.

Of course if the game ends, and they all get pregnant in the end or have a kid, in a future picture, that's fine of course. We will need some kind of nice ending, this could be one of them.
 

moskyx

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Not a rework, and having a healer is also mentioned by mc to fiona, so that part is clear and healing her will probably happen in a following chapter. Only the phone call with her father seemd strange as he hinted that mc could have said some things to fiona and she would have come back but he didn't even know why she left as we find out later.
Maybe her dad doesn't know the reason why Fiona left and just assumed the MC did something wrong or could've done something more to keep her by his side, as in an ordinary couple's fight. Considering she just left out of the blue and didn't said why until she eventually came back, I think it's plausible she didn't informed her dad.
 
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Duce3227

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Maybe her dad doesn't know the reason why Fiona left and just assumed the MC did something wrong or could've done something more to keep her by his side, as in an ordinary couple's fight. Considering she just left out of the blue and didn't said why until she eventually came back, I think it's plausible she didn't informed her dad.
I guess you are right. It could be that the father assumed they had a fight/argument and he could have said something and didn't know that his daughter just left one day without saying anything.
 

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Hey everyone,

I hope you're doing great. ^^ Aurora also hopes you're doing great. She is clearly in a good mood. Her give away is that her eyes aren't on fire.

Yesterday, I set up a lot of renders + 2 short animations. My computer rendered for about 16 hours straight. Mind you, I have an RTX4090 and the rest of this machine isn't half bad either. It's kind of crazy that it still took 16 hours (I made a mistake and it could have been done quicker, Oops)

Anyway. I'm now at 133 images + 2 animations. If I hadn't added some stuff, I would be close to done with this update. And if I hadn't gone back and ganched around 50 images + a couple animations (everything that included Monique and/or Nathaniel), then I would also be close to finishing this update.

Sucks...

Full disclosure. I'm heading into a second exam phase (Since the first one wasn't enough...). My lecture break (Not sure what it's called in english, here it's Semesterferien) didn't feel like a real break. There were lots of things to do. Working on A Foreign World these past two weeks were better, but still not what I would call relaxing.

It's going to get better soon.



Today I perfectly experienced two scenarios that motivate me to write a story. Let me tell you about both. Appart from creating stories, I also like to consume stories. They don't have to be perfect. They don't have to be the greatest piece of literature ever written. The opposite actually. I often seek stories that hit certain emotions. I like it when an author gives me an interesting spin on common tropes. And sometimes I just want something calm and relaxing. For example I enjoyed a story like , but also .

I once again tried to find a story that I could relax to. I felt like experiencing some romance slice of life, maybe with a fantasy element or some cool spin. I started two stories, and both sucked ass. The first had potential, but instead of focusing on a love interest, the story dived into countless stupid (literally stupid) revenge plots. Also the MC could do anything, never failed, and had powers that had no connection to the actual story and only made the MC more powerful (in a medival world without fantasy elements, where he alsready had every advantage)

^^ I gave it a while but this story sucked

The second story was about the trope of the underappreciated boyfriend that gets stood up before the altar, and then marries his billionair waifu which loves and appreciates him more than that other women ever did. Well... I've been itching to write such a story myself, but I also like to read them. I even consumed tzhese kinds of stories that were clearly written for a female audience. I like these kinds of stories and I put up with a lot because face it many of them aren't that good. Often they rely mainly on rage bait.

This one had a somewhat promising start. Then out of nowhere a "system" appeared, which handed out his billionair waifu as a reward. I sat there thinking "Fuck you! What is this?" The reason why I like these stories is partly because the MC is underappreciated and even though he has some skills (even if they are average), he deserves better than a girl who abondons him for superficall reasons. And then he can SHOW that he is in fact a GOOD PERSON that is DESERVING OF LOVE. And it's not just that GOD FEELS GENEROUS and gives the mc A WIFE that wouldn't even think about him as a suitable partner if he was the last man on earth.

I don't know... I read these stories and I think I could do a better job. Last week I also had a moment that made me realize that I still had a long way to go as a writer, but I could easily do a better job than these two.

And once again I wanted to write something.



Now, this first scenario that gets me in a writing mood took longer to explain than I though. I'm going to tell you the other ting next time.

Anyway. I try to get this next update out soon. My last exam is in about a month. Afterwards I have more leeway since I won't have to attend lectures this next semester.

Keep your eyes open for future updates.

Until then, Enjoy!
 

JJohns2049

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Anyway. I'm now at 133 images + 2 animations. If I hadn't added some stuff, I would be close to done with this update. And if I hadn't gone back and ganched around 50 images + a couple animations (everything that included Monique and/or Nathaniel), then I would also be close to finishing this update.

Sucks...

Full disclosure. I'm heading into a second exam phase (Since the first one wasn't enough...). My lecture break (Not sure what it's called in english, here it's Semesterferien) didn't feel like a real break. There were lots of things to do. Working on A Foreign World these past two weeks were better, but still not what I would call relaxing.

It's going to get better soon.
I'm sad we have to wait... But good luck on you second exam phase...
 

dpx79

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Think they mean the wait for update. but good luck on exams. also love LN for inspiration they do have some good ideas and plot twists.
 

Elduriel

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The plot: shag the girls in no particular order or die at the hands of the super strong kid from another world.



There is literally nothing about dreams in there ... just a slow moving armageddon game with a pacing problem.
I think there is a dream/daydreaming sequence or two about Fiona in there
 

moskyx

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I think there is a dream/daydreaming sequence or two about Fiona in there
The MC can also fantasize about Sue, Tracy, and Esther. It's a compromise solution from the dev due to the lack of sex in the first chapters while the MC is still reluctant to take advantage of these women -which is logical for this MC, just not porn-logical to many players.
 
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HighbornTiger

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Exactly. Initially, the first spicy scene was in Ep2.5, where MC finally sleeps with Sue (the water girl). That was around two hours into the story. But before giving in, the MC was already tempted more than once. Since I didn't portray his feelings very well, and since it was a good opportunity to add more spicy scenes, I added these fantasies MC can think about before the first sex scene.

I try to show his state of mind. For example, there is the scene with Esther where he thinks about how he could misuse his power if he wanted to. And there is also a memory scene where he has sex with Fiona (his fiance), which adds to the story by showing parts of their relationship.

You could say that the fantasy about Tracy in the hallway, and Sue in the shower are just fanservice, but they portray that MC was still affected by their actions.
 

LordWanze

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Exactly. Initially, the first spicy scene was in Ep2.5, where MC finally sleeps with Sue (the water girl). That was around two hours into the story. But before giving in, the MC was already tempted more than once. Since I didn't portray his feelings very well, and since it was a good opportunity to add more spicy scenes, I added these fantasies MC can think about before the first sex scene.

I try to show his state of mind. For example, there is the scene with Esther where he thinks about how he could misuse his power if he wanted to. And there is also a memory scene where he has sex with Fiona (his fiance), which adds to the story by showing parts of their relationship.

You could say that the fantasy about Tracy in the hallway, and Sue in the shower are just fanservice, but they portray that MC was still affected by their actions.
And the best thing is: all those dream scenes are skippable. Especially the finance ones.
 

OhGodNotAgain

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So far 5 girls asked the MC to have sex with them, and yet the MC fucked only one of them and regrets it, while in the meantime he fantasize about having sex with all of them. I don't get it, honestly.
I'm kinda glad he's not just a horndog that thinks with his dick and fucks anything with a pussy. He doesn't constantly act on his fantasies because he cares about his fiancé. Way too many cumbrain mcs on this site.
 
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HighbornTiger During the Explaining Nuclear Weapons Scene with the girls, it may have been more impactful to tell Aurora that its not the fire that makes them inherently dangerous but the invisible radiation and that the one in the video isnt even the largest mentioning the Tzar that can take out a half a continent.
 
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