A few points:
1. I think you did a "Somehow Palpatine returned" with that introduction. How? Why? Where? If you present a changed world then you need to establish how it was changed from the start, or if that's the default for the character then slowly peel it back like an onion. To me it feels like you're trying to do a bit of both and failing at both.
2. Changing MC's name is pretty standard unless you have a VERY good reason not to
3. All games have a content focus, such as futa in a futa game etc, but beyond that content should be optional unless required by the story.
4. Some games have great porn, others have a great story. Few can do both well. You might need to decide on what to focus your efforts on.