Ren'Py Abandoned A Game of Words [v0.1.6] [GAON]

[kokoadict]

It would be good to revamp that game overview a bit.
Also, check your tags ("genre", for example "Romace." sounds a bit strange).
Not sure if "Decision taking" should be listed as a separate tag.
Adding planned tags, would be preferable as well...
And if the game is planned as sandbox, VN or KN (with decisions taking )...?
Anyway, good luck with your project/game!

p.s.
based on that third OP preview, you have to be one of those supporting popular trendy movement #tinydicksmatter

Probably just a bad angle...

 

[Walter Victor]

Give me a reason to download your game. You must have some idea of where your game is going and the tags that you have planned.

If you don't...

 

[kokoadict]

Give me a reason to download your game. You must have some idea of where your game is going and the tags that you have planned.

If you don't...

The game is based on 3 different paths, 2 bigs and 1 short, deppending on the path u choose, you meet different people, and from the skeleton of the story i have, there is no plan to merge the paths into a general one, so different paths means different endings.
The game last 1 week, the first day is when you choose where to go.
Pls let me know if this don´t responds you.

 

[Crow Armbrust]

THX

 

[Walter Victor]

The game is based on 3 different paths, 2 bigs and 1 short, deppending on the path u choose, you meet different people, and from the skeleton of the story i have, there is no plan to merge the paths into a general one, so different paths means different endings.
The game last 1 week, the first day is when you choose where to go.
Pls let me know if this don´t responds you.

Okay, that gives me a clue as to the scope of the game. But if you don't intend to reveal future tags, I'll just stand by until the game progresses and people can report what's in it. Not gonna reject it outright, but I'm not gonna download it yet, either.

I hope good fortune smiles on you and your game. Peace.

 

[Takkertje]

Got a gut feeling this isn't gonna last long.
Too much criticism and commentary from dev that the 'game' hasn't got his main attention.
Maybe 1 or 2 updates/bugfixes and then poofffff.

 

[kokoadict]

Got a gut feeling this isn't gonna last long.
Too much criticism and commentary from dev that the 'game' hasn't got his main attention.
Maybe 1 or 2 updates/bugfixes and then poofffff.

I hope not, my goal is to upload an update every week or so. Im having so much fun doing the game.

 

[myuhinny]

Third screenshot looks more like the MC just noticed he has a dick or he's about to slap it for being bad.

 

[kokoadict]

Third screenshot looks more like the MC just noticed he has a dick or he's about to slap it for being bad.

Will try to make them better next time.

 

[kokoadict]

Im redoing all the renders and upgrading the quality of them. Will update in 2 days or so.

 

[Paul Newmon]

Just hoping to see it be released for Mac OS, so I can play on my MacBook Pro.

 

[kokoadict]

Just hoping to see it be released for Mac OS, so I can play on my MacBook Pro.

You can download it now my friend, let me know if you see any error. First upload to mac.

 

[kokoadict]

When I am choosing to go to company I am getting error. Attaching the traceback file for you.

Hi Vaibhav, thanks for trying the beta. At the momment, the company path is not done, im focusing on the university one. You can check the changelog of the updates to see when its avalible. But i can tell you that it will porb be on 2 updates. Again, thanks for giving a chance to the game.

 

[bruce555]

If I choose go to the company it gives me this error.

 

[bruce555]

Sorry, but Maya has a boyfriend and MC seems to have an interest in her, this gives me NTR feelings, I hope I'm wrong.

 

[kokoadict]

Sorry, but Maya has a boyfriend and MC seems to have an interest in her, this gives me NTR feelings, I hope I'm wrong.

You are wrong, no worries.

 

[Arrdvark]

kokoadict If you don't want to keep answering the same questions over and over, you need to add more information about future tags (harem, romance, etc.) and your plans for the game (no NTR, multiple paths) to the OP.

Good luck!

 

[kokoadict]

kokoadict If you don't want to keep answering the same questions over and over, you need to add more information about future tags (harem, romance, etc.) and your plans for the game (no NTR, multiple paths) to the OP.

Good luck!

Thanks for the advise, will do it soon

 

[kokoadict]

If I choose go to the company it gives me this error.

Hi Vaibhav, thanks for trying the beta. At the momment, the company path is not done, im focusing on the university one. You can check the changelog of the updates to see when its avalible. But i can tell you that it will porb be on 2 updates. Again, thanks for giving a chance to the game.

 

[BarbarrossaNA]

I know it's a first attempt.. but two of the three paths shouldn't end with error screens.. Give me a black ending screen.. or revert it back to the main screen. The renders are ok.. the english version needs somebody who actually speaks the language to proof it for you.. All in all.. uh.. well.. at least it's not a complete dumpster fire.