Ren'Py A Home in the Desert [v0.4.5] [Misarmor]

[forgetmaster]

Personal Opinion

Pros:

• Amazing Models all babes are hot af.
• Futa MC, very rare in VNs
• Loved the "Motion Sensor" to know where everyone is, saved a lot of time.

Cons:

• Too Grindy, seriously, cut it down
• Next to no sex
• days are repetitive, need filler events to spice things up.
• Story feels slow and linear

Potential Additions:

• Can go wild with kinks and taboos, use the basement, tie your slut milf, breed and milk her ass...ETC
• Side quests that unlock new scenarios or characters

 

[Misarmor]

Personal Opinion

Pros:

• Amazing Models all babes are hot af.
• Futa MC, very rare in VNs
• Loved the "Motion Sensor" to know where everyone is, saved a lot of time.

Cons:

• Too Grindy, seriously, cut it down
• Next to no sex
• days are repetitive, need filler events to spice things up.
• Story feels slow and linear

Potential Additions:

• Can go wild with kinks and taboos, use the basement, tie your slut milf, breed and milk her ass...ETC
• Side quests that unlock new scenarios or characters

Sorry, but this is partly why I can't take the "grind" criticisms seriously. Currently, if you work for a full day on Alice's laptop (graphic design job), even of the first level, you get a few hundred dollars, lol. I increased the income greatly in 0.4.1 to make up for the current lack of fun ways to make money. That's not groceries money for a day, but rather, for a few months .
I'm not going to argue with the lack of sexy events throughout the day, that's a work in progress, but the money grind?
If you could explain to me why you felt the need to work and buy groceries every day, that would be awesome. Thank you

Reading further into the review, I should tell you that the sisters don't actually have sex yet. It's a dream MC has after they tease her in the living room.

Regarding your "potential additions" section, I already teased the fact that some quests will now unlock new scheduled events, or branchings within those.
See this progress report where I talk about that in more detail:

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[cain7]

Personal Opinion

Pros:

• Amazing Models all babes are hot af.
• Futa MC, very rare in VNs
• Loved the "Motion Sensor" to know where everyone is, saved a lot of time.

Cons:

• Too Grindy, seriously, cut it down
• Next to no sex
• days are repetitive, need filler events to spice things up.
• Story feels slow and linear

Potential Additions:

• Can go wild with kinks and taboos, use the basement, tie your slut milf, breed and milk her ass...ETC
• Side quests that unlock new scenarios or characters

It's a work in progress. Dev said it from the beginning - it's not a VN where you just hold CTRL and skip to sex stuff. It's more of a "Work for the reward" type of game, don't you agree? I think this is a solid foundation, I like the build up - even with movies, if you cannot connect to characters someway, you just get annoyed and skip to sex stuff.

I have a feeling the dev will be rolling out the sultry stuff soon.

 

[forgetmaster]

First of all, thanks for taking the time to address my feedback and review, most devs dont do that or just irrationally disregard the feedback, it’s good to know you’re actively working on balancing things because I love the setting and the potential of your work.

Sorry, but this is partly why I can't take the "grind" criticisms seriously. Currently, if you work for a full day on Alice's laptop (graphic design job), even of the first level, you get a few hundred dollars, lol. I increased the income greatly in 0.4.1 to make up for the current lack of fun ways to make money. That's not groceries money for a day, but rather, for a few months .

I'm not going to discuss the lack of sexy events throughout the day, that's a work in progress, but the money grind?
If you could explain to me why you felt the need to work and buy groceries every day, that would be awesome. Thank you

The grind wasn't necessarily about the money, but felt like a monotonous process with no reward in the form of interesting gameplay or sexual events, which is why I was critical of it rather than the money per se.
The 3 levels just make the player wanting to work more hours and spend less time interacting with the girls. My first impulse was to binge through the work tasks so that I can get more reputation, to then work more, to get more money.
Since I am aware that these events are still in the early stages of development, I look forward to seeing how they develop in further updates.

Reading further into the review, I should tell you that the sisters don't actually have sex yet. It's a dream MC has after they tease her in the living room.

I kept that in mind when I say there is lack of actual progression in that department, I don't like to compare games and their feature with one another, but most games which have the "Boner Meter" use normal daily interactions to build up the cum stress, and in this case where the MC is Futa the bar should literally raise.
Ultimately I am just saying the sexual encounters are less that presumed for the setting of the game, but I respect that you don't wanna discuss about the lack of scenes as it takes the most time.

Regarding your "potential additions" section, I already teased the fact that some quests will now unlock new scheduled events, or branchings within those.

That's great to hear

 

[forgetmaster]

It's a work in progress. Dev said it from the beginning - it's not a VN where you just hold CTRL and skip to sex stuff. It's more of a "Work for the reward" type of game, don't you agree? I think this is a solid foundation, I like the build up - even with movies, if you cannot connect to characters someway, you just get annoyed and skip to sex stuff.

I have a feeling the dev will be rolling out the sultry stuff soon.

Sure, I get that it’s a “work for the reward” type of game, and I’m all for meaningful build-up.
But there’s a fine line between engaging progression and dragging it for little to no reward.
All I wanted to point out that there has to be a balance, and it's better when the scales are on the reward side than the grind side.

I’m hopeful that as the dev continues to expand on the content, we’ll see more of those sultry moments that really bring everything together. I really wanna see the kinks explored more, I wont mind Riley turned into a complete OF whore and getting DP'd by MC and Eve's Futa monsters.

 

[SERAFIM1986]

people 's question ... how do I complete the quest. make room repairs for all the girls in the house .. What should I do for this?

 

[SERAFIM1986]

what should I do in this part? Cooking lessons there is nothing new anymore except how ms can now cook dinner herself.. But what do I need to do?

 

[SERAFIM1986]

What should I do with these quests and how can I solve them? I don't understand what to do or how to do it. Who can explain?

 

[forgetmaster]

people 's question ... how do I complete the quest. make room repairs for all the girls in the house .. What should I do for this?

Progress on the other quests, it will happen eventually, or after few days are passed and you have enough money.

 

[kenpachi666]

So, more that 2 years later still no sex and just stupid grind? Nice. Just what i want in my porn game