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VN Ren'Py Abandoned A Kinky Couple [v0.01] [Ghoct]

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Planned content TAGS: Anal sex, Ahegao, BDSM, Big Tits, Big Ass, Creampie, Exhibitionism, Female Domination, Futa/Trans, Group sex, Groping, Handjob, Harem, Humiliation, Interracial, Lesbian, Male Domination, Masturbation, Milf, Multiple Penetration, Multiple Protagonist, Sex Toys, Slave, Spanking, Swinging, Teasing, Titfuck, Urination, Vaginal sex, Twins

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Ghoct

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Wow, i didn't expect this much response so fast, i mean we are on page 2 already and i just uploaded yesterday.
so let me try and answer your questions/remarks.

If it will be similar to "The Adventurous Couple" with a lot of sharing/cuckold/hotwfing scenes, i'm in!
I have not played "The Adventurous Couple", but from what you write about it (sharing/cuckhold/hotwifing) it will not be like it at all. "sharing" yes but only with other woman (as already stated in the game by the wife) that means no hotwifing either, cuckhold maybe but only in the way of MC cuckholding another man. (would be strange for a dominant man to be cuckholded by someone else).
Do you plan on making all kinks optional or just the ones that'd cause a fuss in the comments (swinging, trans, femdom, etc.)?
I don't know yet, but i guess there is no harm in making everything skippable.
That said, when i say skippable i just mean you don't get see the scene but most scenes still "happen" otherwise big parts of the story would not work!
promising tags

hopefully boundaries can be set, content is optional and the loving couple stays that way towards the end of the game.
Yes the content is going to be optional, but as stated above for the story to work at least some scenes have to "happen" even if you don`t see it. But who knows as i learn making this game i might find a way around that. Give me some time.

As for if the loving couple stays together. Yes they do! The whole point is to deepen their relationship, expiriencing new things together, grow even closer. As i stated in the first post it all should lead to a "Happy Harem" not a divorce :). And with "happy" harem i of course mean everybody in it to be happy, that includes the wife.
I hope i could clear this up.
Is this going to be a kinky 'couple' or will the wife spends most of the time cheering from the sidelines? Cause there seems to be a lot of that out there already. Just saying. :)
To be more specific, will the wife have sex with anyone besides her husband?
"Couple" defenitivly! There will be situations where she "only" cheers from the sideline, but most of the time she will be involved, even more than that she often is the driving force of it all.
You say there is a lot of those (cheering from the sidelines) storys already. I honestly cannot remember ever playing one of those but i usually stay away from VN's with the "NTR" tag so...
"To be more specific, will the wife have sex with anyone besides her husband?"
It depends what you mean with sex.
Yes she will have sex with several other woman but not with any other man then the MC.
So if you only consider penetrating with a real cock as sex, then NO.
If you consider cunnilingus, toys, dildos, strap-ons, fingers and maybe even a fist penetrating her as sex then YES.
Wife is not very attractive.
Well everybody is entitled to their own opinion, i for myself think she's beautiful.
But also i'm still new to modeling in DAZ, and i did not want to use the same "very attractive" models that every second VN uses chough Dee cough Lainey cough Leony cough teen Josie cough cough.
Well.......well........Kinky Couple, I like the sound of it :devilish:.
I saw femdom in planed content..........nice :love:
Yes the wife also has a strong dominant side to her, also there will be other dominant women.
That said it will never be the MC on the recieving end, sorry if you were hoping for this!
Femdom is more meant woman to woman and maybe a submissive guy later on, but we will see, it's unfortionatly not very high on my priorities list.
When i see her face, it's not a feeling of realism that i get but a feeling of plastic surgery that went wrong!
Her mouth has something out of this world, maybe alien?
Again i'm still learning, i'm sure it will get better.
Besides its not easy making someone look older with DAZ if you dont put lots of wrinkles and age marks on their face, and she isn't old enough for that yet. I mean i could make her more beautiful but then she looks like she's 20 years old not almost 40.
So yeah i'm still working on figuring that out.
 

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I don't know yet, but i guess there is no harm in making everything skippable.
That said, when i say skippable i just mean you don't get see the scene but most scenes still "happen" otherwise big parts of the story would not work!

Yes the content is going to be optional, but as stated above for the story to work at least some scenes have to "happen" even if you don`t see it. But who knows as i learn making this game i might find a way around that. Give me some time.
Free advice is overpriced but I would be careful about optional content, it's a short step from taking requests for a certain scene to be skippable to demands that alternate scenes be created, eg, a scene with a trans character having a cis variant. It's fine to try and please the audience but remember that this is first and foremost your game :)
 
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Yes the wife also has a strong dominant side to her, also there will be other dominant women.
That said it will never be the MC on the recieving end, sorry if you were hoping for this!
Femdom is more meant woman to woman and maybe a submissive guy later on, but we will see, it's unfortionatly not very high on my priorities list.
I am fine with dominant mc. He doesn't needs to be dominated. You can use other side male characters for that. Or maybe you can do this as a role play.
 
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Ghoct

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Free advice is overpriced but I would be careful about optional content, it's a short step from taking requests for a certain scene to be skippable to demands that alternate scenes be created, eg, a scene with a trans character having a cis variant. It's fine to try and please the audience but remember that this is first and foremost your game :)
Thanks for the good advice!
So yeah, thats basically what i already thought, with "no harm" i meant its easy putting in a choice (or button) to skip content (a scene), but im not gonna rewrite my story. Different variants to the scenes aren't planned for the near future. Maybe after i finished the main story.
Because i'm still learning i already decided to do a rework from the beginning after i finished it, assuming i will be much better at writing and working in DAZ then. And that might be the right time to put in some alternate scenes and/or even endings, but again this is in the far future.
But again thanks for the advice, i really appreciate it!
 

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"To be more specific, will the wife have sex with anyone besides her husband?"
It depends what you mean with sex.
Yes she will have sex with several other woman but not with any other man then the MC.
So if you only consider penetrating with a real cock as sex, then NO.
If you consider cunnilingus, toys, dildos, strap-ons, fingers and maybe even a fist penetrating her as sex then YES.
Thanks for your response. Good luck with your project. :)
 
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Ghoct I get you but you want to use the best assets possible to give your VN the best chance of success possible. Have you seen the number of posts criticising your choice of female MC? It's not too late.
 

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Ghoct I get you but you want to use the best assets possible to give your VN the best chance of success possible. Have you seen the number of posts criticising your choice of female MC? It's not too late.
Lots of people told the Dev to change Myriam in 'Project Myriam', and that game only continues to grow. Not going with the standard five models is a good thing in my opinion.
From a story standpoint, whether other men find her attractive or not won't matter since there's no plan for her to be with other guys. :)
 
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Ghoct

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Ghoct I get you but you want to use the best assets possible to give your VN the best chance of success possible. Have you seen the number of posts criticising your choice of female MC? It's not too late.
eeehm, you mean this staggering 2 or 3 responses out of 23?
I mean i'm always open to constructive critizism, but "yo she ugly" isnt that.
Also i didn't "choose" or buy the female MC asset, i made her myself from scratch (Genesis 8 Female as a base) as with every other char in the game. Thats what i meant with i'm still learning DAZ, her looks will change for the better with time but i'm not gonna switch her out with a completly different char model.
And don't worry i already planned for a MILF with your typical Big Ass, Big Tits, lifted face, botox lips body features! :)
Have a nice day.
 
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Lots of people told the Dev to change Myriam in 'Project Myriam', and that game only continues to grow. Not going with the standard five models is a good thing in my opinion.
From a story standpoint, whether other men find her attractive or not won't matter since there's no plan for her to be with other guys. :)
There must be 1000s of models in the Daz repertoire. As for Myriam, she’s a lot more palatable than Sara. Also Myriam has all the kinks that other games don’t/won’t have so that’s a niche market in itself. Sure the dev is the one who chooses what to use but every single money earning VN I’ve played has a hot female lead. Making porn, especially the CG kind, is not a soul fulfilling job. If the money doesn’t follow the interest wanes off very quickly.
 
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eeehm, you mean this staggering 2 or 3 responses out of 23?
I mean i'm always open to constructive critizism, but "yo she ugly" isnt that.
Also i didn't "choose" or buy the female MC asset, i made her myself from scratch (Genesis 8 Female as a base) as with every other char in the game. Thats what i meant with i'm still learning DAZ, her looks will change for the better with time but i'm not gonna switch her out with a completly different char model.
And don't worry i already planned for a MILF with your typical Big Ass, Big Tits, lifted face, botox lips body features! :)
Have a nice day.
I see now why you’re all bhz over Sara. She’s your creation. I still think she’s the wrong asset.
 

clowns234

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There must be 1000s of models in the Daz repertoire. As for Myriam, she’s a lot more palatable than Sara. Also Myriam has all the kinks that other games don’t/won’t have so that’s a niche market in itself. Sure the dev is the one who chooses what to use but every single money earning VN I’ve played has a hot female lead. Making porn, especially the CG kind, is not a soul fulfilling job. If the money doesn’t follow the interest wanes off very quickly.
I understand where you're coming from, but I don't think most devs do this for the money. If the story is good, it will find an audience. And as someone who has been obsessed with Daz Studio for the last six months, I think I understand where the Dev is coming from. At the end of the day, it's like 'I did this. How cool is that?' The characters become like real family.
 
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I understand where you're coming from, but I don't think most devs do this for the money. If the story is good, it will find an audience. And as someone who has been obsessed with Daz Studio for the last six months, I think I understand where the Dev is coming from. At the end of the day, it's like 'I did this. How cool is that?' The characters become like real family.
Yeah every person’s view is different. As someone who’s been a sidekick to many devs I can assure you that if the money ain’t good the dev loses interest quickly and the updates get further and further apart. Then you have burnouts i.e Gumdrop Icstor ….etc and when the comments become personal attacks and insults the desire to create becomes even less. Making a render in Daz once in a while and making a good quality VN are two completely different things. Write a story, outline the structure , code the thing, produce the renders and pack it all together. Rinse repeat. Try.
 
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JonTommy

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Nice little intro, not sure how the MC is supposed to land a harem even with his wife's help if I read some of it right though. Dude has trouble getting hard and cumming for his wife so she is going to hook him up with other women because his cock is tired of her... what? Are we sure he doesn't just have ED or something? That doesn't read like a man who is going to land multiple women in any way shape or form, him having a gut doesn't help with that image either. Not saying the dude needs to be a body builder but ehhh. Maybe you are setting us up for a Midlife Crisis like makeover of the MC especially with the Trisha preview who knows?

The wife looks good in my opinion, I wish we could've seen more of her body in the preview but its cool, she's not a beauty queen but that's nice really super glad she doesn't look like a bimbo either. Liked the previews of the other women that'll be in the game maybe not so much Lucy though she seems to be the most realistic candidate for MC's harem at this point. Honestly can't see Lemon or her friend hooking up with MC unless they were being paid.

Also the wife says she doesn't want other men which is neat because I don't like when other cocks are involved but that leads me to the trans/futa tag... how's that gonna work exactly? Will they be mtf or ftm? Pre or post op? Will the wife be involved and it doesn't count because she's a she even if she has a dick? I have only played one game that has a ftm trans character (Syke from WVM) so that could be a neat route to take.

Curious to see how this one turns out, will watch the thread.
 
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LGM

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Interesting. I'm on board for now. Excited to see how this develops.

Some people are complaining about the wife. I think she looks good. Don't know what they're on about.

But please, for the love of whoever, proofread the script. It almost feels like you're misspelling as many words as you plausibly can on purpose. (Not an accusation, just a bit of hyperbole for comedic effect.)

And finally, I'd like to request the ability to rename the MC. I'm always a little annoyed when that's not an option, and I doubt I'm the only one.
 

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I like the idea of reinventing their sexuality by forming a harem and while I wouldn't call the wife's face beautiful I don't think she is ugly but I'm not sure about the tags there are at least 5 tags that I don't like and a few that depend on how they are implemented in the game so I think I will wait for a few updates before trying the game or hope that some whos opinion matters to me writes a review.
 

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I mean i could make her more beautiful but then she looks like she's 20 years old not almost 40.
So yeah i'm still working on figuring that out.
Well, so far she looks way more than 40... units of alcohol per week. ;)
 

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Honestly, that intro was unbearable for me. Not really how these types of things are brought up and it's no wonder he can't get off by her for as much as she talks. There was hardly anything remotely sexy about that.
 
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I havent played the game but the name of it and the planned genres of it do make me click the watch button. already tho the renders need work. like.... she looks scary when shes smiling. its like she had an overdose on jokers gas in arkham origins. other then that I havent played it yet so... imma keep an eye on this. looks promising