I just want you to answer something,
Bychipi . How many children does the MC have?
During the party, he says that after the twins, his wife got pregnant again, and that's how his daughter came to be... but less than a minute later, he says Eva is adopted. So, what do we agree on? Is it 3 children or 4?
As for Monica, if she's not an LI, the discussion is closed, although you need some tags, sharing, just to name a one. The only annoying thing is that you gave her so much screen time that she's not an LI. I hope her weight in the story justifies it.