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VN Ren'Py A Man for All [Ep.15] [Venus Waltz]

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Avaron1974

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I love the game and I love the characters but there is one thing that I, personally, thinks needs toning down juuuuuuust a little bit.

I'm replaying so it might be better with later releases but there is far too much Billy talk. I'm on episode 7 now and I found myself doing the one thing I very, very, very rarely ever do and that's skipping conversations.

MC chatting to a girl, i'm wanting to know more about them and progress their story and suddenly he's talking about Billy again.

Nearly every single interaction with Riley is about Billy. Even when it isn't he's mentioned.

To me it seems either the Billy talk needs toning down a tad or the MC needs to fuck him to get it off his chest.
 
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Avaron1974 said:
I love the game and I love the characters but there is one thing that I, personally, thinks needs toning down juuuuuuust a little bit.

I'm replaying so it might be better with later releases but there is far too much Billy talk. I'm on episode 7 now and I found myself doing the one thing I very, very, very rarely ever do and that's skipping conversations.

MC chatting to a girl, i'm wanting to know more about them and progress their story and suddenly he's talking about Billy again.

Nearly every single interaction with Riley is about Billy. Even when it isn't he's mentioned.

To me it seems either the Billy talk needs toning down a tad or the MC needs to fuck him to get it off his chest.
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Huh. I'm not trying to be mean, but for me it was the "comedy" and the "rap". I appreciate the effort, and I get that Venus might have written them badly on purpose, but my face and palm were sore after those scenes.
 
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Huh. I'm not trying to be mean, but for me it was the "comedy" and the "rap". I appreciate the effort, and I get that Venus might have written them badly on purpose, but my face and palm were sore after those scenes.
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Also the Sushi contest. To sum it up, anything related to that competition. The only "not so bad" thing that comes out of that is the "Uptown Maniac", that I still think would be a better handle than "King" for the fights.

Peace :)
 
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FatGiant said:
Also the Sushi contest. To sum it up, anything related to that competition. The only "not so bad" thing that comes out of that is the "Uptown Maniac", that I still think would be a better handle than "King" for the fights.

Peace :)
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I was more surprised by fashion show, as well as the comedy story, looked somehow strange :HideThePain:
 
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FatGiant said:
Also the Sushi contest. To sum it up, anything related to that competition. The only "not so bad" thing that comes out of that is the "Uptown Maniac", that I still think would be a better handle than "King" for the fights.

Peace :)
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'King' always bugs me, there would have to be a thousand better names. But 'Slick' annoys me even more, I find it offensive & demeaning, rather than endearing. I want to punch her every time she calls MC that. (I actually used URM to change it to Dude).
 
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'King' always bugs me, there would have to be a thousand better names. But 'Slick' annoys me even more, I find it offensive & demeaning, rather than endearing. I want to punch her every time she calls MC that. (I actually used URM to change it to Dude).
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I didn't get any demeaning feeling from when she said it, personally. To me, it all depends on how it's being used. The word bitch can be misogynistic, fetishized, or a slang term for a girl's friend. In context here, I never got the impression "Slick" was anything other than her friendly term referencing his responses (regardless of being smoother-talker, joker, or white-knight). I think it's a friendly tease along the lines of, "I like you dude, and keep being yourself, but... you're not nearly as clever as you think you are." Or maybe, "You're all right, but your rizz could use a lot of help." (That said, ofc, in-game he's got a harem, so he's definitely got rizz in the LIs’ views, primarily due to his confidence.) Anyway, that's how I always took it. Shrug.png
 
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I didn't get any demeaning feeling from when she said it, personally. To me, it all depends on how it's being used. The word bitch can be misogynistic, fetishized, or a slang term for a girl's friend. In context here, I never got the impression "Slick" was anything other than her friendly term referencing his responses (regardless of being smoother-talker, joker, or white-knight). I think it's a friendly tease along the lines of, "I like you dude, and keep being yourself, but... you're not nearly as clever as you think you are." Or maybe, "You're all right, but you don't really have any rizz." (That said, ofc, in-game he's got a harem, so he's definitely got rizz in the LIs views, primarily due to his confidence.) Anyway, that's how I always took it. View attachment 3728620
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True, I know it's my problem. I have issues with it (I'm probably the only one). She clearly does not mean it in a negative sense at all. She's being friendly and making a special name just for her for MC. I just don't like it and it grates on me. But I found a solution. So I'm happy.
 
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Does anyone happen to have ep14 for Mac yet?
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I'm working on it...
(uploading it to a cloud storage site, so that I can post the link here, is going very slow...)

Obviously, I play on a Mac, too. Of the many Ren'py games I play, there are a few (including this one) that often don't have a Mac version posted of the latest update of the game. However, I've found that I can download the PC version of the game and then use the Ren'py SDK installed on my Mac to "roll my own" Mac version/distribution from the PC version file. It's actually a pretty straightforward and user-friendly process, IMO.

EDIT:
Here's a GoFile link to it:
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(Maybe a thread moderator/uploader here can update the OP with this, and can upload it to the other cloud host sites and post their links in the OP, as well.)
 
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Avaron1974

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Okay ..... so i'm about to nitpick now.

It's nothing major, no rage or dislike of anything, just a conversation in the game I found amusing.

So set the scene, Harlow and MC doing Lab.

Harlow asks MC if he wants to go Funkburger, she's paying. MC says nah, lets go Midtown Diner for something different ....... and then he orders burgers.


MAKE IT MAKE SENSE......
 
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Avaron1974 said:
Okay ..... so i'm about to nitpick now.

It's nothing major, no rage or dislike of anything, just a conversation in the game I found amusing.

So set the scene, Harlow and MC doing Lab.

Harlow asks MC if he wants to go Funkburger, she's paying. MC says nah, lets go Midtown Diner for something different ....... and then he orders burgers.


MAKE IT MAKE SENSE......
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Funkburger burgers have gherkin. Midtown diner doesn't. ;)
 
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Milton749 said:
Of course. Avaron wanted it to make sense, so I gave him a way to believe in the story once again. :ROFLMAO: :ROFLMAO: :ROFLMAO:
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How very dare you mistake the Resident Lesbian for a dude. Last time I checked, a lesbian is a woman. (To be fair, these days I guess that definition could be debatable by some folks. :rolleyes:) She's the Queen of Snark and one of my F95 homies: now take back the pronoun you used!
 
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Vanessa makes you promise sketchy shit and proceeds to act sketchy as shit when she takes you home.


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She about to create some big drama to increase her social profile, isn't she?
 
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