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HunkyDunx

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VenusWaltz ... only just started playing your novel to the point of the MC returning to the coffee shop after first lab and meeting Harlow. Your timeline at this point needs some looking into. For this day so far, the MC has had a good chat with Billy in the morning, a 15 min bus ride, a meeting with Kate and then doing a 3 hour lab. I would estimate the time being roughly 12-1pm at this point. He takes an hour long but ride back to the coffee shop but arrives at MIDDAY. You then have the MC think... "I get back to the coffee shop with the sun just about to go down." Which should put the time around 6-8pm and the next thought is "The late-night crowd at Billy's is relaxed..."

It's nice to be descriptive but you went through so many time zones in a very short walk from the bus stop into the shop. I'm not trying to be picky and refreshing to see some decent English in a game, just a heads up to pay a little more attention to detail.

Thanks for your efforts though, so far I am enjoying it.
 

Mookys

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Just finished the last update.
The game is nice and the animations are very good.

In my opinion, Erika is the most interesting character at this stage. The relation with Vanessa is complicated but promising.
I'm curious about the punk girl too...
 

texasterry

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So what was the trick to get the scene with just Jordan in episode 8 (I think?)

I'm assuming that it was in the cluster where you could have the threesome with Marisa & Jordan, or just with Marisa alone? Not sure, just guessing...
 

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So what was the trick to get the scene with just Jordan in episode 8 (I think?)

I'm assuming that it was in the cluster where you could have the threesome with Marisa & Jordan, or just with Marisa alone? Not sure, just guessing...
You have to have declined Marisa's offer up to that point and you get an option with Jordan alone after Marisa leaves.
 

yossa999

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You have to have declined Marisa's offer up to that point and you get an option with Jordan alone after Marisa leaves.
Declining Marisa sounds like blasphemy :) Anyway, thanks for the excellent game, VW, the great combination of immersive story, romantic scenes, girls with different personalities, proper amount of lewds and fairly frequent updates.
And why do I have the feeling that these colorful options are not just for a flavor, but the MC is silently collecting his data :)
 

texasterry

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You have to have declined Marisa's offer up to that point and you get an option with Jordan alone after Marisa leaves.
Thanks for the information. Unfortunately, I figured that was probably something like that. Man, that sounds like A LOT of game to be replayed just to get that one scene. I'm sure I'm not alone in NOT turning down Marisa.

Is there some shared saves somewhere? I looked for saves of the latest game with everything unlocked, and didn't see anything. (But to be fair, me and this search engine have a strained relationship at best...) So, is there a mod or something that unlocks all the replays in the gallery? (Then again the gallery might have been a mod too, I don't recall...)
 
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By backbone I mean something like stand up for himself. I mean, take that struck-up bitch Vanessa, even if I choose the "knight" approach, the MC should be more firm with her; or the street fight, even if I choose the red option, there is an inner monologue about right or wrong. Maybe is the writing that is misleading, but sometimes I scream at the screen "DO SOMETHING FOR GOD'S SAKE!".
I honestly don't see what your problem is? Neither from this post nor the ones before.. I actually enjoyed the dynamic between the mc and Vanessa and she's one of my favourites by now lol if you are going straight white knight for everything then you're obviously are gonna miss out. The constant flirting with Vanessa, knowing she is just gonna get 'triggered' is the best part lol
The first fighting scene doesn't really make you feel bad about choosing one or the other, I honestly think the Dev did a very good job with the duality of diplomacy and violence, whilst still crediting you for choosing to remail cool or not take shit. It's very much your choice how you wanna play. That said, if the mc feels like they 'lack backbone', it might say more about your own choices than the game itself. Just my 2cents.
 

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So, I played this game. I loved Vanessa. If you guys have idea of games where we can have similar li's like that of Vanessa... You know she barely shows any emotions but then after meeting our protagonist she changes and starts showing emotions to our protagonist like she's completely in love with our protagonist, possessive, etc, etc. Then do recommend me these types of games.
 

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Anyway, thanks for the excellent game, VW, the great combination of immersive story, romantic scenes, girls with different personalities, proper amount of lewds and fairly frequent updates.
Thanks. I'm trying my best.

Thanks for the information. Unfortunately, I figured that was probably something like that. Man, that sounds like A LOT of game to be replayed just to get that one scene. I'm sure I'm not alone in NOT turning down Marisa.
You're not really missing anything. Everything you see in that scene, is less than what you'd see in the scene with Marisa, it's just Marisa is missing. It's only a one animation quickie. There's only a small minority of people who would turn down Marisa but not Jordan. I assume most would want both or neither. I try to give options for sex when you're not committed.
 

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So, I played this game. I loved Vanessa. If you guys have idea of games where we can have similar li's like that of Vanessa... You know she barely shows any emotions but then after meeting our protagonist she changes and starts showing emotions to our protagonist like she's completely in love with our protagonist, possessive, etc, etc. Then do recommend me these types of games.
any VN with "tsundere" LI (use search for keyword), that's her obvious character archetype
to each their own i guess, never understood appeal of those characters - "wanna play tsuntsun? fine, i have another five girls waiting in line and no patience for your bullshit, you can tsuntsun with your dozen cats how much you want"
 

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any VN with "tsundere" LI (use search for keyword), that's her obvious character archetype
to each their own i guess, never understood appeal of those characters - "wanna play tsuntsun? fine, i have another five girls waiting in line and no patience for your bullshit, you can tsuntsun with your dozen cats how much you want"
Vanessa isn't tsundere because she doesn't have emotional swings. She's just learning to not be so guarded all the time.
 

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I enjoy this game, but I still don't see how this is going to end up a harem game. The characters are all pretty complicated and they don't really have a lot in common with each other. I can see how some might end up a semi harem with Erika and the MC, but I'm confused how people like Vanessa, Riley, your professor, etc could end up in this.
To be fair the Li don't have to get along with each other to be a harem they just gotta like the MC. But that's just me idk.
 
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All right I have to get a few things off my chest while I'm here in chapter 10. I honestly like a lot of slow burn games but I'm going to have to say that Riley and Vanessa are just way too slow for my liking. Frankly speaking it's so slow that despite the MC's flirting attempts, I've pretty much lost all interest in both of them as characters. I haven't played ch 10 completely or 11 but it's honestly gotten to a point where I feel like even if they were lying down in front of me spreadeagle, I wouldn't give a shit anymore.
 
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All right I have to get a few things off my chest while I'm here in chapter 10. I honestly like a lot of slow burn games but I'm going to have to say that Riley and Vanessa are just way too slow for my liking. Frankly speaking it's so slow that despite the MC's flirting attempts, I've pretty much lost all interest in both of them as characters. I haven't played ch 10 completely or 11 but it's honestly gotten to a point where I feel like even if they were lying down in front of me spreadeagle, I wouldn't give a shit anymore.
Would be nice if we could have a bit of revenge somehow. E.g. completely cut Riley off from our lives, and seeing clear regret in her. Would give some long-awaited satisfaction.

But the biggest problem is that after 3 years and over 10 chapters, the expectations from future romantic/lewd scenes with Vanessa and Riley have become huge if they are to justify the waiting time. Such scenes couldn't measure up even for normal characters, let alone ones so reserved and guarded.

All writers make mistakes, and the game has some good content nonetheless.
 

Blernblern

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Would be nice if we could have a bit of revenge somehow. E.g. completely cut Riley off from our lives, and seeing clear regret in her. Would give some long-awaited satisfaction.

But the biggest problem is that after 3 years and over 10 chapters, the expectations from future romantic/lewd scenes with Vanessa and Riley have become huge if they are to justify the waiting time. Such scenes couldn't measure up even for normal characters, let alone ones so reserved and guarded.

All writers make mistakes, and the game has some good content nonetheless.
I completely agree with your post, and yes the game is mostly very enjoyable.
 
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