VN Ren'Py A Mother's Love [Part 1-15 Plus] [OrbOrigin]

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YuNobi1

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jenn20 said:
Any development on the Chloe story in this update
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There is "Chloe story progression" yes, but saying anything more will be spoilerific.

On another note, and speaking of said spoilers the biggest logic problem I have is if you openly break up with Chloe, first why does Hal and Jenny think you're still dating her when the entire school and Heavens family know that the two of you have broken up? Second, and most importantly, why does John blame you for Chloe's kidnapping? An ex-boyfriend is the last person you want to be "guard-dogging" your daughter.
 
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RadicalGuy said:
Stomach flu/food poisoning/stress - there is a few reasons for that. I highly doubt Nicole is pregnant, it's just seem "too convenient" (unless we are close to end, like 2-3 updates).
To be fair, my first though was that Nicole has cancer, but it would be too dark for this game
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You know what I think? I think in Chapter 14 we will find out the truth about Nicole being pregnant or not and it will all depend on not just how many times you cum in her but also telling her that you want to keep the baby or not. I think the dev that will write that if you don't have enough cum points that she had food poisoning or she was stressed due to her guilt about her and the MC. I am sure that John has asked the doctor to give her the DP shot also and I think that depending on if you keep the baby or not and if you didn't cum in her enough then she will get the shot. IF you have enough points and decide to keep the baby then Nicole won't get the shot. The thing is that John doesn't know that the MC knows about the DP shot and therefore IF the MC is present at the time of Nicole getting the shot then he will most likely stop Nicole from getting it and telling her the truth about it. Don't know how many times you need to take that DP shot to be effective or if it is a one time thing or not. I am sure that John would do anything to keep that pregnancy from happening because if word got out that his wife is pregnant with another man's child it would humiliate him and John being always one step ahead of everything he doesn't like to be humiliated especially by some teenager that is having an affair with his wife. I think we may be close to the end considering what fate we saw for Beeman in Chapter 13, I seriously thought that that would have been kept going a little longer and Abigail will be leaving also. Don't know how many Chapters the dev has planned but maybe with John getting outted may be the end of Season 1 and then a Season 2 could be done with the MC and Nicole's life together.
 
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Why the fuck does the mc has to be beaten up by bitchass beeman. I d saved so many choices just to see where would this chloe relationship route go, not to break. The story just fucking went downhill big time.
 
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I just hope in a near future update the MC takes Silvia away from John who I think is the biggest douchebag in the entire game. He's creepy AF and his facial expressions give the heebie-jeebies.
 
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anon1580 said:
Why the fuck does the mc has to be beaten up by bitchass beeman. I d saved so many choices just to see where would this chloe relationship route go, not to break. The story just fucking went downhill big time.
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Because the MC needs to be sympathetic a tiny bit. Despite him being proto-john. MC is such a in general asshole and is upset so many times with the choices he makes. Even when he gets warnings from his bestie.


xtrazacc said:
MC mom is a hotty, incest route should happen
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Probably was suppose to happen, but patreon became real strict. And/or developer has just not been in the mood to make any scenes for her and others. Which is probably the more likely way to go.

White Lamp said:
Any NTR content this update?
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The NTR is dead now.

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nsj said:
The NTR is dead now.
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Almost literally... lol

This update was good. You could always tell this game is written by someone who doesn't speak English as a first language and the story is still great and gripping...Just picture if he spoke it more fluently or had more help on the inside with his grammar... Oscar anyone? lol
 
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Now I am really looking forward to Chapter 14 though my one major disappointment for Chapter 13 was the fact that Silvia didnt read the papers that you printed for her about Malcolm after all the trouble you went to. Another thing that was annoying about Chapter 13 is that it had more interruptible choices then previous Chapters did and by that I mean when you are trying to talk to Silvia about the intruder at Magic Grand, Marilyn interrupts you before you get an answer and then after defending Nicole and John is staring at you and you have the chance to say something you get interrupted by your Dad. Why put any choices in like that if they are just going to be interrupted? It's like those sex scenes that you are about to penetrate somone and then get interrupted and do not get that chance again until much later. It's annoying either follow through with the choice or just dont add it.
 
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YuNobi1

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marvelfreak3000 said:
Definitely a bug where Marilyn brings in the drunk hooker into the classroom even if you arent on the Chloe Is Strange Path
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Apparently the entire point of the hooker isn't Chloe, but Nicole, who smells the perfume if you carry the woman out of Beeman's class.... Of course this doesn't provide any explanation as to WHY MARILYN IS DRAGGING AN UNCONSCIOUS WOMAN AROUND?
 
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