VN Ren'Py Abandoned A New Beginning [v1.0] [Hot Soup Games]

[Pinguino47]

Overview:
A New Beginning is a Ren'py based visual novel where you play an average guy who will be revisiting past relations and beginning some new ones.​

Thread Updated: 2019-09-16
Release Date: 2019-09-16
Developer: Hot Soup Games

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Version: 1.0
OS: Windows, Linux, Mac
Language: English
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[JohnJG]

Nice artwork.

Happy to give this a go. Time to dig in.

 

[rKnight]

Hand drawing art will always be the most appreciated,
as our friend writes above, it's time to dig deep into that blondie or smth like that I understood.

 

[NukaCola]

Nice artwork.

Happy to give this a go. Time to dig in.

So what do you think? Is it any good?

 

[PoyntFury]

"A new beginning is a visual novel where you play an average guy who will be revisiting past relations and beginning some new ones."

Is THIS A PAST RELATIONSHIP?



How the FUCK do you leave a pair of tits like that?

 

[Baharomont]

Overview is Ugliest...
Art is Very Good...
Story... Well... Not Bad...
Genre Tags is... I think is Normal...
At least in 0.10 we have Vaginal Sex, BJ, HJ...

 

[JohnJG]

So what do you think? Is it any good?

It’s not bad.

A good start and maybe still to early to judge, but I like it. Give it a go and see for yourself.

The artwork is definitely a positive quality for it.

 

[ILCjr]

Going to give it a go.

 

[HorizonD]

He does that all the time and nearly all the time a negative commend.

For the game, nice art so far and the story seems ok. Still too early to judge but fake choices which are leading to "Game Over" are pointless and unnecessary. ^^

 

[Moosy]

This is so fucking gorgeous

 

[xmilteach]

Thx..

 

[kymico]

Ummm... nice blonde, let's re-visit this "past relationship".

 

[ILCjr]

I came, I played, I may come back. The blurry background bothers my eyes some, not seriously bad, but I do have to keep rubbing them. The art work is very well done, and the storyline seems good. You need to clean up the grammar though.

 

[RainbowRising]

that art looks really nice, gonna try it

 

[ĐȺɍꝁnɇss]

Who doesn't like quality hand-drawn art. Gonna give this a go and possibly stick around

 

[ThunderRob]

Unless you are 10 to 15 years old i don't understand why would you put review like this. You use colored letters like a teenage little girl and misuse ellipsis and omission every sentence and almost every word like a retard. Also capital letters make no fucking sense.

i wish i could put your cool comment in context but all your quote says is " you are ignoring content from this member" LOL so am assuming its giant font red and green weirdo?

 

[somebodynobody]

Good Art.

No animation.

Loud intro sound. Please remove it or have it play after the player can alter sound levels.

Loud sounds even at half volume.

Girl sounds are not good.

Blurred backgrounds with no foreground to focus on is harsh on the eyes

Too many single sentence text boxes.

Game Overs are fine, but they should make sense. It isn't like the character swore off people forever, just not their Ex who you were just told was extremely hard on him and makes him sad.

A store clerk called a dependant?

The ex doesn't make sense. Supposedly loves you and you are important, but you haven't talked to each other for years.

Time difference in choice. If you go elsewhere you are 10 minutes late, but if you get there early she is 30 minutes late. So really she shouldn't even have arrived by your late time.

Ex shit talks the MC and their life, then the MC is like oh man you are right.

A bunch of engrish and typos. (a few examples with fixes)

You spent here the last three years of your life. : You spent the last three years of your life here.

So now you can call it your home. : So now you call it home.

But the breaking was too much : But the breakup was too much

 

[privitude]

I don't care how hot she is, someone, somewhere, is sick of her shit.

 

[alpharenji]

I love the art look i wish i could find more that look like this one

 

[ThunderRob]

clicks 20 times..maybe next line of text will appear...i hate you.