Carlo S

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This game with two versions, is already in my list of favorites, no wonder, because with characters like these, with a unique story, and very good, and choices, well made, for everyone to play easily, @envixer is making the perfect game.To make a story that shake everyone's feelings, it has to be done very well, or it doesn't work, and this story has awakened my feelings, and many other players too.;););) The characters - Give a look :heartcoveredeyes::heartcoveredeyes:
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You can have a game where the characters think they've got some kind of ancestral curse to dig on incest, you can have a game where your mom starts off lounging around in lingerie that she'd probably have to glue on, and you can maybe have a game where the main character is some kind of respected black-ops badass by the age of twenty-one. Having all three at once shoots suspension of disbelief right in the dick.

If you wanted the dude to be rich for maximum escapist value, he could've just been an app-store douchebag. It'd also be much easier to handle if he was, say, thirty, because at least that gives him time to enter the service, distinguish himself, and get out to join a PMC. You might end up needing to age up the sisters a little, but it's not like you lose anything if they're twenty-somethings.

In a way, though, this is a refreshing problem. Whatever else you can say, this isn't a VN where Insertname V. Thundercock has to grind stat points and money in order to get in bed with every woman in his life. It also isn't a VN that reads like it was ineptly translated from Russian and back again a couple of times before it was uploaded. It's just got more typical story problems.
 

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That's a funny way to describe your meaning: the game is so atypical it's typical in a wholly old way.

I like it, though. It's like the difference between dumb and stupid - one of them can be fun. @envixer has, in my opinion, taken his story seriously enough that it only requires suspension of disbelief, instead of copious amounts of compartmentalization like some other games.
 
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That was quite enjoyable. Engaging linear story with easy to guess right dialog options...which is what i like. I'll definitely check out next update when it's released :)
If i had to critique something then it would be the ridicules motorcycle Anna has (i literally burst out laughing when i saw it x'D) also both the sisters look like they are in their 30s when they should be 22 and 23 but i quess i'll blame that on bad genes from the dad side XD
 

Carlo S

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That was quite enjoyable. Engaging linear story with easy to guess right dialog options...which is what i like. I'll definitely check out next update when it's released :)
If i had to critique something then it would be the ridicules motorcycle Anna has (i literally burst out laughing when i saw it x'D) also both the sisters look like they are in their 30s when they should be 22 and 23 but i quess i'll blame that on bad genes from the dad side XD
I agree with You, the motorcycle, really doesn't have a good look x'Dx'Dx'D, as the game has :):):)
 

hashcheckin

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That's a funny way to describe your meaning: the game is so atypical it's typical in a wholly old way.
That's a good way of putting it. The problems I have are with the basic story structure, rather than the usual hell-brew of typos, bad translation, bugs, bad puzzles (hey, grind 20 stat points with this character via an event that only triggers once every in-game week), bad scripting, and/or the main character being an unrestrained scumbag.
 
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You can have a game where the characters think they've got some kind of ancestral curse to dig on incest, you can have a game where your mom starts off lounging around in lingerie that she'd probably have to glue on, and you can maybe have a game where the main character is some kind of respected black-ops badass by the age of twenty-one. Having all three at once shoots suspension of disbelief right in the dick.
I understand your position about the story structure but I think the amount of coincidences is on par with coincidences that happens in movies (and as a movie buff it's fine by me but to each their own). I really appreciate how all story threads (Incest Family, Father, Black Ops) are all intertwined and feed of out of each other. Also I think they were chosen that way so the characters could have the widest emotion palette available (...which is really interesting sentence to write about a Porn Game :D).

@envixer bloody well job so far on the plotting side (and writing, and dialogue, and renders)! Keep it up :]
 
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This game with two versions, is already in my list of favorites, no wonder, because with characters like these, with a unique story, and very good, and choices, well made, for everyone to play easily, @envixer is making the perfect game.To make a story that shake everyone's feelings, it has to be done very well, or it doesn't work, and this story has awakened my feelings, and many other players too.;););) The characters - Give a look :heartcoveredeyes::heartcoveredeyes:
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Holy cow look at that red dress, :FeelsGoodMan:
 
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