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@Carlo S thanks for the heads up on this game I downloaded it, and will try it out.
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You're not wrong. As far as convenient coincidences go, there really aren't any, because the protagonist more or less did everything from behind the scenes. It's a consistent narrative so far.I understand your position about the story structure but I think the amount of coincidences is on par with coincidences that happens in movies (and as a movie buff it's fine by me but to each their own). I really appreciate how all story threads (Incest Family, Father, Black Ops) are all intertwined and feed of out of each other. Also I think they were chosen that way so the characters could have the widest emotion palette available (...which is really interesting sentence to write about a Porn Game).
This is a different discussion, though. The ridiculous military background doesn't add anything to the rest of it and doesn't really need to be there at all, aside from that it's the source of the main character's PTSD and money. It's also frankly unbelievable that the MC ends up in charge of his own PMC and rich beyond his wildest dreams by twenty-one, especially since the story specifically does not feature him enlisting; he just sort of goes off to the most violent place he can think of and somehow everything worked out.
Like I said, it'd be easier to believe if the dude was even a few years older and had taken a more typical route. "I joined the Army after Dad kicked me out, they sent me to Afghanistan where I saw action, it did my head in but I made some good connections and learned some good skills, and now I run a PMC." Being an elite mercenary commander by the age of 21 is a level of youth worship that's rarely seen outside of particularly poorly researched anime.
It'd be weird and unbelievable if it was the entirety of the story, but hand in hand with the rest, it really trips the bullshit meter. It's well-written, reasonably coherent, consistent, and even occasionally funny, which still puts it head and shoulders above 90% of the market it's in, but man, I have a hard time with that military thing.
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Yep... all those bemoaning the lack of reality or the huge flaws in the story, etc... are all pretty much spot on - but I don't get the impression that this game is a somewhat biographical account of someones real life.
I understand that some people - like those above - need to have some sort of reality check or something when things get far fetched but when it comes down to it, you either ignore those flaws & enjoy the game for what it is or you ignore the game.
Personally, I enjoy the incest kink of the story and look forward to it developing further... I could give two hoots about how "real" it is!
I understand that some people - like those above - need to have some sort of reality check or something when things get far fetched but when it comes down to it, you either ignore those flaws & enjoy the game for what it is or you ignore the game.
Personally, I enjoy the incest kink of the story and look forward to it developing further... I could give two hoots about how "real" it is!
This only seems to happen if the real life of the poster/player has some overlap with a profession or skills in the VN.Yep... all those bemoaning the lack of reality or the huge flaws in the story, etc... are all pretty much spot on - but I don't get the impression that this game is a somewhat biographical account of someones real life.
I understand that some people - like those above - need to have some sort of reality check or something when things get far fetched but when it comes down to it, you either ignore those flaws & enjoy the game for what it is or you ignore the game.
Personally, I enjoy the incest kink of the story and look forward to it developing further... I could give two hoots about how "real" it is!
But they seem to accept most other nonsense in these VN's.........
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Absolutely correct - that's what makes you unique! Just because I can't see that, doesn't make it right or wrong... it's interesting to see all the different perspectives on things. Cheers!!
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I played the game out, but my dumbass will have to start all over again with the next update, I didn't save it before the final scene. :tf:
Oh my my, that Anna, I have a thing for women with short hair and small titties, they make me crazy :heartcoveredeyes::FeelsGoodMan:! The storyline isn't bad its pretty good. It is different from a majority of the Ren'py games. Play is straight forward you dont have to make choices and watch the which direction the game goes. That's probably the one things I do not like about the VN games, the choices, and the fact your just clicking (or you can use the keypad) thru the games.
There's this game, Man Of The House, and Long Live The Princess. But I also started playing those from the beginning of development.
Oh my my, that Anna, I have a thing for women with short hair and small titties, they make me crazy :heartcoveredeyes::FeelsGoodMan:! The storyline isn't bad its pretty good. It is different from a majority of the Ren'py games. Play is straight forward you dont have to make choices and watch the which direction the game goes. That's probably the one things I do not like about the VN games, the choices, and the fact your just clicking (or you can use the keypad) thru the games.
There's this game, Man Of The House, and Long Live The Princess. But I also started playing those from the beginning of development.
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With a lack of good stories, when we can find a game that has everything we hope for, it is always the best option, I tell many brothers about this game, and I say what I really think, a good game with great characters and another good story, the other is DoD, a great game no doubt, incest don't bother me, I don't have preconcept with it
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I totally agree with you, every story has to be fictional, and show all that is possible, the only thing that who writes must be careful is, not to exalt crimes that really harms the dignity, I said before and I will repeat, this game, pleased me because @envixer put everything correctly, some Devs always think that because it is a controversial theme, have to put everything bad in the game, I'm glad that the players have common sense and refuse thisYep... all those bemoaning the lack of reality or the huge flaws in the story, etc... are all pretty much spot on - but I don't get the impression that this game is a somewhat biographical account of someones real life.
I understand that some people - like those above - need to have some sort of reality check or something when things get far fetched but when it comes down to it, you either ignore those flaws & enjoy the game for what it is or you ignore the game.
Personally, I enjoy the incest kink of the story and look forward to it developing further... I could give two hoots about how "real" it is!
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WIth VN games you have to have a good story, I do not care about the 'reality' of the situation. It's an adult game, not a educational novel about life lessons. Its got good graphics, good characters (tho I would love to see Anna butt naked) It's not easy doing 3D, maybe 10-12 years ago I looked into he software and how to render but I never got enough time to see if I could get it. I am metal fabricator give a bunch of metal I'll build you a car, give me a pencil I might as well chew on it, since I cant draw.
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If you give me a pencil, I'll write all day, but if you give me a metal, I'm going to spend all day thinking about what I'm going to do with it x'D, so we are, each one with his specialty and always doing the best
, so when I see a good game, I always try to tell friends , and @envixer is doing this, a great game 
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This game with two versions, is already in my list of favorites, no wonder, because with characters like these, with a unique story, and very good, and choices, well made, for everyone to play easily, @envixer is making the perfect game.To make a story that shake everyone's feelings, it has to be done very well, or it doesn't work, and this story has awakened my feelings, and many other players too.:heartcoveredeyes::heartcoveredeyes::heartcoveredeyes:You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
Undoubtedly brother!
this is a great game!! @envixer did a excellent work developing this game..I like it so far, the writing is good, the dialogues don't sound stilted and disjointed like many VN's, the sideline characters actually seem to have depth and thought in them, which is a nice change. Definitely going to be keeping a wtach out for this one.
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Now, I wait this game in the same expectation, that I've with others great games, looking forward to new versions, it's only possible when the game is really good. Well @envixer keep doing the game, everyone here is waiting, include me
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Hope we get some scenes sleeping in the same bed as mom and sisters maybe even the aunt and twins on top of some orgies with them. Sleeping with a nice woman is always better than alone.
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Probably to avoid patreon's "witch hunt" against this kind of content.
Because Patreon would ban this game in an instant.
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Like i said hope we get this and some ass eating and anal want to fuck them in the ass after i eat it.
Also is there a discord? Oh and sex scenes need to last longer i get it was the MC's first time but the future sex needs to be longer. Maybe have the cousins and Aunt sleep over!
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