I was a fan of the original. this one I am a bit disappointed with the dialog. I find the storyline is fine and fits well with the original story as a continuation, but this new version feel very off and unsettling.
first off, I think my memory is bad but I dont remember him running away at the end and thus makes the beginning so odd to me. I would think it'll be benificial to add a little more to the beginning to add more context. or if I am remembering the first version incorrectly, then let me know, maybe i'll replay it to jog my memory.
the second think I wanted to point out is the dialog felt like it was choppy and bland. it felt like I was listening to robots talk. it felt quite emotionless and very rushed.
like what there is right now, it feels like a good skeleton, you just need to build on it and add the meat to it. not to mention those sex scenes were feeling like they were out of some high school sex ed video from the 90s lol. it was very to the point and no real context. I felt it need some lead up and context and just some meat to the story.
I dont mean to be harsh with my feedback, but I just hope I can like it as much as the original. and I feel right now its a good start, it just need some more work.
