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Ahchi

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Jul 17, 2020
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Can MC have a relationship with Jade and Jenny at the same time or will this affect the relationship with Jenny? Especially in the boutique
Yes to both of them (for now?)
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No, She knows about Jade's needs and (for now ?) is ok with you helping all the girls in the house .
 

bobbo69

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Jun 18, 2017
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I played the Elizabeth path, and let me tell you, it was a very juicy hot scene in her bed :love::love::love: do you have any sex scenes if you're on the Jenny path?
 
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I played the Elizabeth path, and let me tell you, it was a very juicy hot scene in her bed :love::love::love: do you have any sex scenes if you're on the Jenny path?
Yeah it was good, but it get weird when the mc say he want to eat Elizabeth pussy with his cum in there, even Elizabeth give you the look of wtf?
Im afraid for the mc he is follow a weird path
 

ArmoredCascade

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Sep 27, 2018
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I didn't have an issue and used a mod last update. As cruddy as it sounds, maybe hold off until Scrappy does their thing. Sounds like the Gold will have more content anyway
yeah ill wait on Ch 4 Gold i saved when Rebecca was saying goodnight to Val and i tried loaded it up on ch 5 but got an error
 
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JB08

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Still no ch5 beta changelog? How long does it take for a beta update to go gold and the full chapter comes out? If I remember correctly, chapter 4 beta took a few weeks right?
 

Markbestmark

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Still no ch5 beta changelog? How long does it take for a beta update to go gold and the full chapter comes out? If I remember correctly, chapter 4 beta took a few weeks right?
yes, that true. I guess we have to wait few weeks more to get the gold version here
 

Hiotori

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Still no ch5 beta changelog? How long does it take for a beta update to go gold and the full chapter comes out? If I remember correctly, chapter 4 beta took a few weeks right?
I´M also waiting for gold and if i looked right someone mentiond it comes in 2 weeks after beta.
 

flarigand

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This VN have too many unnecessary subplots, many characters, many scenes where the MC is not involved, the script is a disaster, and I think that's where the problem lies, I don't think there is a script as such, i think the author comes up with something at the moment and inserts it into the "story".

Be honest, do any of you know where the story is going, what are the motivations of the MC, what does he paint in it?, i like the visual section, the females design, the ambientation, It irritates me to see so much visual potential accompanied by such a poor narrative, for example, if you are interested in Jenny and Valerie, from the end of chapter 2, you don't interact with them in a relevant way, what is the point of having so many "options", if you are not going anywhere with them.

I don't want to sound like a "hater", I really see potential in this VN, but I think it's drowning in its own plot design errors, i will choose as a positive example chapter 2 of this VN, simplified and focused on the MC and the girls, everything began to fall apart with the plot of the drug traffickers, a mess, from the third chapter, the protagonist is more anonymous, he interacts less and less, his decisions are ephemeral, please a little more coherence, I'm just saying that.

It's simple and I think I speak for a significant portion of people, when you play this VN you want to be with the girls, know their problems, help them, be that kind of fantasy knight, and be in the middle of a coherent plot that integrates you in the organic way, example, that the main story is based on Jenny, the university and what happened to her in her childhood.

In short, you have to include the MC, you have to give prominence to your protagonist, relevance, importance, personality, the story has to have a goal, the MC has to have a goal that goes hand in hand with the story, I am in favor of the dramas, the "slow burn", etc, but it must have coherence, so that it works for me personally, and here things are more and more diffuse and cumbersome.

I'm going to take an example that everyone hates, "Being a DIK", let's be honest, the story of that VN is not the best in the world, it is quite basic and sometimes very cringy, but it has rhythm, coherence, meaning and a clear objective, the MC has options, decisions, and gives the illusion that you're going to get somewhere.
 
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