I have been following this VN since it began, I was delighted with the first two chapters, but after the third everything began to come down, I just read the fourth chapter and it is much worse than the previous one, many plot holes, the plot is totally out of it, the main character from the third chapter does not paint at all in the story, It does not have a voice or vote, it does not influence any decision, and worst of all, it advances almost nothing in any sentimental relationship with any of the female protagonists of the story, I think the essence of the first chapters was lost from the third with all that senseless plot of the narcos, the loss of prominence of the main male character, and the large amount of characters that surrounds this VN, is doing more harm than good.
Humble advice, reduce the number of story plots, let the MC develop a relationship with at least 3 of the female leads (Jenny, Ashley and Valery),
give more prominence to the MC, short the story of the narcos, it loses more and more meaning, returns to the university essence and the personal dramas of potential MC romances, In short, go back to the essence of the first two chapters, greetings.
P.D: Sorry for my poor english, i hope I have helped with something, i really like your job.
Episode 5:
The story is still in chaos, many characters, many stories to tell, little time.
The main story, has neither head nor tail, to that we must add the sub-plot of the drug traffickers, which continues to damage more and more this VN in general, in short, very little progress, for a job that comes to light every 4 months.
Observations outside of the narrative, the developer needs to improve technically, he does many things well, but the most basic things like using the D-force, he ignores them almost completely, problems with the textures of certain characters and other details, which By now they should be fixed.
To conclude, the author of VN has to simplify the story, short sub-plots that do not contribute anything, reduce the number of secondary characters and focus on a single story, less is more, greetings.