Would be top 5 if the pacing wasn't off.
The story is really good but the pacing is kinda lackluster. The leap from "I'm joining this academy to fulfil my father's dying wish" and reconnecting with a long lost friend to "I'll show you mine if you show me yours" in such a short space of time was a little weird, I feel the transition could've been a bit smoother. Other than that I love the story so far and the renders are top tier. There are a few grammatical errors but nothing too noticeable that it puts you off the story (Dev should look into it though).
Overall, a solid project. Looking forward to future updates.
The story is really good but the pacing is kinda lackluster. The leap from "I'm joining this academy to fulfil my father's dying wish" and reconnecting with a long lost friend to "I'll show you mine if you show me yours" in such a short space of time was a little weird, I feel the transition could've been a bit smoother. Other than that I love the story so far and the renders are top tier. There are a few grammatical errors but nothing too noticeable that it puts you off the story (Dev should look into it though).
Overall, a solid project. Looking forward to future updates.