As of Ch. 4 Public
The good:
- The slow-burn. Feels like you're actually trying to build a relationship with each of the girls than simply find a breathing sex toy
- Rebecca
- Writing is good with few mistakes, doesn't feel rushed
- Render quality is impeccable
- While pacing of the overall plot (see below) is iffy, the quiet moments are much-appreciated breathing space.
- Did I mention Rebecca?
The bad:
- Some bugs here and there, but nothing that breaks progression, although a new save is required for Ch.4 for some reason.
- Plot feels rushed with almost little time for proper character development. Imagine you're sitting on a chair one day and then a car slams into the back of you - that's what it feels like between Chapter 1 and 2.
- A lot of 'tell' moments where 'show' would have been better.
- Lack of any meaningful male friendships (this IS a mixed school afterall)
The ugly:
- The Richard family inheritance dispute is probably the most illogical, improbable, and insane part of the story. Either that or Adam is far dumber than he or the story makes him out to be.
The good:
- The slow-burn. Feels like you're actually trying to build a relationship with each of the girls than simply find a breathing sex toy
- Rebecca
- Writing is good with few mistakes, doesn't feel rushed
- Render quality is impeccable
- While pacing of the overall plot (see below) is iffy, the quiet moments are much-appreciated breathing space.
- Did I mention Rebecca?
The bad:
- Some bugs here and there, but nothing that breaks progression, although a new save is required for Ch.4 for some reason.
- Plot feels rushed with almost little time for proper character development. Imagine you're sitting on a chair one day and then a car slams into the back of you - that's what it feels like between Chapter 1 and 2.
- A lot of 'tell' moments where 'show' would have been better.
- Lack of any meaningful male friendships (this IS a mixed school afterall)
The ugly:
- The Richard family inheritance dispute is probably the most illogical, improbable, and insane part of the story. Either that or Adam is far dumber than he or the story makes him out to be.