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I like were for the most part you think the developer will take the story**
There will be many events, but the update will definitely be divided.
1. Kendra discusses Anna's outfit (during a break after work) Anna will appear in a more daring outfit, she will ruffle feathers in front of the guys. That does track well. But it's a law office so it will be harder to have Anna go too far with what she wears. However, that doesn't mean she couldn't go braless or wears a skirt that really shows off her thong or lack of one.
2. The old fish will come pretending to fix the air conditioning (may be a scene of the player's choice (depending on the chosen path) or Anna will show him her boobs by unbuttoning a button (there was already a similar scene, whether Anna should tease the old fish when there was a choice to unbutton her blouse in Ch2) Blouse, so that the boobs will stick out of the blouse, maybe the old fish will touch them or not) Been there got that already. I don't think the developer is one to repeat himself with another unbuttoning. We got to remember just where Marvin is at. He's felt up her thigh, groped her butt, and got a peek at the mountains. So, the events are escalating. Anna in the teasers is wearing suit pants, so she isn't vulnerable there for Marvin Perv time. And honestly, he hasn't gotten under Anna's skin enough to really get some good old perv in. The AC problem is the excuse for Marvin; it's what happens that is the question. Game is too new to be sure but maybe the developer is with each male character focusing on different kinds of naughty. It would be sad if Chris and Jake use the same angles to play with Anna. So... let's say Chris is the 'cock worship' tag and the only one Anna would give a BJ... Hank the dom forcing Anna to submit hating him while her body betrays her.... (repeating myself again) but unresolved issues with Grant... BBC with Marcel... Jake the pretty boy... but Marvin the perv is the weird kink (take your pick... lactation... teasing... whatever)
3. Conversation with the fake rehabilitation doctor Rob Kobra (will he lie to Anna about David, will he tell the truth, or will he try to get the truth from her about what's going on in her marriage?) Does David like Rob Kobra and does he like him back? I can see a little intel gathering as well as throwing David under the bus. His only problem is where once Anna saw him as harmless, she is now on to him.
4. Weekend business trip with Penguin to discuss matters with the company and his clients And that is why I think Anna's crossing of the line should start. I can really write a really graphic story of Hank totally dominating Anna and breaking her to his wants and desires. The whole thing is whoever is first to rail Anna sets the whole tone of how Anna interacts with the rest of the males. If Hank basically gets Anna to submit and (with in the game context of Anna's character build) hate and loath Hank because he is old, fat, and disgusting but inwardly Anna is able to make an 'excuse' and have reasons for taking no responsibility-- she could justify it as not cheating, but being exploited
5. Dinner with the old poisoner fox (he calls Anna the same day, wants her to wear the lingerie and stockings he bought her as a wedding present to please Anna, maybe play a trick on her (get her drunk, put drugs in her drink during dinner) I think you are onto something there but maybe not the way you are thinking. Problem with him and Anna is we have no clue what lingerie/stockings have as a symbol of something... Could they come into play down the road? Sure... and I think they will. But I think there is a story behind them and to why he gave them to Anna.
6. Kendra invites Anna to a weekend wine drinking party (will she come alone? she will want to get her drunk and find out her weaknesses so she can use them to convince Anna to do more and more naughty things) I been wanting them two to have a girl's night out at a club and Anna get hit on by a lot of men. But under the influence of wine, we could get more of an Anna story as Kendra gets Anna to talk about her naughty past like her first time.
7. Anne goes to the store with Jake to help Jake buy lingerie for Jake's non-existent girlfriend (Elizabet) (Anna will become a model) What would be better:
Jake asks Anna and David to join him and his girlfriend to dinner. Anna to hide her marriage problem agrees and David hopeful of getting back together with Anna joins in. So, during the dinner Jake gets Anna alone and makes his move and Anna is aroused by the idea of David being so close by and the (girlfriend) also being near triggers Anna to let Jake to get the toe hold he needs for future mischief.
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The simple plot of Jake tricking Anna to go shopping
8. Probably the fake friend (Chris) will not show up in this update, will he text or call Anna about the shower incident? Oh NO... must have at least some cell phone banter between Anna and Chris. Remember the whole shower incident is fresh--No way Anna isn't going to think about it. Even if it's a brief exchange, it helps Anna to plan and reset where the red line is. But more importantly, it sets up the next release after this one or the next because Anna knows for absolute certain Chris will not behave, and she would know if ever he gets her alone again, he'll make a move on her. Everyone one is all worked up over the shower incident, but the pizza dinner is actually more important... the shower scene was just the conclusion of Anna posing in front of Chris and her getting her breasts groped.
9. Marcela will not be there (BBC) And the Underpants' Man(Lonard)... With all these crowded events coming up, the Marcel route is too far distant if the developer truly wants the story to have BBC/interracial interaction. Now if Anna just sees Marcel as just another guy and not a "black" man then it's easy to develop the story that Anna is thrilled that a very young man is interested in her and that's it... no interracial taboos or whatever. But if race is important to the story, then Marcel needs to at the very least appear in an update after this one coming out.