VN Ren'Py A Perfect Marriage [v0.7.3b] [Mr Palmer]

[Couto25]

Agree. For the praise I've given the story and it's elements of realism (that can be had in a porn story) there is plenty of inconsistency in behavior that feels like filler for horny readers during scenes lacking any need for sexuality than an organic event.

Which is part of what I meant a few posts back. Some of the behavior we'd consider faithful or simply not-slutty needs to just be baked-in. Letting him more or less just watch her breastfeed is something few women would allow even if they were whores (and Anna is definitely not at this stage, at most she has a trist with her husband's friend that's in full bloom). It felt a bit out of character to have that.

Now, Marvin has felt her up so I get why the writer would think that was fine but it's just an odd thing to have in there even for the 1% that plays the faithful path.

I'm not complaining but if I'm going to point out the parts I think are good and realistic I need to point out the things that don't quite match those levels.

Maybe That kind of situation is required for the story to start with Ana/Kendra bar scene about Marvin discussion...but its fine. Yes, there are so many dialogues and events that doesn't get along with path. And if we ask MP, he will justify with something and people will have to get along with that reason even if they dont want to. Like he will say Ana was drunk in all those previous scene but Ana is sober in recent one and she was topless so she got pissed off. Any justification will do.

And nah its better not to take these VN as realistic lol...The thing is when someone consider and take the story as realistic, and do a deep dive into all characters or if they've gone through similar situation in their own life, they try to relate it as per their own experience....even if a normal breakup might have happen, they will see themselves as David lol. And MP will unnecessary add more boring slow events just to extend the project that would have ended in 5 years will now take 8/9 years lol because of more slower pace. The more someone dive into realism in any individual character path, the more problem MP will create for himself. I mean right now Ana ass is being groped by 5 people per day lol that's not realism at all. Who knows when her corruption will grow, she will give 4 handjobs per day lol.

MP took idea from original VN and he try to add corruption in all characters path that were there in original VN. So he will get stuck at many points where even if it doesn't make sense for a faithful/corrupt path, he will show those things to produce the desire corrupt/faithful outcome without changing the main storyline. So yea many events will be absurd that were not present in original VN and MP is creating now for this VN... original VN my guess showed confused path ending.... he's creating extra faithful and corrupt path. Wednesday and Thursday there's not much events to show beside main bar scene and meeting with grant, so whatever he write for these 2 days is pure MP creativity beside those 2 events.

 

[sslovoe]

i see this at suna model for daz
is this just sampl for model or use from some game '
she look like anna

 

[Sadowdark]

Old Fish and the Meeting of Old Voyeurs of the Secret Forum



Throne of Blood [Ep. 3] [LeStar Studios - https://f95zone.to/threads/throne-of-blood-ep-3-lestar-studios.102702/

 

[Sadowdark]

Maybe That kind of situation is required for the story to start with Ana/Kendra bar scene about Marvin discussion...but its fine. Yes, there are so many dialogues and events that doesn't get along with path. And if we ask MP, he will justify with something and people will have to get along with that reason even if they dont want to. Like he will say Ana was drunk in all those previous scene but Ana is sober in recent one and she was topless so she got pissed off. Any justification will do.

And nah its better not to take these VN as realistic lol...The thing is when someone consider and take the story as realistic, and do a deep dive into all characters or if they've gone through similar situation in their own life, they try to relate it as per their own experience....even if a normal breakup might have happen, they will see themselves as David lol. And MP will unnecessary add more boring slow events just to extend the project that would have ended in 5 years will now take 8/9 years lol because of more slower pace. The more someone dive into realism in any individual character path, the more problem MP will create for himself. I mean right now Ana ass is being groped by 5 people per day lol that's not realism at all. Who knows when her corruption will grow, she will give 4 handjobs per day lol.

MP took idea from original VN and he try to add corruption in all characters path that were there in original VN. So he will get stuck at many points where even if it doesn't make sense for a faithful/corrupt path, he will show those things to produce the desire corrupt/faithful outcome without changing the main storyline. So yea many events will be absurd that were not present in original VN and MP is creating now for this VN... original VN my guess showed confused path ending.... he's creating extra faithful and corrupt path. Wednesday and Thursday there's not much events to show beside main bar scene and meeting with grant, so whatever he write for these 2 days is pure MP creativity beside those 2 events.

But in the original story there are no old fish, so it's a completely different game than the original story.

 

[sslovoe]

Old Fish and the Meeting of Old Voyeurs of the Secret Forum

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Throne of Blood [Ep. 3] [LeStar Studios - https://f95zone.to/threads/throne-of-blood-ep-3-lestar-studios.102702/

good art like and women look in game sexy ...thx we look more for marvin big fan

 

[Sadowdark]

good art like and women look in game sexy ...thx we look more for marvin big fan

I also like the original look of women in games and I also love when they are ugly,

 

[Menace o Santana]

I also love when they are ugly,

Ugly you say?

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[sslovoe]

I also like the original look of women in games and I also love when they are ugly,

ugly or beggar is interesting thing in game
delivery guy/ worker constructor men / bagger homless with rich wife
still look for right skin
i found hair for marvin think near
and want make eyes and skin face look older

 

[sslovoe]

Ugly you say?

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ugly older not scary

animie never get old even grand mother make her milf

 

[Sadowdark]

ugly older not scary View attachment 4478451

ugly older

 

[Sadowdark]

ugly older not scary View attachment 4478451

animie never get old even grand mother make her milf
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What anime is this from?

 

[Menace o Santana]

ugly older not scary View attachment 4478451

animie never get old even grand mother make her milf
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Reference to the last picture! Those drawin' style it's somethin' else. I believe we found them more in the Japanese industry(Hentai) with those drawin' style Granny in 80's could look more sexier and fuckable than a 20 to 30 yo
As a matter of fact I'll take this granny 1 million Time over Kendra

 

[Sadowdark]

Reference to the last picture! Those drawin' style it's somethin' else. I believe we found them more in the Japanese industry(Hentai) with those drawin' style Granny in 80's could look more sexier and fuckable than a 20 to 30 yo
As a matter of fact I'll take this granny 1 million Time over Kendra View attachment 4478464

This is grandma's secret

 

[sslovoe]

women can be old and attractive
also in story
young women less be have issue find date or relation
when come to older she be teacher or lady she cant be out as sexy so in novel they make her need sex to fell she is atteactive and sexy

first one can be anna mom

 

[Sadowdark]

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It looks too cartoonish

 

[AlfredBundy4]

Maybe That kind of situation is required for the story to start with Ana/Kendra bar scene about Marvin discussion...but its fine. Yes, there are so many dialogues and events that doesn't get along with path. And if we ask MP, he will justify with something and people will have to get along with that reason even if they dont want to. Like he will say Ana was drunk in all those previous scene but Ana is sober in recent one and she was topless so she got pissed off. Any justification will do.

And nah its better not to take these VN as realistic lol...The thing is when someone consider and take the story as realistic, and do a deep dive into all characters or if they've gone through similar situation in their own life, they try to relate it as per their own experience....even if a normal breakup might have happen, they will see themselves as David lol. And MP will unnecessary add more boring slow events just to extend the project that would have ended in 5 years will now take 8/9 years lol because of more slower pace. The more someone dive into realism in any individual character path, the more problem MP will create for himself. I mean right now Ana ass is being groped by 5 people per day lol that's not realism at all. Who knows when her corruption will grow, she will give 4 handjobs per day lol.

MP took idea from original VN and he try to add corruption in all characters path that were there in original VN. So he will get stuck at many points where even if it doesn't make sense for a faithful/corrupt path, he will show those things to produce the desire corrupt/faithful outcome without changing the main storyline. So yea many events will be absurd that were not present in original VN and MP is creating now for this VN... original VN my guess showed confused path ending.... he's creating extra faithful and corrupt path. Wednesday and Thursday there's not much events to show beside main bar scene and meeting with grant, so whatever he write for these 2 days is pure MP creativity beside those 2 events.

Disagree on the realism part, agree on the rest.

Again, whatever semblance of realism that can be had in what is a dumb porn story is ideal, IMO. Without that it's just one of those shitty VNs where nothing makes sense and characters are moving from space to a castle to a high school and shit, lol. Those are everywhere and they suck.

A story is a story. Porn or not it should make some level of consistent sense. Is it dumb and illogical? Sure. It's a dunbass porn story. Can and should characters behave with consistency and some level of basic logic/sense? Absolutely. Without it you have absolute dogshit and then you may as well jack off to a cave drawing, lol. If some level of sense and realism doesn't matter, this is all pointless for someone like myself that isn't in it 100% to jackoff. I actually do read these things for some story...even if just a bit lol.

Jokes aside, you can't really state the problems you state and then also claim it doesn't matter. If it doesn't matter yoy shouldn't give a shit and if you don't give a shit you don't post and if you don't post...etc. To some small degree realism/logic/consistency matters in a story. Even a dunbass porn story.


I'm also not as tough on this dev as some seem to be but every dev will have those that think everything is wrong or being messed up. Sadly, they are often right. I don't think this dev is doing a bad job except maybe release times getting a bit longer and some minor inconsistencies in behavior.

 

[Couto25]

Disagree on the realism part, agree on the rest.

Again, whatever semblance of realism that can be had in what is a dumb porn story is ideal, IMO. Without that it's just one of those shitty VNs where nothing makes sense and characters are moving from space to a castle to a high school and shit, lol. Those are everywhere and they suck.

A story is a story. Porn or not it should make some level of consistent sense. Is it dumb and illogical? Sure. It's a dunbass porn story. Can and should characters behave with consistency and some level of basic logic/sense? Absolutely. Without it you have absolute dogshit and then you may as well jack off to a cave drawing, lol. If some level of sense and realism doesn't matter, this is all pointless for someone like myself that isn't in it 100% to jackoff. I actually do read these things for some story...even if just a bit lol.

Jokes aside, you can't really state the problems you state and then also claim it doesn't matter. If it doesn't matter yoy shouldn't give a shit and if you don't give a shit you don't post and if you don't post...etc. To some small degree realism/logic/consistency matters in a story. Even a dunbass porn story.


I'm also not as tough on this dev as some seem to be but every dev will have those that think everything is wrong or being messed up. Sadly, they are often right. I don't think this dev is doing a bad job except maybe release times getting a bit longer and some minor inconsistencies in behavior.

See you can say that it's like erotic movie...have you seen movies like umm let's say director tinto brass movies??? Those are explicit movies with stories right?? there are few japanese porn that has some stories in it...whether incest or wife sharing....but it's still fall under category of explicit/porn/adult....it has nothing to do with realism but yea it's just made to satisfy people fantasies... the story might be inspired by real situation/Fantasies...but real life doesn't go that way. It's just imagination in the end
when I say porn, I mean like an erotic movie or something...that has some fantasy story and sex both of it...how can a girl be groped by 5/6 person in one day and enjoy everyone's touches without being a porn movie?? It's not realistic at all..just saying if she enjoy 5/6 different guys touches and getting wet all the time like in last update Ana got groped by Tim, Dale, hank, rob, Chris, Jake scene was idiotic but if he would have made it good then he would be 6th guy....and with all guys she was getting wet....how can that be realistic??? Obviously it's an explicit VN. No realism at all...story and emotions might be inspired by many real case scenario/fantasy and put together..this is a porn/adult/erotic game. Like a wife can cheat on husband with his friend or his boss in real case..but not to all male character at the same time like this VN lol. It's just different fantasies combined together I can say.

and I obviously like cheating wife erotic fantasies that's why I give a shit to these genre VN lol ..now whatever situation he's creating and the way he's creating with time, I can literally see that the developer is trolling just to extend or fulfill slow corruption. Like AWAM the biggest troller...where he's trolling with HJ scenes trying to create unnecessary storyline because it's his lifetime project and major source of income. Here I don't understand why MP's trolling when he's working guy...like in realistic scenario if a wife has an affair or attracted to let's say with husband's friend/work guy... whenever they will meet alone, they will do sex in real life....it will not be like wife and husband's friend meet first time for HJ, then meet next time for BJ , then meet next time for pussy touch lol....she will do sex all the time if both of them are attracted to each other in real life...something like "unfaithful movie,", now that's realism....there whenever wife get an opportunity to meet her affair, she does sex...and it's not like sex is only shown one time and then jumped to conclusion, it has been shown various time and various places too..Diane lane one..if he wants to add realistic scenarios , then add scene as per realism too.

 

[Adhdclassic]

My opinion if JOHN wasn't so slow it would be the perfect template for these games. Choices in the right places no forced events still keeping the story in play giving the player no unnecessary surprises.

 

[Adhdclassic]

Lingerie scene was underwhelming, it was hyped up then splat. She tryed on 3 outfits, no Jake peeking no jake showing no self touching nothing. Just is my butt thick. Lingerie was the moment to change Jakes trajectory.

 

[ItsNotUs]

What anime is this from?

Where did i look, everyone is asking the same question! Does anyone know what anime this is?