For corrupt path it confuse me ....like on one hand she tease Marvin by unbuttoning her top, then Ana tease Marvin and let him touch her thighs in the bar, then she allow Marvin to grope her ass and boobs but when Marvin saw her topless in the last update, she gets pissed off..so last Marvin/Ana interaction doesn't get along with corrupt path at all.
Agree. For the praise I've given the story and it's elements of realism (that can be had in a porn story) there is plenty of inconsistency in behavior that feels like filler for horny readers during scenes lacking any need for sexuality than an organic event.
Which is part of what I meant a few posts back. Some of the behavior we'd consider faithful or simply not-slutty needs to just be baked-in. Letting him more or less just watch her breastfeed is something few women would allow even if they were whores (and Anna is definitely not at this stage, at most she has a trist with her husband's friend that's in full bloom). It felt a bit out of character to have that.
Now, Marvin has felt her up so I get why the writer would think that was fine but it's just an odd thing to have in there even for the 1% that plays the faithful path.
I'm not complaining but if I'm going to point out the parts I think are good and realistic I need to point out the things that don't quite match those levels.