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Lick lick lick - do more dude! You can do it!the only game that is life like... don't listen to the haters Dev.... keep on cooking
Lick lick lick - do more dude! You can do it!the only game that is life like... don't listen to the haters Dev.... keep on cooking
Damn it, buddy, what are you doing here?as long as we get the choice of who Anna ends up cheating with, that's all good. i want to be able to continue to deny fake friend and ugly old fuckers Marvin and Grant. those two are perverted cunts and don't deserve to get anywhere near Anna. would love it if Anna could trick the old perv into giving her father's money back without having to let him touch her. that would be fun to manipulate the old prick. also hope she reports Marvin for sexual harrassment and he ends up in jail where he belongs. as for Kendra, i have so many ideas for how to deal with her. hope Mr. Palmer comes close to any of them really...
Very interesting post, thank you.A misconception is that APM follows the model of a corruption story where an innocent woman is slowly corrupted over time and the reader is meant to be tortured with endless teasing. That’s not the case.
We’ve learned that Anna’s a woman who has done well suppressing her natural, hidden sexual urges… whether it’s being shielded by her family, keeping busy with school and career, marrying a good man, and starting a family. But deep down, she knows there’s urges she’s ashamed to admit, and she feels like there’s a whole adventurous side to her that’s gone unexplored.
Just before APM started, Anna’s naughty side was a distant thought for her… it was like a book she once started to read and found enthralling, but out of fear she decided to stop reading and put on the back shelf. Over the years it’s collected dust and has been pushed back by an overwhelming supply of romance books and children’s books. But over the course of a week, a confluence of events has suddenly turned her reality upside-down, and when Kendra pulled that naughty book off the shelf and told Anna to read it, Anna is easily swayed to look inside. After all, her body and mind recently decided to put her libido into overdrive after months of slowness during pregnancy.
What Kendra created wasn’t an ability for Anna to develop a side to her that didn’t exist; rather, she unwittingly created an excuse for Anna to explore the side of her she’s always suppressed.
No, this doesn’t mean in the next update she’s going to be a cum dumpster for the office. But her perception of her marriage has been so damaged that she can no longer use it as a shield. She’s exposed and vulnerable, and thinking of David with another woman kills her willpower. It gives her an excuse. That’s not a good scenario when you have a pack of wolves surrounding her ready to pounce!
So, while we’re at a point of the story where there’s been an extremely high level of teasing and non-sexual content - and there will be some more - that’s not the basis of the story. All these antagonists are positioning themselves to make a move, and depending on your choices we’ll see how David and Anna fare.
Sorry for all the metaphors… hope they made sense.
iLick lick lick - do more dude! You can do it!
Game name is Eleanor 3 Violet Aster. I don't want to spam the page so I am not going to comment on this anymore.Game name in picture ?
https://f95zone.to/threads/a-perfect-marriage-v0-7b-mr-palmer.118449/post-10278990I think Anna looks hot as a brunette
That's exactly what it is... to date. Which is why I made the post saying it's not always going to be a nonsexual tease story with a long corruption like what's seen in the VN people keep comparing this to. Parts 1 and 2 are basically the same, just with different viewpoints, so I'd say "halfway" is a more appropriate measure of where we're at in the story progression.The game has 3 chapters and we're in chapter 3 already. So far the sexy times with Anna are zero.
Maybe you didn't plan for the game to be like that in your head but that's exactly what it is.
It's a pity that you have to comment on what we all see. Personally, I am more concerned about what will happen next. I'm not asking for spoilers, no, I just want my expectations to be met at least to some extent.That's exactly what it is... to date. Which is why I made the post saying it's not always going to be a nonsexual tease story with a long corruption like what's seen in the VN people keep comparing this to. Parts 1 and 2 are basically the same, just with different viewpoints, so I'd say "halfway" is a more appropriate measure of where we're at in the story progression.
A patron recently asked me about more flashbacks, particularly the beer pong scene. I don't foresee that being something I focus on at this point, because I feel we've done enough character building and I want to focus on pushing the story forward. I do in fact have script of the beer pong night that I can probably post as bonus material, I just need to edit it first since I didn't fully finish it being that it didn't make it into the story._____
"Mr_Palmer, post: 13317216, member: 4960552"]
A misconception is that APM follows the model of a corruption story where an innocent woman is slowly corrupted over time and the reader is meant to be tortured with endless teasing. That’s not the case.
We’ve learned that Anna’s a woman who has done well suppressing her natural, hidden sexual urges… whether it’s being shielded by her family, keeping busy with school and career, marrying a good man, and starting a family. But deep down, she knows there’s urges she’s ashamed to admit, and she feels like there’s a whole adventurous side to her that’s gone unexplored.
Indeed, we have a clear picture of Anna's past regarding her demanding father (a controlling tyrant). Further having older brothers are an issue--I am an older brother myself. Of course, seeing how Anna has progressed with her career to this point also illustrates Anna had to sacrifice to achieve it. It's still a 'new' game and Anna's character has been totally filled out because we lack insights to other aspects of her character.
*I suspect we will be getting flash backs to help illustrate Anna's adventurous side?
*Of course, seeing Anna in her late teens being frustrated at not being allowed to date, perhaps? Maybe even her first love and date(s)? Perhaps a good idea or perhaps not would be to see a college Anna involved in her first love to show she was like {a kid let loose in a candy story when discovering sex or just thrilled to having sex in her life} ... or maybe just to see some of her sexual fantasies are that embarrasses her to have them.
Just before APM started, Anna’s naughty side was a distant thought for her… it was like a book she once started to read and found enthralling, but out of fear she decided to stop reading and put on the back shelf. Over the years it’s collected dust and has been pushed back by an overwhelming supply of romance books and children’s books. But over the course of a week, a confluence of events has suddenly turned her reality upside-down, and when Kendra pulled that naughty book off the shelf and told Anna to read it, Anna is easily swayed to look inside. After all, her body and mind recently decided to put her libido into overdrive after months of slowness during pregnancy.
It's actually a pretty good analogy to describe Anna's resent attitudes and behaviors. Oddly what would be helpful to flesh out this side of Anna is if Anna rediscovers her old 'naughty novels' she collected collect in her youth before Anna she decided to put away her own book. Perhaps Anna's book collection was...
What Kendra created wasn’t an ability for Anna to develop a side to her that didn’t exist; rather, she unwittingly created an excuse for Anna to explore the side of her she’s always suppressed.
Yep... seen how others provoke mischief in others. But generally, you are right. If it's not already a possibility in the beast, already, it's not likely going to show up on its own.
No, this doesn’t mean in the next update she’s going to be a cum dumpster for the office. But her perception of her marriage has been so damaged that she can no longer use it as a shield. She’s exposed and vulnerable, and thinking of David with another woman kills her willpower. It gives her an excuse. That’s not a good scenario when you have a pack of wolves surrounding her ready to pounce!
Those of us who have been around have seen ex-wives go off the deep end. Often and sadly these women pick the worst possible options and choices. Needing to reaffirm they are desirable...lashing out in emotional pain...trying to find that something "missing"...thirst for revenge...self-righteous justification.... on and on and on
So, while we’re at a point of the story where there’s been an extremely high level of teasing and non-sexual content - and there will be some more - that’s not the basis of the story. All these antagonists are positioning themselves to make a move, and depending on your choices we’ll see how David and Anna fare.
Sorry for all the metaphors… hope they made sense.
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Here's a little something unpublished that I'll post here. Call it an F95 exclusive. A while back I was working on building character pages, and this was the bio I had on Anna that I didn't finish yet. I'm not sure if or when I'll develop the character feature... I'm more concerned with progressing the story in the limited time I have. But I'll likely finish it at some point._____
"Mr_Palmer, post: 13317216, member: 4960552"]
A misconception is that APM follows the model of a corruption story where an innocent woman is slowly corrupted over time and the reader is meant to be tortured with endless teasing. That’s not the case.
We’ve learned that Anna’s a woman who has done well suppressing her natural, hidden sexual urges… whether it’s being shielded by her family, keeping busy with school and career, marrying a good man, and starting a family. But deep down, she knows there’s urges she’s ashamed to admit, and she feels like there’s a whole adventurous side to her that’s gone unexplored.
Indeed, we have a clear picture of Anna's past regarding her demanding father (a controlling tyrant). Further having older brothers are an issue--I am an older brother myself. Of course, seeing how Anna has progressed with her career to this point also illustrates Anna had to sacrifice to achieve it. It's still a 'new' game and Anna's character has been totally filled out because we lack insights to other aspects of her character.
*I suspect we will be getting flash backs to help illustrate Anna's adventurous side?
*Of course, seeing Anna in her late teens being frustrated at not being allowed to date, perhaps? Maybe even her first love and date(s)? Perhaps a good idea or perhaps not would be to see a college Anna involved in her first love to show she was like {a kid let loose in a candy story when discovering sex or just thrilled to having sex in her life} ... or maybe just to see some of her sexual fantasies are that embarrasses her to have them.
Just before APM started, Anna’s naughty side was a distant thought for her… it was like a book she once started to read and found enthralling, but out of fear she decided to stop reading and put on the back shelf. Over the years it’s collected dust and has been pushed back by an overwhelming supply of romance books and children’s books. But over the course of a week, a confluence of events has suddenly turned her reality upside-down, and when Kendra pulled that naughty book off the shelf and told Anna to read it, Anna is easily swayed to look inside. After all, her body and mind recently decided to put her libido into overdrive after months of slowness during pregnancy.
It's actually a pretty good analogy to describe Anna's resent attitudes and behaviors. Oddly what would be helpful to flesh out this side of Anna is if Anna rediscovers her old 'naughty novels' she collected collect in her youth before Anna she decided to put away her own book. Perhaps Anna's book collection was...
What Kendra created wasn’t an ability for Anna to develop a side to her that didn’t exist; rather, she unwittingly created an excuse for Anna to explore the side of her she’s always suppressed.
Yep... seen how others provoke mischief in others. But generally, you are right. If it's not already a possibility in the beast, already, it's not likely going to show up on its own.
No, this doesn’t mean in the next update she’s going to be a cum dumpster for the office. But her perception of her marriage has been so damaged that she can no longer use it as a shield. She’s exposed and vulnerable, and thinking of David with another woman kills her willpower. It gives her an excuse. That’s not a good scenario when you have a pack of wolves surrounding her ready to pounce!
Those of us who have been around have seen ex-wives go off the deep end. Often and sadly these women pick the worst possible options and choices. Needing to reaffirm they are desirable...lashing out in emotional pain...trying to find that something "missing"...thirst for revenge...self-righteous justification.... on and on and on
So, while we’re at a point of the story where there’s been an extremely high level of teasing and non-sexual content - and there will be some more - that’s not the basis of the story. All these antagonists are positioning themselves to make a move, and depending on your choices we’ll see how David and Anna fare.
Sorry for all the metaphors… hope they made sense.
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Well then, the previous speaker’s comment should also be deleted, because no one is hating, but expressing their opinion, but in fact, your post is also. xDi
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"halfway"?That's exactly what it is... to date. Which is why I made the post saying it's not always going to be a nonsexual tease story with a long corruption like what's seen in the VN people keep comparing this to. Parts 1 and 2 are basically the same, just with different viewpoints, so I'd say "halfway" is a more appropriate measure of where we're at in the story progression.
Thanks a lot. It's very interesting.Here's a little something unpublished that I'll post here. Call it an F95 exclusive. A while back I was working on building character pages, and this was the bio I had on Anna that I didn't finish yet. I'm not sure if or when I'll develop the character feature... I'm more concerned with progressing the story in the limited time I have. But I'll likely finish it at some point.
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???once Anna starts having sex that story won't have as much interest.
My interest is that this flashback, in which Anna takes off her clothes and some breasts may be seen, appears at this point in the story, when Anna is "waking up". Later, when Anna starts stripping and having sex with others, this flashback won't be as interesting.???
Why are you indulging?
Visual novel for adults with NTR elements and cheating - is it more interesting without sex scenes?