Couto25

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My question about the two big scenes was more sarcastic, but let's be honest and skip the point of how it's done. Are these scenes really that big? Is the entire update really that big?
Yes, i understand that there are probably other outcomes depending on the previous choice, but i'm too lazy to check. But let's be honest, this update, in terms of content, will take a maximum of three months of development, but not half a year!

Sadowdark mentioned that plot is subject to the path we have chosen before and i agree in some ways. Why in some way? Because MP himself said that in key moments cheating and etc. will always be optional regardless of the path chosen by the player!
I don't care that this update was dedicated to Marvin, i'm annoyed by how it was all done in terms of presentation!
And if we touch on the topic of choice, then this update has only one to drink a shot or not! Lol
If MP had made a choice where Anna could allow herself to go overboard with Marvin in a restaurant and then a step-by-step choice in his van, then the entire cringe of that scene could have been attributed to the players themselves who went so far making the choice! But this is not the case, so all the blame for what is happening falls entirely on the MP!

As for Hank, if there hadn’t been the story with call me daddy, then it could have been taken more or less seriously from the point of view of corruption and the dominance of a boss over subordinates, but for me this is another cringe moment.
Yup hank story should have gone where Ana think of hank as a reflection of her strict father rather than actually calling him Daddy lol. That was poorly written but funny.

This way by calling hank daddy while doing sexual favours for him shows that Ana's father was so strict that Ana could have done sexual favours for him too in the past if he would have asked her. Rather than actually showing that her father was over protective about her and that's why he was strict....Her brain wiring is different.
 
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Sadowdark

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As for Hank, if there hadn’t been the story with call me daddy, then it could have been taken more or less seriously from the point of view of corruption and the dominance of a boss over subordinates, but for me this is another cringe moment.
(y):love:And finally we got two different scenes on two different tracks with Penguin
 
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also david hires an ivestigator to prove his innocence
This is the story line I'm most interested in. The wife going off the rails and spreading her legs for everyone but her husband is same old story told over and over. The twist is of course she was led astray by someone she thought was her friend, and the fact that she's like a bull with a nose ring, letting herself get led down whatever path her friend chooses instead of listening to the person she promised her life to sets the stage for an epic revenge for David.
This is what's missing in all these NTR stories, the wronged husband never gets revenge, just sits there all sad and dejected while the wife/ex-wife whores her life away happily ever after. I'm holding out hope this Dev breaks a few rules with the NTR genre and writes in David getting revenge on Ana. Severity of revenge depending on path played.
 
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The gambit that Marvin used to get in with Anna was actually a social engineering technique that intelligence officers used to use during the Cold War to recruit female assets. It was called "Is this guy bothering you?" However, to maximize the effectiveness, the inciting agent was usually busted like Marvin and the recruiting officer was the handsome and charming one. Because the point wasn't getting into their pants (always a bonus) but rather getting to their secrets. I think that the ruse was ill-conceived and did more to demonstrate Marvin's inflated opinion of himself than it did to influence Anna's decisions. Anything Anna did in the car, she was going to do anyway, because Anna isn't naive. She is a manipulative narcissist, and narcissistic people use everything at their disposal, including sex, to influence people to do what they want. So in the end, the gambit was extraordinarily pointless. Marvin probably doesn't realize this, but we do because we are friends with the spiders that live in Anna's broken brain. So, congratulations to all the folks rightly pointing out that the entire scene was stupid. Here is your no-prize.
 

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Great update. I was kinda blueballed with Jake when Anna was drunk and horny for Marvin. I'm really happy dev will improve this scene. Frankly, considering what happened in scene where she wasn't drunk I really think she should fuck him. Them making out before HJ was one of the best scene so far imo. Putting that aside I can't wait for more (especially Marvin but Hank and this new old guy are also super enticing). Crazy good quality. This idea about prequel mentioned by dev would be amazing cuz my only flaw with this game was that FMC started off as an experienced lady which is not my thing really. Her starting as a virgin protag would be amazing but probably pretty hard to connect some serious corruption with how this game started. Can't wait for more.
 

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This is the story line I'm most interested in. The wife going off the rails and spreading her legs for everyone but her husband is same old story told over and over. The twist is of course she was led astray by someone she thought was her friend, and the fact that she's like a bull with a nose ring, letting herself get led down whatever path her friend chooses instead of listening to the person she promised her life to sets the stage for an epic revenge for David.
This is what's missing in all these NTR stories, the wronged husband never gets revenge, just sits there all sad and dejected while the wife/ex-wife whores her life away happily ever after. I'm holding out hope this Dev breaks a few rules with the NTR genre and writes in David getting revenge on Ana. Severity of revenge depending on path played.
:unsure:It is possible that revenge will take place in the epilogue. Or on one of the two paths of corruption or the uncertain path.
 

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nice. a new update. i like couple/sharing games but this was very boring i remember this. Is it any good now?
 

Sadowdark

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nice. a new update. i like couple/sharing games but this was very boring i remember this. Is it any good now?
There is no pair sharing and there will be none. Depends on how you like old geezers, you will be pleased in this update.
 

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Despite delay update was fine.
Except one thing that bothers me.

Why we couldn't reject Marvin? The case with the shot is obvious so Anna being so drunk and out of the control, I get that.

But why when we rejected to drink foul shot she still gets nasty with this old creep... and why the hell we didn't have any choice to reject him entirely?

I just hope that it will not be that kind of a game where early previous choices will dictate everything else and then it will be just a formality on a rails.
 

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Anywho glad Mr.P is reworking the van scene. Bar Marvin was more interesting and suave with flirting with Ana to lower her guard. This update Marvin was too damn pushy and a beggar. Bring back mr smooth operator Marvin.
 
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Couto25

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Yup Jake route was disappointing in corrupt route...just a kiss ...could have done more.. Corruption in Jake route is slow as hell especially when she was drunk. Obviously MP might have justification for that too..but that character need to be upto the level of Chris because Ana is attracted to him too in corrupt route. Could have showed groping / fingering while dropping Ana back to home.
 

Couto25

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Despite delay update was fine.
Except one thing that bothers me.

Why we couldn't reject Marvin? The case with the shot is obvious so Anna being so drunk and out of the control, I get that.

But why when we rejected to drink foul shot she still gets nasty with this old creep... and why the hell we didn't have any choice to reject him entirely?

I just hope that it will not be that kind of a game where early previous choices will dictate everything else and then it will be just a formality on a rails.
Actually previous choice will dictate whatever we choose on ch1 and 2.. that's how the story will go ahead....that's what MP told before.

But anyways go by this like if MP doesn't want to show something, he will not show anything even if you corrupted ana 10 times in that character route by now like he's doing with Jake route....but if MP wanna show something, he will show it in faithful route too like Marvin breaking into the office or rob massage or Tim Dale unknown characters groping ana from 1st day of their introduction while other known characters couldn't with all stupid justification.
 

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Despite delay update was fine.
Except one thing that bothers me.

Why we couldn't reject Marvin? The case with the shot is obvious so Anna being so drunk and out of the control, I get that.

But why when we rejected to drink foul shot she still gets nasty with this old creep... and why the hell we didn't have any choice to reject him entirely?

I just hope that it will not be that kind of a game where early previous choices will dictate everything else and then it will be just a formality on a rails.
You have to wait until the creator gives you the final choice to discard the old fish forever. Even if you have their stats as discarded, he will still try to get Annae, and this goes for others as well.
 

Couto25

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I wonder as these VN goes by realistic way of corruption... howcome Ana remember her corruption level with each and every characters beside her problems lol... she's like ohh this character is new, so he can only grope me ....then she meets next character on same day, she goes ohh this character had groped me last time, so I can get nude in front of him n he can massage my breast...and before sleeping she meet Chris n think that ohh i already gave him hj so I will give bj because I am horny lol...n sleep unsatisfied as usual....different level of limitation with different characters on same day. Lol stupidity realism. It's like Ana has corruption level chart for all characters mugged by heart on her mind.
 
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