He said Ana will give BJ in car if David gets Angry on Ana....He will add that scene in this silver release...so probably after one week, there'll be new version release.
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I've been saying for the last two or three updates, that Palmer has either been paid to write someone else's story ideas and he is doing it half heartedly... Or he is no longer writing this VN at all & has sold out the game completely. The writing from before this crazy change was methodical, smart and connected with other plot points, to make certain scenes happen. Now there is no connection to scenes, the writing is teenager level with no setups. The internal dialogue is nonstop and meaningless just to make the updates longer. Even the grammar is poor, starting sentences with And?!. Something is definitely not perfect with this marriage!
On a lighter note....How does everyone find Ana's mom looks??? I was hoping for lil more bold & beauty and a lil modern..even though she wont be having any scenes.
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Surprised in a good manner. I'm tired of seeing those lusty, "hot" MILFs with huge tits and cleavage everywhere. Whose mother looks like that and dress like that?
Just look at you own mothers guys...
Anna mother looks like... well like a normal elder woman, with normal modest clothes.
She isn't pretty (maybe she was but now age is taken under consideration too), she isn't ugly. She is just fine and you could say realistic.
Big thumbs up from me.
Thank you. I am talking about the previous update with chris! I have played it before but couldn't anymore!!!!
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Have you ever seen a woman after she's been cheated on? I have. One time it was mine after I cheated with a coworker.
They either don't fuck anyone for a year or they sit on every dick they see for a year.
Giving the game a tiny bit of leeway for being a porn story, I'd say it's not as crazy as most adult VNs. That's the only point. She at least has a reason for doing it unlike most where it's just a lonely woman or you get zero reason and a chick goes from normal housewife to a total skank just because.
This at least has a reason that is based in some reality. I'll give the dev points for that.
This is not to say I'm 100% ok with the pacing and realism.
Most devs show their own kinks in their VNs. Guys like Stoper and Palmer have a thing for old men fucking younger women. L&P has a thing for young guys (boys, really) fucking older women. Etc.
It's in all their work and it makes sense. They have a kink and want to tell a story with said kink. I don't hold it against them until it becomes nothing but the kink. This story has done a decent job of diversifying, IMO.
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To me Anna's mother looks probably the way you would expect. She would be in her 50's. She has no makeup on and is dressed for babysitting at home. So when she is done up I could see her looking a lot better. I think the artist should have applied a merge job with the two characters faces. As they don't really look like mother & daughter. The faces don't show any similarities. He literally just reversed the hairstyle and colored it brown lol
The artist seems to do as little as possible. While everything is ok, it just never seems to take the next step to very good or great.
I don't need every woman to be a 10/10, unrealistic knockout in the looks department but I did expect more. I had no idea that was her mom until it was explicitly said, lol. I assumed it was a random babysitter or neighbor or something lol.
I don't see how that woman and her father could make Anna...but sometimes that happens.
If I ever made a VN I know the first two I'd make, both real-life stories (not involving me just instances I know of). One of the subjects is an attractive girl that looks nothing like her parents. At all. She somehow has naturally tan/olive skin and looks like an undefinable mix of caucasian and Asian while her parents are pale and European ancestry as can be. It turns out when you see a photo of her great-grandmother you see where her look comes from. It's bizarre.
Anyway, yeah, I was surprised to see that's her mom but it felt realistic so I'm cool with it.
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We have been getting many updates starting with 7 for the past year or more. So maybe when Anna finally has sex the update will be 8.0 or something like that.
I dont see her looks...what I meant by little modern is Ana's father was well established and yea beside grant took the business away...and she has 4 sons...she should dress in a modern way...She looks like a simple, middle class lady. Even Ana with her own money issue maintain high standard of dressing. I mean at one time she was rich.
The second thing to Notice is: None of Ana's parents were blonde lol..How come Ana is blonde lol???
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Hahaha I was thinking the same thing. Where did the blonde come from. Mom cheated and her husband knew it. She slept with the business guy who is trying to sleep with Anna. That's her real daddy. Would that be disturbing.
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Apparently Anna isn’t the only one who doesn’t have A Perfect Marriage.
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She is not. Look at her brows. Anna dyes her hair.
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Anywho glad Mr.P is reworking the van scene. Bar Marvin was more interesting and suave with flirting with Ana to lower her guard. This update Marvin was too damn pushy and a beggaScarlet Johansson s tits are way too small to play Anna, I would pick Sydney Sweeney, I think they both know the same amount of the law
David always reminds me of Mr Bean
