VN Ren'Py A Perfect Marriage [v0.7.4c] [Mr Palmer]

[Couto25]

She is not. Look at her brows. Anna dyes her hair.

She could dye her brows lol that would cost her less

 

[ItsNotUs]

She could dye her brows lol that would cost her less

According to the MP plot, Anna has Scandinavian roots and she is blonde!

 

[rocco11]

MP's post:
For those who have already played the update...

I wanted to take a moment to unpack, now that the bulk of the update has been released.

My intent was that this would be a "short" update for Wednesday, and that Thursday will also be a short update, so that we can get to the weekend when some big events will happen. However, the writing seemed to take on a life of its own, and I think that was because there was still some more context needed for Anna's tendencies with older men.

There's a lot of history with older men and scar tissue from her father. I know Marvin is not a favorite for many, nor are the other older men in the story, but these older men are a reality in her life, and I like telling that story. She's drawn to them, whether it's consciously or subconsciously, or whether it's willingly or reluctantly. And these dirty men are most certainly drawn to her.

And then there's Hank. Sure, there was some blue balling going on in this update with that storyline, but it's setting the table for future events. Same with Dale and Timothy... even though they aren't main characters nor pivotal to this story, there will be some scenes with them in the future.

The whole story isn't going to focus on the old men stuff, but it was the main theme in this update, and there will be Grant Stenstromber in the next update. There are several flavors in this story in terms of lewdness, so some updates will please some of you, and some updates won't. I know we live update to update and immerse ourselves in each update because of the development process, but the overall vision of the story when it's finished is that people can choose their own adventures in a complete play-thru to their liking.

The good news is there's enough context with the old men stuff now where we don't need to explore it any further. If I'm going to dive into that, it will be in a prequel or a Patreon post. And no, I'm not committing to a prequel, I'm just saying there's enough interesting content on how the "real" corruption of Anna happened prior APM.

We have enough context with the Chris situation too, so I don't need to hammer on that anymore.

As for Marvin, there were four ways it could go. There's the Anna that rejects him and refused the shot. There's the Anna that rejects him and takes the shot... which can open the door to her reconsidering her stance on Marvin. There's the Anna that accepts him and refuses the shot, and there's the Anna that accepts him and takes the shot.

Unfortunately, the path where Anna accepts Marvin and takes the shot is not in a place where I'm entirely happy with it. I had to step away from it in the interest of time, so I stuck with what I had instead of picking it apart like I usually do. I want to revisit this scene, however, to refine it to my liking.

I want to point out - that scene toes the line for nonconsent material, which I'm not into. I love reluctant, but I'm not a fan of rape/nonconsent. Therefore, Anna will only go to the van with Marvin if you've accepted him. This happens whether you take the shot or not, so it's not rape if she would've done it anyways. Where it would be rape is if you had rejected Marvin, but he drugs her and takes her to the van anyways... but there's not a path for that in the story.

As for the speed of development, this is something that's wearing on me because I want to be further along. And now, as I've explained previously, circumstances in world events has had a ripple down effect to my full-time job; therefore, I've had less development time for APM in 2025. I need to find ways to take shortcuts without sacrificing the quality too much. The immediate thing will be that David and Anna are mostly who they are. I had a vision of you being able to influence them into different versions of themselves, but I'm just going to have to limit that to certain situations here and there, because trying to write different scripts for scenes is a very daunting and time consuming task.

As for what to expect going forward...

I want to refine the scene I mentioned above, and I'm going to finish the remainder of Anna's night when she goes back into the house. I plan to do this by the time the public release is ready, at the latest.

For the next update after that, she has the dinner with Stenstromber, but otherwise, nothing major will happen until the weekend. The weekend is where some of the key scenes will take place, so I want to get there asap! I want to do some more animations for these upcoming bigger scenes too, so hopefully you'll see more of that.

If I think of anything else, I'll bring it up in the chat or in another post, but that's about where the state of things are.

Thank you all for your patience through this. This community we have is special, so thank you! Looking forward to continuing to experience this journey with you all. We're lucky to have such a great artist too, so a big 'thank you' to him for all the great renders!

Well, let's give MP a chance. Otherwise, we'll have a stupid and disgusting story Anna vs. nursing home

 

[Enola Gay]

She could dye her brows lol that would cost her less

Yeah I used to think that, but then I looked at her parents.

You even noticed that yourself.

 

[Seewolf]

It's been a while since I last commented on this thread. It always surprises me how it gains hundreds of additional pages each time, despite there being zero new content. Some people clearly have way too much time on their hands.

Anyway, the previous update five months ago was quite disappointing. Anna acted completely out of character, giving Chris a blowjob in her garage like some cheap street hooker — despite not even doing that for her husband. Even considering the circumstances, where she suspects her husband of cheating, this behavior felt extremely unlikely.

This latest update, while disappointing for those who dislike content involving older men, was actually better in my opinion. Not because of the Marvin scenes — those are still unrealistic to me. And no, just because she was used to being stared at by men and grew up with brothers doesn't mean a woman would react so calmly when a creepy old man shows up uninvited in the lactation room at work.
It’s also ridiculous that a 2-meter-tall guy backs down to old, fragile Marvin. That’s just not something that would happen in real life — unless maybe the tall guy was on probation and didn’t want to risk getting into a fight and ending up back in jail. That’s the only remotely realistic explanation I can think of at the moment.
(Marvin's path is by far the least realistic to me, even if Anna supposedly has a thing for older men.)
EDIT: I skipped some of the long, boring dialogue in this update, so I missed the part where it turns out Kendra is behind it all again. It's honestly crazy how many resources she has—she's able to control and pay off so many people. The receptionist at the gym, the fitness trainer, Jake is dancing to her tune, Marvin, and now even those two guys at the bar. This story is drifting further from reality with every update.

But let’s not forget that this is a porn visual novel — if it were truly realistic, most of the content wouldn’t happen in the first place.

Although the Hank storyline is actually developing in a solid way. Sure, it's progressing slowly, but it's doing so in a more believable and grounded manner compared to all the other routes in the game. I'm genuinely curious to see where the Hank route goes.

Jake's storyline, on the other hand, is incredibly boring. Others have pointed this out already: he's the typical "pretty boy" archetype — cocky, self-assured, and well-endowed. It's completely predictable that Anna will give in to his advances in a moment of weakness. That makes it uninteresting.

Adding to that, while many people find Anna physically very attractive, they don't find her particularly likable. That's why so many want to see her humiliated — there's a strong humiliation kink driving much of the interest. In that context, Jake almost feels like a reward for her, especially compared to the other sleazy men trying to get into her pants. That makes his route feel dull.

One surprising detail was the appearance of Anna’s mother, who looks almost nothing like her. Obviously Anna isn’t a natural blonde, but a fake one by dyeing her hair— both of her parents have dark hair, making it extremely unlikely that she’d be blonde herself. Even if one grandparent had blond(e) hair, it's a recessive trait, so the chances are very slim.

In summary, five months feels like an awfully long time for what supporters got in return. The whole update is a mixed bag, but still better than the previous one — mainly because of the Hank route.

 

[Enola Gay]

It's been a while since I last commented on this thread. It always surprises me how it gains hundreds of additional pages each time, despite there being zero new content. Some people clearly have way too much time on their hands.

Anyway, the previous update five months ago was quite disappointing. Anna acted completely out of character, giving Chris a blowjob in her garage like some cheap street hooker — despite not even doing that for her husband. Even considering the circumstances, where she suspects her husband of cheating, this behavior felt extremely unlikely.

This latest update, while disappointing for those who dislike content involving older men, was actually better in my opinion. Not because of the Marvin scenes — those are still unrealistic to me. And no, just because she was used to being stared at by men and grew up with brothers doesn't mean a woman would react so calmly when a creepy old man shows up uninvited in the lactation room at work.
It’s also ridiculous that a 2-meter-tall guy backs down to old, fragile Marvin. That’s just not something that would happen in real life — unless maybe the tall guy was on probation and didn’t want to risk getting into a fight and ending up back in jail. That’s the only remotely realistic explanation I can think of at the moment.
(Marvin's path is by far the least realistic to me, even if Anna supposedly has a thing for older men.)

But let’s not forget that this is a porn visual novel — if it were truly realistic, most of the content wouldn’t happen in the first place.

Although the Hank storyline is actually developing in a solid way. Sure, it's progressing slowly, but it's doing so in a more believable and grounded manner compared to all the other routes in the game. I'm genuinely curious to see where the Hank route goes.

Jake's storyline, on the other hand, is incredibly boring. Others have pointed this out already: he's the typical "pretty boy" archetype — cocky, self-assured, and well-endowed. It's completely predictable that Anna will give in to his advances in a moment of weakness. That makes it uninteresting.

Adding to that, while many people find Anna physically very attractive, they don't find her particularly likable. That's why so many want to see her humiliated — there's a strong humiliation kink driving much of the interest. In that context, Jake almost feels like a reward for her, especially compared to the other sleazy men trying to get into her pants. That makes his route feel dull.

One surprising detail was the appearance of Anna’s mother, who looks almost nothing like her. Obviously Anna isn’t a natural blonde, but a fake one by dyeing her hair— both of her parents have dark hair, making it extremely unlikely that she’d be blonde herself. Even if one grandparent had blond(e) hair, it's a recessive trait, so the chances are very slim.

In summary, five months feels like an awfully long time for what supporters got in return. The whole update is a mixed bag, but still better than the previous one — mainly because of the Hank route.

Good post. There isn't really much more to say.

 

[Sadowdark]

I wonder as these VN goes by realistic way of corruption... howcome Ana remember her corruption level with each and every characters beside her problems lol... she's like ohh this character is new, so he can only grope me ....then she meets next character on same day, she goes ohh this character had groped me last time, so I can get nude in front of him n he can massage my breast...and before sleeping she meet Chris n think that ohh i already gave him hj so I will give bj because I am horny lol...n sleep unsatisfied as usual....different level of limitation with different characters on same day. Lol stupidity realism. It's like Ana has corruption level chart for all characters mugged by heart on her mind.

Write it paint it Sophia Parker, rarely has remorse. New events have amnesia, does not remember what happened with this character in the past.

 

[Sadowdark]

I don't need every woman to be a 10/10, unrealistic knockout in the looks department but I did expect more. I had no idea that was her mom until it was explicitly said, lol. I assumed it was a random babysitter or neighbor or something lol.

I don't see how that woman and her father could make Anna...but sometimes that happens.

If I ever made a VN I know the first two I'd make, both real-life stories (not involving me just instances I know of). One of the subjects is an attractive girl that looks nothing like her parents. At all. She somehow has naturally tan/olive skin and looks like an undefinable mix of caucasian and Asian while her parents are pale and European ancestry as can be. It turns out when you see a photo of her great-grandmother you see where her look comes from. It's bizarre.

Anyway, yeah, I was surprised to see that's her mom but it felt realistic so I'm cool with it.

Because children inherit genes from their grandparents, not just their parents.

 

[IHATESlowburnBluBallgames]

Because children inherit genes from their grandparents, not just their parents.

Or he made her fugly so I would stop saying David could move in with his mother in law and bang her, lol

 

[Couto25]

Write it paint it Sophia Parker, rarely has remorse. New events have amnesia, does not remember what happened with this character in the past.

What Marvin did wasn't even called as pusssy touching..it's more of a panty licking scene.

Sophia goes with different mentality...she doesn't have to remember what she did with the character the last time as her aim is to meet only 1 character per day...her brain is programmed straight forward.,. whenever feel horny, give HJ/BJ no matter what relationship she has with them...new, stranger, old , girl, kid, shopkeeper, neighbour, futa all these things doesn't matter to her.

 

[Sadowdark]

On a lighter note....How does everyone find Ana's mom looks??? I was hoping for lil more bold & beauty and a lil modern..even though she wont be having any scenes.

I like this original look of women in games, it doesn't bother me, and if I can fuck such wow, then I'm in heaven, unfortunately such games are few and rare. And not when I play the game, it's a very big problem, without a signature I don't know who is the mother and who is the daughter, because they look the same and the same age and are like models from the catwalk. And it's enough that the creators age the mother's character, adding a few wrinkles or gray hair.

 

[IHATESlowburnBluBallgames]

What Marvin did wasn't even called as pusssy touching..it's more of a panty licking scene.

Sophia goes with different mentality...she doesn't have to remember what she did with the character the last time as her aim is to meet only 1 character per day...her brain is programmed straight forward.,. whenever feel horny, give HJ/BJ no matter what relationship she has with them...new, stranger, old , girl, boy, futa all these things doesn't matter to her.

Correction Sophia has not given a bj in the game to anyone but hubby yet which doesn’t count In 8 years

 

[Sadowdark]

Or he made her fugly so I would stop saying David could move in with his mother in law and bang her, lol

Or that Anna wouldn't be jealous of her mother when she wanted to seduce David or vice versa.

 

[AlfredBundy4]

Because children inherit genes from their grandparents, not just their parents.

Obviously, you fn clown lol.

Her physical traits skipped 2 whole generations entirely across multiple children.That's odd for anyone, let alone any group of ancestry.

She looks nothing like her mom, grandma, aunts or cousins. She look absolutely nothing like her daddy, grandpa or uncles.

Sheblooks identical to her great-grandma specifically who's physical genetic traits bypassed two generations and a total of about 10 people (if we just count the females)

That's not the norm. Obviously it happens, as I noted, but not then norm.
That's on par with a bald dude having no bald men in his family for 100 years, lol. Yes, genetically possible but not the norm.

 

[Couto25]

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Correction Sophia has not given a bj in the game to anyone but hubby yet which doesn’t count In 8 years

Aah yea ..she reach to licking in lesbian route not in male route

 

[AlfredBundy4]

Anna was so

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lol, that was probably the worst part of the update from a "is this bitch even paying attention?" standpoint.

Nobody is like
"OH, NO! A 75yo! RUN!"

 

[AlfredBundy4]

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Aah yea ..she reach to licking in lesbian route not in male route

Yes, she ate her daughter's pussy lol. No BJ to another man.

It's so funny to me that she is a normal woman, a normal housewife in all ways and 17 days after moving into a new house she eats her own daughter's pussy and jacks her son off lmao.

Dev pretentiously tents his fingers talking about "the utmost realism" lol. I need 30 years to tell this realistic tale.

Bitch ate her daughter's pussy 13 seconds after moving. There has to be a voodoo sec curse in that house or Sophia is a bipolar alien.

 

[La Dani]

Uhm. A super beautiful woman who "makes things" with an old man

 

[Sadowdark]

Obviously, you fn clown lol.

Her physical traits skipped 2 whole generations entirely across multiple children.That's odd for anyone, let alone any group of ancestry.

She looks nothing like her mom, grandma, aunts or cousins. She look absolutely nothing like her daddy, grandpa or uncles.

Sheblooks identical to her great-grandma specifically who's physical genetic traits bypassed two generations and a total of about 10 people (if we just count the females)

That's not the norm. Obviously it happens, as I noted, but not then norm.
That's on par with a bald dude having no bald men in his family for 100 years, lol. Yes, genetically possible but not the norm.

I'll tell you, my siblings and I don't look like our parents, but more like our grandparents. My dad's family wasn't tall, and since I'm tall, neither were my siblings. But my grandma's parents were already tall.

 

[AlfredBundy4]

I'll tell you, my siblings and I don't look like our parents, but more like our grandparents. My dad's family wasn't tall, and since I'm tall, neither were my siblings. But my grandma's parents were already tall.

I have a similar situation but just with height. Im much taller than my family but we all look alike facially. The last person in my family at my height was my grandpa's brother.

Genetics are crazy sometimes.

The chick I'm talking about always had new people that met her ask if she's Asian or Latina or something. They could never pinpoint her ethnicity even though she's just a white girl. Her family ancestors are all Irish, iirc. She just had this one random and specific set of genetics that have her darker skin and a very unique set of facial features that both go back to her great-grandma.
Everyone in her family are generic white folks, midwestern crackers...and she looks sorta Asian lol. It's crazy.