VN Ren'Py A Perfect Marriage [v0.7.4c] [Mr Palmer]

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Arunrobin

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There is lot of good games about sex but it not include topic like rape, blackmail, kidnap and even pschopath who kill members which make game look more virtual than real but bad Bobby saga has this things and now his creator leave this game without further story developed
 
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Davidleene said:
can some zoom towards both glasses and see if you can make something out of it, are they alone? i dont think so
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Yeah, some lights. Or maybe those are the aliens the Dev is going to introduce that are gonna abduct the FMC, while the other girl has been an alien this entire time. Nice catch, you found the hidden aliens.
 
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AlfredBundy4

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Couto25 said:
For corrupt path it confuse me ....like on one hand she tease Marvin by unbuttoning her top, then Ana tease Marvin and let him touch her thighs in the bar, then she allow Marvin to grope her ass and boobs but when Marvin saw her topless in the last update, she gets pissed off..so last Marvin/Ana interaction doesn't get along with corrupt path at all.
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Agree. For the praise I've given the story and it's elements of realism (that can be had in a porn story) there is plenty of inconsistency in behavior that feels like filler for horny readers during scenes lacking any need for sexuality than an organic event.

Which is part of what I meant a few posts back. Some of the behavior we'd consider faithful or simply not-slutty needs to just be baked-in. Letting him more or less just watch her breastfeed is something few women would allow even if they were whores (and Anna is definitely not at this stage, at most she has a trist with her husband's friend that's in full bloom). It felt a bit out of character to have that.

Now, Marvin has felt her up so I get why the writer would think that was fine but it's just an odd thing to have in there even for the 1% that plays the faithful path.

I'm not complaining but if I'm going to point out the parts I think are good and realistic I need to point out the things that don't quite match those levels.
 
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Couto25

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AlfredBundy4 said:
Agree. For the praise I've given the story and it's elements of realism (that can be had in a porn story) there is plenty of inconsistency in behavior that feels like filler for horny readers during scenes lacking any need for sexuality than an organic event.

Which is part of what I meant a few posts back. Some of the behavior we'd consider faithful or simply not-slutty needs to just be baked-in. Letting him more or less just watch her breastfeed is something few women would allow even if they were whores (and Anna is definitely not at this stage, at most she has a trist with her husband's friend that's in full bloom). It felt a bit out of character to have that.

Now, Marvin has felt her up so I get why the writer would think that was fine but it's just an odd thing to have in there even for the 1% that plays the faithful path.

I'm not complaining but if I'm going to point out the parts I think are good and realistic I need to point out the things that don't quite match those levels.
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Maybe That kind of situation is required for the story to start with Ana/Kendra bar scene about Marvin discussion...but its fine. Yes, there are so many dialogues and events that doesn't get along with path. And if we ask MP, he will justify with something and people will have to get along with that reason even if they dont want to. Like he will say Ana was drunk in all those previous scene but Ana is sober in recent one and she was topless so she got pissed off. Any justification will do.

And nah its better not to take these VN as realistic lol...The thing is when someone consider and take the story as realistic, and do a deep dive into all characters or if they've gone through similar situation in their own life, they try to relate it as per their own experience....even if a normal breakup might have happen, they will see themselves as David lol. And MP will unnecessary add more boring slow events just to extend the project that would have ended in 5 years will now take 8/9 years lol because of more slower pace. The more someone dive into realism in any individual character path, the more problem MP will create for himself. I mean right now Ana ass is being groped by 5 people per day lol that's not realism at all. Who knows when her corruption will grow, she will give 4 handjobs per day lol.

MP took idea from original VN and he try to add corruption in all characters path that were there in original VN. So he will get stuck at many points where even if it doesn't make sense for a faithful/corrupt path, he will show those things to produce the desire corrupt/faithful outcome without changing the main storyline. So yea many events will be absurd that were not present in original VN and MP is creating now for this VN... original VN my guess showed confused path ending.... he's creating extra faithful and corrupt path. Wednesday and Thursday there's not much events to show beside main bar scene and meeting with grant, so whatever he write for these 2 days is pure MP creativity beside those 2 events.
 
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Maybe That kind of situation is required for the story to start with Ana/Kendra bar scene about Marvin discussion...but its fine. Yes, there are so many dialogues and events that doesn't get along with path. And if we ask MP, he will justify with something and people will have to get along with that reason even if they dont want to. Like he will say Ana was drunk in all those previous scene but Ana is sober in recent one and she was topless so she got pissed off. Any justification will do.

And nah its better not to take these VN as realistic lol...The thing is when someone consider and take the story as realistic, and do a deep dive into all characters or if they've gone through similar situation in their own life, they try to relate it as per their own experience....even if a normal breakup might have happen, they will see themselves as David lol. And MP will unnecessary add more boring slow events just to extend the project that would have ended in 5 years will now take 8/9 years lol because of more slower pace. The more someone dive into realism in any individual character path, the more problem MP will create for himself. I mean right now Ana ass is being groped by 5 people per day lol that's not realism at all. Who knows when her corruption will grow, she will give 4 handjobs per day lol.

MP took idea from original VN and he try to add corruption in all characters path that were there in original VN. So he will get stuck at many points where even if it doesn't make sense for a faithful/corrupt path, he will show those things to produce the desire corrupt/faithful outcome without changing the main storyline. So yea many events will be absurd that were not present in original VN and MP is creating now for this VN... original VN my guess showed confused path ending.... he's creating extra faithful and corrupt path. Wednesday and Thursday there's not much events to show beside main bar scene and meeting with grant, so whatever he write for these 2 days is pure MP creativity beside those 2 events.
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But in the original story there are no old fish, so it's a completely different game than the original story.
 
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Sadowdark said:
I also like the original look of women in games and I also love when they are ugly,:love:
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ugly or beggar is interesting thing in game
delivery guy/ worker constructor men / bagger homless with rich wife
still look for right skin
i found hair for marvin think near
and want make eyes and skin face look older
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sslovoe said:
ugly older not scary View attachment 4478451

animie never get old even grand mother make her milf
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Reference to the last picture! Those drawin' style it's somethin' else. I believe we found them more in the Japanese industry(Hentai) with those drawin' style Granny in 80's could look more sexier and fuckable than a 20 to 30 yo :whistle:
As a matter of fact I'll take this granny 1 million Time over Kendra:sneaky: bandicam_2025-01-25_02-20-18-376.jpg
 
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