- Anna doesn't have hot sex with David. David doesn't turn to masturbation or porn to suppress his hormones. Anna blames David for everything.
- The play is said to be realistic, but it is clearly written by someone who does not understand male nature. Men think about sex, this is as true for David. That's why the first 2 chapters are very weak except for the phone correspondence.
- The husband suspects nothing. There is a baby in the house. There should be a walkie-talkie to report the baby crying and a camera system to check the baby in the room. Before or after the bath scene, a shadow passing by the baby's room could have been dropped in David's pocket to add excitement to the story, after all, we are playing a game of corruption. There is one-sided cheating here, it doesn't give excitement. the scene is very shallow.
- They don't have a closed-circuit camera system in their house (I have one in my garage, it alerts me when there is movement in the evening. if it is turned off, it alerts me that it is turned off). Anna choosing her own garage to suck cock is wrong. This scene didn't excite me.
- The old man's cock was made small, which I liked.
- 1000+ comments about a VN that doesn't have much to say, there is a solid fan base that really likes slow burning games. There are 26 updates from 0.7.4 to 1.0.0 those who like slow burning games are really patient.
Thank You.