VN Ren'Py Completed A Petal Among Thorns [v6.0.2-RE] [Lockheart]

[Spatenklopper]

We're venturing outside of our traditional writing style to try to find what works for people and what doesn't. While we're extremely proud of Avalon, it didn't meet our expectations in terms of popularity.

Hi Myrabelle,

thank you for your answer, even if it causes me a bit stomach pain personally,
because the writing style in particular has a large share in a vn, at least in one that wants to tell a story and should not only serve as a quick fap.
I play VN because of the story behind it, if i'm looking for relief, there is simple porn, ..... or the wife ...

The following is not related to you now, but what use is it to have the most beautiful pictures and animations if the story behind them was poorly written or chased through an auto translator without any correction.
Some games are really unplayable because even with a lot of imagination you can't guess the meaning of the texts.

I found Avalon to be one of the most beautifully written stories and I am so sorry that the game was so undervalued and received too little support for you.

To be honest, I'm not sure if the reason was the writing style there.
I suspect, from experience with 2-3 other games, that for some people that was that difficult topic.
As soon as drugs, abuse or rape appear somewhere, you have already lost quite a number of possible customers here.
Many want not even deal with the story with such content.

A good example for this is the game by zoey.
In my eyes a great story, but with a heavy background.
It is amazing to read how many people write in the thread who have banned the game on the spot without actually testing it once.

But as I said, it's just my personal opinion.
You don't need to please me.
I also like your stories despite a few snippets of text that are annoying to me from time to time.

We hope you continue to enjoy our style of writing even as it does change and grow.

My only wish is that you don't change it too much, because instead of growing, I see a small step back.

 

[Spatenklopper]

I will start at the beginning when I play ch 3 and see what it feels like for prevalence but my recall of ch 2 was that I was pretty happy.

Play Chapter 3 and especially the last scene there and you will see what i mean.
And I didn't speak of removing either, just not to overdo it.

By the way, I can live quite well with daddy.

 

[EfontMan]

Okay. We've made the adjustment.

We'll suspend the change for now

Sounds like you want to write a drama, but you also want the popularity/sale figures of a nukige. I don't think those goals are particularly compatible in a single game. But flip-flopping back and forth halfway through development is unlikely to end up pleasing either camp.

 

[bacienvu88]

Hey GetOutOfMyLab!

Ignorance is Bliss was the working title. We're now planning on calling it A Moment of Bliss. It will be more focused on the MC's relationship with Bliss. The third and final installment will be about Moon, titled Over the Moon. This all could change but it's what we're calling them right now.

Thank you for playing!

And then the final harem chapter A Moment of Bliss Seeing a Petal Among Thorns Over the Moon?

 

[kevjo76]

Normally I wouldn't bother, and this will probably get me an off-topic removal, but I'm just bored enough atm.
My apologies to the Dev for the unnecessary comment clutter.
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You just shouldn't have, no matter how bored you are...
That's not an issue of logic, champ... that's literally how statistics work.
The OP made a comment about sample size being inadequate, that's all I was addressing, and NOTHING about the content of any poll.
My apologies to the Dev that he has so many commenters willing to publicly demonstrate their willful ignorance.

 

[ImmortalNight]

And then the final harem chapter A Moment of Bliss Seeing a Petal Among Thorns Over the Moon?

Petals in the Blissful Moonlight

 

[alutarox]

Petals in the Blissful Moonlight

Is it too hopeful to wish for "Rose Petals in the Blissful Moonlight"?

 

[KnuckleDragger79]

how can you be feverishly masturbating, playing a game, moving a mouse, drinking coffee all at the same time. You got like 4 arms?

Because I am a god among men.

 

[ArchX]

I think I've a new favourite D:

 

[lordfridge9]

Come on. The 2nd game HAS to be called "Deep In Bliss"

 

[ArchX]

Come on. The 2nd game HAS to be called "Deep In Bliss"

3rd game: Howlin' at the Moon? XD

 

[karrek]

Is there no unpatched version anymore? I liked this game but the actual blood-relation thing really turns me off, I prefer to put them in as step-family, but now with version 3 I can't figure out a way to do that.

 

[lordfridge9]

the actual blood-relation thing really turns me off, I prefer to put them in as step-family,

SAY THAT AGAIN, SAY THAT AGAIN! I DARE YOU MOTHERFUCKER, SAY THAT ONE MORE TIME!

 

[ImmortalNight]

That's the first time I've seen a complaint about not wanting incest.

 

[lordfridge9]

That's the first time I've seen a complaint about not wanting incest.

Such blasphemy will NOT be tolerated 'ERE!!!

 

[Mokey]

Outstanding. On my short list for games to keep an eye on.

 

[mammonite]

okay that was BOMB. loved it.

 

[hcguy]

3rd game: Howlin' at the Moon? XD

Man in the Moon, surely.

 

[lardtree90]

I've always wondered why porn game devs feel the need to add a 'sound' for cumming. Like, does your dick sound like a wet fart when it comes? You should get that checked out if it does. Cumming doesn't make a noise.

Edit: The sound is when she swallows, thankfully. Still a weird noise, but least I was wrong about the dick making a sound lol

 

[karrek]

That's the first time I've seen a complaint about not wanting incest.

lol, it's specifically the parent/child thing that squicks me out. Siblings I don't mind one way or the other, and cousins is actually kind of hot to me, but the parent/child thing I just don't care for (no kink-shaming here though, if you like it that's great ).

*Edit - I thought the way this game handled it in Episodes 1 and 2 was perfect, you put in your own relationships and voila.