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be warn, this follows the whole story (current chapter) so spoilers:Strange... usually I put things off specifically for very bad writing. But I guess anything would seem good if my previous reading before that was a family harem manwha, where the guy is 18+, learns about masturbation and suddenly his pee pee hurts and still needs mommy to help him (Secret class).
By constant personality changes I guess you mean MCs wife? In general the characters and their paths have made sense to me and nothing too crazy.
Agreed. There is no consistency in the writing of female characters. After each few chapters they take a 180° turn. That second girl Minha's character is a complete joke. During the beginning, she was all over the MC and after one fuck session with antagonist she completely forgets about MC and falls for the Antagonist lol. And then now she again wants to be back with the MC. Good thing the MC rejected her coldly in the recent chapter.be warn, this follows the whole story (current chapter) so spoilers:
mx wife have the biggest personality change throughout the story, she felt guilty when the mc found out about her affair, yet she still pursued the antagonist and made a plan to overthrow the new love interest and be able to return to her husband. when that happen what did she do? stay with the antagonist. Found out she was pregnant and had plenty of time to tell her husband, what did she do? stay with the antagonist and not tell him until she felt she dislike her poor lifestyle, and that baby might not be the mc baby. I can go on, but those are the ones that stand out the most about her.
the ex-girlfriend (artist favorite hence the cover art), Her initial introduction was supposed to be that she was the female version of the antagonist, and seemed hesitant about pursuing a romantic relationship with the mc, when the mc found out about her "affair," she tried to explain herself instead of moving on, and decided to execute order 66 on the antagonist, just to fall over the antagonist and completely forget about her plan and even had a competition with the mc and his girl. The best part of it, she didn't like sharing the mc with other woman, yet she is fully aware that the antagonist is sleeping with others and tries to get herself pregnant so she can baby trap him (it is unclear if the antagonist hada a vasectomy)You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
The boss lady. she is a swinger through and through, was fucking other man, and was/is jealous of the mc when he was with the ex-girlfriend/current girlfriend even tho she have other side piece too. The funniest thing I still don't comprehend is how did she get the antagonist phone number, it was never established she just magically have it and was able to contact him. Yes, she was willing to throw her marriage for the mc, but she is throwing her company to keep the antagonist working for her and is upset that the man she wanted to see suffer is willing to resign the company, while her husband is letting her the destroy the company HE built for some dick.
The current girl, is honestly a hit or miss, depending on how the story goes she may or may not get taken away, the second writer gave the impression that she was going to be taken away, but I don't know what the third artist will do.
The antagonist, there is not much I can say besides magic sun dick (hence his blonde hair). I do can say that his character doesn't really have a reason to stay this long in the story (just my opinion), my reason is that he likes causing friction in couples hence the reason he said that the mc and his wife downfall was boring. Onto that point, he could just left and search for another couple to cause trouble, but he didn't. There is also the fact that the mc and the antagonist didn't know each other prior their first meeting at the pool, so what did the antagonist had for the mc? gay feelings lol? since he keeps comparing himself to the mc when sleeps with the other girls and as I say on my previous comment trying to one up him. The best part is that he might not had a vasectomy
The protagonist wasn't written well either, he went from I'm a chad I can even bang your mom, to I'm happy with my marriage, to now that I'm divorced I can do whatever I want and be a chad again but I am depressed, to I'm really depressed, to I need to move on
I don't think I've seen so much inconsistency in a story, maybe is just me and the people that read it that may see it as incosistency, and you may be right.
I wont laugh at you. I like the drama inside of a non-vanilla story, as much if not more than a sugar sweet vanilla story. They're fictional stories. What I'm guessing you like is for the author to stick the landing and provide a satisfying ending. There are a few routes in this game that do just that and some that really don't. Harry picking up a knife and laughing, then roll credits is not an ending. Harry fumbling the knife, failing at murdering Luca, and getting thrown into jail or worse, is an ending. Maybe it's not Luca and he just kills Laura, or fails at it. Harsh, but plausible endings. Harry destroying a company laptop, understandably, after being completely blindsided by his wife staring in prego porn with Luca left on it for all to see, then credits, is not an ending. What happened to Harry and Aya afterwards? Does Aya go for revenage for Harry? She wouldn't forgive Laura for destroying Harry. I doubt nothing happened. My memory is going to be fuzzy on these earlier released routes, as I played them awhile ago, so maybe it's mentioned.I'm not playing it since I'm more netori (laugh all you want) and regular ntr doesn't really feel god to me unless there is a revenge or move on ending, and from what I read, the "good ending" might not be satisfying, unless aya also have a more fledge out good ending *cross fingers* sorry, if I sound like a disappointed
it was never mentioned why the antagonist have a hate boner on the mc. If I have to assume, it'll probably be out of boredom, but that doesn't really feel part of his character. if you want to talk about a good antagonist, then I'll probably say the antagonist of "my kingdom" or "silent war" (same story different title), the mc started as a weakly and simp, and the antagonist have a goal, unlike illicit love antagonist have two seasons, and the ending was okish at some leveli still don't understand why the antagonist is after the MC? Was there any backstory I missed or was it never mentioned?
as much as I want to say yest to that, I have to say no, I came to this threat under the thought that this series might have avoidable ntr *cue is ntr avoidable joke* that was when this threat had about 80 or 100 pages worth of posts, and my monkey brain decided to read everything, and since then I have stuck to it, read comments and respond to them on things that I remember from early on lol (a bit sad of me if you ask me). Anyways, when the abrupt ending came out I decided to try the game but I only played it off harry perspective, and the game didn't sit on me right. At the time, I was also reading (or listening in this case) a lot of cheating reddit stories on tik tok since then I haven't play it and joined the #spoilergang and asked or read spoilers of the story, while also waiting for something interesting to happen. I guess you can say I'm just here for the ride.What I'm guessing you like is for the author to stick the landing and provide a satisfying ending.
for those who didn't know:
aya route is the current update, 2 more updates to finish it.
after that the good ending which is 1 update worth will be the final ending and complete part 1 of the game.
part 2 of the game is where aya is the main heroine is planned to have less endings, but aya will have proper buildup with harry and the corruption will be slower than the current route, hopefully something like with laura and the rule system.
Hehehe I can hardly wait
that's probably what's gonna happen, so it will also be reverse ntr from laura perspective.so part 2 is gonna be the part where Harry "gives himself" to Aya from the start and dump Laura? (probably by chosing the other option that isn't "i.. i can't") and Luca is gonna interfere and stole her as he did with Laura? I wonder what he will do to blackmail Aya..
my guess is that harry kiss her back at that route so laura has to give in and laura and luca fuck in the wardrobe and will get caught and harry see her horny face and cry and runs away.so part 2 is gonna be the part where Harry "gives himself" to Aya from the start and dump Laura? (probably by chosing the other option that isn't "i.. i can't") and Luca is gonna interfere and stole her as he did with Laura? I wonder what he will do to blackmail Aya..
Give up to Luca because of curiosity.. I really hope that don't turn out this way, idk, so far Aya always watched Luca and Laura having sex and never had any curiosity to try something with him, only hating and feeling repulsemy guess is that harry kiss her back at that route so laura has to give in and laura and luca fuck in the wardrobe and will get caught and harry see her horny face and cry and runs away.
Aya will probabbly follow him cuddel him and is their for harry.
Harry will break up with laura and laura corruption is probabbly way faster on this route.
Aya and harry start dating,cuddels are happy move together and have sex for first time our 2 pump champion harry falls asleep like a stone and than aya hears laura and luca fuck the whole night and hears her noughty moans and ask herself if it really feels that good because she feeled not that way with harry for her first time??? maybe even fingers herself and feels bad after that
but she will probabbly be more ressistent than laura and he cant blackmail her so her corruption will be slower and we will get a bit more happy aya and harry time (which will probably piss luca off that he cant get her that easy and harry is happy and will let it out on laura sexually) before luca complellty breaks aya because aya get to couriouse about laura and why she gave up so easy because in ayas opinion she had the perfect life and seems so happy at work and this curiosity/sexual inexperience will probabbly be her downfall and probabbly get fucked in that cheap motel like laura did.
yeah but my guess is that the author on the aya path will give you the feeling of aya is different and aya will not get corrupted and will give you more happy time dates ,cuddles, first time together and a bit of hope that maybe aya and harry will have a happy end but in the end she will get fucked in the same cheap motel and makes the same face laura did would be my guess that the author plays with your feelings WOW aya is so ressistent and she really loves harry and than takes everything awayGive up to Luca because of curiosity.. I really hope that don't turn out this way, idk, so far Aya always watched Luca and Laura having sex and never had any curiosity to try something with him, only hating and feeling repulse
that's what she said at the start of the game a little before the first choice, that she will never fall for a guy like luca and she hates himyeah but my guess is that the author on the aya path will give you the feeling of aya is different and aya will not get corrupted and will give you more happy time dates ,cuddles, first time together and a bit of hope that maybe aya and harry will have a happy end but in the end she will get fucked in the same cheap motel and makes the same face laura did would be my guess that the author plays with your feelings WOW aya is so ressistent and she really loves harry and than takes everything away
I think he really will play with that hope thing and this will probabbly fuck you even more up emotionally because if he does this good you will think maybe they have a chance but it was rigged from the start
yeah that route will be emotional to damaging aya is perfect waifu materialthat's what she said at the start of the game a little before the first choice, that she will never fall for a guy like luca and she hates him