VN Ren'Py Completed A Promise Best Left Unkept [Bonus S2 Ep 9-11] [Hangover Cat]

[Revo]

Strange... usually I put things off specifically for very bad writing. But I guess anything would seem good if my previous reading before that was a family harem manwha, where the guy is 18+, learns about masturbation and suddenly his pee pee hurts and still needs mommy to help him (Secret class).

By constant personality changes I guess you mean MCs wife? In general the characters and their paths have made sense to me and nothing too crazy.

be warn, this follows the whole story (current chapter) so spoilers:

mx wife have the biggest personality change throughout the story, she felt guilty when the mc found out about her affair, yet she still pursued the antagonist and made a plan to overthrow the new love interest and be able to return to her husband. when that happen what did she do? stay with the antagonist. Found out she was pregnant and had plenty of time to tell her husband, what did she do? stay with the antagonist and not tell him until she felt she dislike her poor lifestyle, and that baby might not be the mc baby. I can go on, but those are the ones that stand out the most about her.

the ex-girlfriend (artist favorite hence the cover art), Her initial introduction was supposed to be that she was the female version of the antagonist, and seemed hesitant about pursuing a romantic relationship with the mc, when the mc found out about her "affair," she tried to explain herself instead of moving on, and decided to execute order 66 on the antagonist, just to fall over the antagonist and completely forget about her plan and even had a competition with the mc and his girl

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. The best part of it, she didn't like sharing the mc with other woman, yet she is fully aware that the antagonist is sleeping with others and tries to get herself pregnant so she can baby trap him (it is unclear if the antagonist hada a vasectomy)

The boss lady. she is a swinger through and through, was fucking other man, and was/is jealous of the mc when he was with the ex-girlfriend/current girlfriend even tho she have other side piece too. The funniest thing I still don't comprehend is how did she get the antagonist phone number, it was never established she just magically have it and was able to contact him. Yes, she was willing to throw her marriage for the mc, but she is throwing her company to keep the antagonist working for her and is upset that the man she wanted to see suffer is willing to resign the company, while her husband is letting her the destroy the company HE built for some dick.

The current girl, is honestly a hit or miss, depending on how the story goes she may or may not get taken away, the second writer gave the impression that she was going to be taken away, but I don't know what the third artist will do.

The antagonist, there is not much I can say besides magic sun dick (hence his blonde hair). I do can say that his character doesn't really have a reason to stay this long in the story (just my opinion), my reason is that he likes causing friction in couples hence the reason he said that the mc and his wife downfall was boring. Onto that point, he could just left and search for another couple to cause trouble, but he didn't. There is also the fact that the mc and the antagonist didn't know each other prior their first meeting at the pool, so what did the antagonist had for the mc? gay feelings lol? since he keeps comparing himself to the mc when sleeps with the other girls and as I say on my previous comment trying to one up him. The best part is that he might not had a vasectomy

The protagonist wasn't written well either, he went from I'm a chad I can even bang your mom, to I'm happy with my marriage, to now that I'm divorced I can do whatever I want and be a chad again but I am depressed, to I'm really depressed, to I need to move on

I don't think I've seen so much inconsistency in a story, maybe is just me and the people that read it that may see it as incosistency, and you may be right.

 

[NovaBlast@99]

be warn, this follows the whole story (current chapter) so spoilers:

mx wife have the biggest personality change throughout the story, she felt guilty when the mc found out about her affair, yet she still pursued the antagonist and made a plan to overthrow the new love interest and be able to return to her husband. when that happen what did she do? stay with the antagonist. Found out she was pregnant and had plenty of time to tell her husband, what did she do? stay with the antagonist and not tell him until she felt she dislike her poor lifestyle, and that baby might not be the mc baby. I can go on, but those are the ones that stand out the most about her.

the ex-girlfriend (artist favorite hence the cover art), Her initial introduction was supposed to be that she was the female version of the antagonist, and seemed hesitant about pursuing a romantic relationship with the mc, when the mc found out about her "affair," she tried to explain herself instead of moving on, and decided to execute order 66 on the antagonist, just to fall over the antagonist and completely forget about her plan and even had a competition with the mc and his girl

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. The best part of it, she didn't like sharing the mc with other woman, yet she is fully aware that the antagonist is sleeping with others and tries to get herself pregnant so she can baby trap him (it is unclear if the antagonist hada a vasectomy)

The boss lady. she is a swinger through and through, was fucking other man, and was/is jealous of the mc when he was with the ex-girlfriend/current girlfriend even tho she have other side piece too. The funniest thing I still don't comprehend is how did she get the antagonist phone number, it was never established she just magically have it and was able to contact him. Yes, she was willing to throw her marriage for the mc, but she is throwing her company to keep the antagonist working for her and is upset that the man she wanted to see suffer is willing to resign the company, while her husband is letting her the destroy the company HE built for some dick.

The current girl, is honestly a hit or miss, depending on how the story goes she may or may not get taken away, the second writer gave the impression that she was going to be taken away, but I don't know what the third artist will do.

The antagonist, there is not much I can say besides magic sun dick (hence his blonde hair). I do can say that his character doesn't really have a reason to stay this long in the story (just my opinion), my reason is that he likes causing friction in couples hence the reason he said that the mc and his wife downfall was boring. Onto that point, he could just left and search for another couple to cause trouble, but he didn't. There is also the fact that the mc and the antagonist didn't know each other prior their first meeting at the pool, so what did the antagonist had for the mc? gay feelings lol? since he keeps comparing himself to the mc when sleeps with the other girls and as I say on my previous comment trying to one up him. The best part is that he might not had a vasectomy

The protagonist wasn't written well either, he went from I'm a chad I can even bang your mom, to I'm happy with my marriage, to now that I'm divorced I can do whatever I want and be a chad again but I am depressed, to I'm really depressed, to I need to move on

I don't think I've seen so much inconsistency in a story, maybe is just me and the people that read it that may see it as incosistency, and you may be right.

Agreed. There is no consistency in the writing of female characters. After each few chapters they take a 180° turn. That second girl Minha's character is a complete joke. During the beginning, she was all over the MC and after one fuck session with antagonist she completely forgets about MC and falls for the Antagonist lol. And then now she again wants to be back with the MC. Good thing the MC rejected her coldly in the recent chapter.

The boss lady's character is also stupid. She gets jealous because the MC was fucking her current girlfriend because she wanted him to only be with her while she has side pieces. She's a bigger hypocrite than Laura in some routes of APBLU. And now the boss lady doesn't have any issues with a Playboy like Douche antagonist who's involved with other woman. Great writing there !!! :/

And the ex wife...ughhh, the less said about that dumb character, the better. In the latest chapter she says the antagonist it's her first time having anal while she had anal with him in the earlier chapters :/ Another inconsistency.Funny thing is all three wants to be back with MC again but forgets about it once the antagonist gives them the D.

I think all this 180° turn and plot inconsistency is because of different writers being involved in the story. The past few chapters have only been sex scenes of antagonist with Ex wife, second girl, boss lady, MC with his current gf, rinse, repeat with story not moving ahead in any positive manner. With the new writer, there is a hope of redemption for MC and the story moving forward. Took him late but he has stopped giving fucks to them. With how clueless the antagonist is about work related stuffs unlike Luca in this game, the boss lady is gonna regret hiring him which is already hinted in the story now. This is either setting up to be the biggest redemption arc in pornhwa or another trash bait foe the readers. Let's see. Btw, i still don't understand why the antagonist is after the MC? Was there any backstory I missed or was it never mentioned?

 

[Shatteredstar]

I'm not playing it since I'm more netori (laugh all you want) and regular ntr doesn't really feel god to me unless there is a revenge or move on ending, and from what I read, the "good ending" might not be satisfying, unless aya also have a more fledge out good ending *cross fingers* sorry, if I sound like a disappointed

I wont laugh at you. I like the drama inside of a non-vanilla story, as much if not more than a sugar sweet vanilla story. They're fictional stories. What I'm guessing you like is for the author to stick the landing and provide a satisfying ending. There are a few routes in this game that do just that and some that really don't. Harry picking up a knife and laughing, then roll credits is not an ending. Harry fumbling the knife, failing at murdering Luca, and getting thrown into jail or worse, is an ending. Maybe it's not Luca and he just kills Laura, or fails at it. Harsh, but plausible endings. Harry destroying a company laptop, understandably, after being completely blindsided by his wife staring in prego porn with Luca left on it for all to see, then credits, is not an ending. What happened to Harry and Aya afterwards? Does Aya go for revenage for Harry? She wouldn't forgive Laura for destroying Harry. I doubt nothing happened. My memory is going to be fuzzy on these earlier released routes, as I played them awhile ago, so maybe it's mentioned.

Aya is a dramatic wild card, even if so far in this route she's doing about as well as Laura at this stage. I don't see her getting out, if at all, without getting the Luca magical creampie special, maybe first man in through the back door, probably all of the above then some, but I could be surprised. It would be a shame if it ended in exactly the same way. Aya has mystery and adds much needed comic relief, I like her character, so I want her to get what she wants, at least at this time. It's not the type of story where the MC wins in a clean break, but I hope Harry gets with Aya in one or more routes. All part of the drama.

Spoiler: Fine examples of much needed comic relief.

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I recommend you play it, at least some of the routes.

edit; grammar...

 

[Revo]

i still don't understand why the antagonist is after the MC? Was there any backstory I missed or was it never mentioned?

it was never mentioned why the antagonist have a hate boner on the mc. If I have to assume, it'll probably be out of boredom, but that doesn't really feel part of his character. if you want to talk about a good antagonist, then I'll probably say the antagonist of "my kingdom" or "silent war" (same story different title), the mc started as a weakly and simp, and the antagonist have a goal, unlike illicit love antagonist have two seasons, and the ending was okish at some level

What I'm guessing you like is for the author to stick the landing and provide a satisfying ending.

as much as I want to say yest to that, I have to say no, I came to this threat under the thought that this series might have avoidable ntr *cue is ntr avoidable joke* that was when this threat had about 80 or 100 pages worth of posts, and my monkey brain decided to read everything, and since then I have stuck to it, read comments and respond to them on things that I remember from early on lol (a bit sad of me if you ask me). Anyways, when the abrupt ending came out I decided to try the game but I only played it off harry perspective, and the game didn't sit on me right. At the time, I was also reading (or listening in this case) a lot of cheating reddit stories on tik tok since then I haven't play it and joined the #spoilergang and asked or read spoilers of the story, while also waiting for something interesting to happen. I guess you can say I'm just here for the ride.

 

[Stardust435]

So what is new in 0.9. Can we bang aya yet?

 

[mommysboiii]

So what is new in 0.9. Can we bang aya yet?

soon brother soon

 

[João Maria]

for those who didn't know:
aya route is the current update, 2 more updates to finish it.
after that the good ending which is 1 update worth will be the final ending and complete part 1 of the game.
part 2 of the game is where aya is the main heroine is planned to have less endings, but aya will have proper buildup with harry and the corruption will be slower than the current route, hopefully something like with laura and the rule system.

so part 2 is gonna be the part where Harry "gives himself" to Aya from the start and dump Laura? (probably by chosing the other option that isn't "i.. i can't") and Luca is gonna interfere and stole her as he did with Laura? I wonder what he will do to blackmail Aya..

 

[Stardust435]

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soon brother soon

Hehehe I can hardly wait

 

[GiGiGus ニクヤセベ!]

To hell with Aya and Laura, now I want to see some action with HC's "wife"

 

[ZUBiDAM]

so part 2 is gonna be the part where Harry "gives himself" to Aya from the start and dump Laura? (probably by chosing the other option that isn't "i.. i can't") and Luca is gonna interfere and stole her as he did with Laura? I wonder what he will do to blackmail Aya..

that's probably what's gonna happen, so it will also be reverse ntr from laura perspective.
and also maya might show up so it could turn out to be really messy

 

[mommysboiii]

so part 2 is gonna be the part where Harry "gives himself" to Aya from the start and dump Laura? (probably by chosing the other option that isn't "i.. i can't") and Luca is gonna interfere and stole her as he did with Laura? I wonder what he will do to blackmail Aya..

my guess is that harry kiss her back at that route so laura has to give in and laura and luca fuck in the wardrobe and will get caught and harry see her horny face and cry and runs away.

Aya will probabbly follow him cuddel him and is their for harry.

Harry will break up with laura and laura corruption is probabbly way faster on this route.

Aya and harry start dating,cuddels are happy move together and have sex for first time our 2 pump champion harry falls asleep like a stone and than aya hears laura and luca fuck the whole night and hears her noughty moans and ask herself if it really feels that good because she feeled not that way with harry for her first time??? maybe even fingers herself and feels bad after that

but she will probabbly be more ressistent than laura and he cant blackmail her so her corruption will be slower and we will get a bit more happy aya and harry time (which will probably piss luca off that he cant get her that easy and harry is happy and will let it out on laura sexually) before luca complellty breaks aya because aya get to couriouse about laura and why she gave up so easy because in ayas opinion she had the perfect life and seems so happy at work and this curiosity/sexual inexperience will probabbly be her downfall and probabbly get fucked in that cheap motel like laura did.

 

[João Maria]

my guess is that harry kiss her back at that route so laura has to give in and laura and luca fuck in the wardrobe and will get caught and harry see her horny face and cry and runs away.

Aya will probabbly follow him cuddel him and is their for harry.

Harry will break up with laura and laura corruption is probabbly way faster on this route.

Aya and harry start dating,cuddels are happy move together and have sex for first time our 2 pump champion harry falls asleep like a stone and than aya hears laura and luca fuck the whole night and hears her noughty moans and ask herself if it really feels that good because she feeled not that way with harry for her first time??? maybe even fingers herself and feels bad after that

but she will probabbly be more ressistent than laura and he cant blackmail her so her corruption will be slower and we will get a bit more happy aya and harry time (which will probably piss luca off that he cant get her that easy and harry is happy and will let it out on laura sexually) before luca complellty breaks aya because aya get to couriouse about laura and why she gave up so easy because in ayas opinion she had the perfect life and seems so happy at work and this curiosity/sexual inexperience will probabbly be her downfall and probabbly get fucked in that cheap motel like laura did.

Give up to Luca because of curiosity.. I really hope that don't turn out this way, idk, so far Aya always watched Luca and Laura having sex and never had any curiosity to try something with him, only hating and feeling repulse

 

[mommysboiii]

Give up to Luca because of curiosity.. I really hope that don't turn out this way, idk, so far Aya always watched Luca and Laura having sex and never had any curiosity to try something with him, only hating and feeling repulse

yeah but my guess is that the author on the aya path will give you the feeling of aya is different and aya will not get corrupted and will give you more happy time dates ,cuddles, first time together and a bit of hope that maybe aya and harry will have a happy end but in the end she will get fucked in the same cheap motel and makes the same face laura did would be my guess that the author plays with your feelings WOW aya is so ressistent and she really loves harry and than takes everything away


I think he really will play with that hope thing and this will probabbly fuck you even more up emotionally because if he does this good you will think maybe they have a chance but it was rigged from the start

 

[ZUBiDAM]

yeah but my guess is that the author on the aya path will give you the feeling of aya is different and aya will not get corrupted and will give you more happy time dates ,cuddles, first time together and a bit of hope that maybe aya and harry will have a happy end but in the end she will get fucked in the same cheap motel and makes the same face laura did would be my guess that the author plays with your feelings WOW aya is so ressistent and she really loves harry and than takes everything away


I think he really will play with that hope thing and this will probabbly fuck you even more up emotionally because if he does this good you will think maybe they have a chance but it was rigged from the start

that's what she said at the start of the game a little before the first choice, that she will never fall for a guy like luca and she hates him

 

[Terix3]

You guys don't see the writing on the wall ?
She and Luca appears to be having similar past - trauma because of dad and mafia family. She refers to her dad as "That man" and for whatever reason she also refers the one that is behind Luca in mafia as "that man".
( I believed that the one backing Luca in mafia was his father but now he implied to have killed him ... )
What if Aya hates Luca because she is afraid of becoming like him ...

 

[Boobitz]

If we are theorycrafting, I think Harry will make her commit to some sort of promise, similar to Laura. This promise will become the weakpoint in whatever relationship she builds with Harry, and is what Luca will abuse.

Luca is very good at seeing what makes people tick, while Harry tries to avoid looking beyond the surface behind people's actions. I think if there is no aggravating issue between Harry and Aya (Ex. The promise), it'll be hard for Luca to really work his corrupting magic and steal someone who is obsessed with Harry (Or maybe the idea of Harry?). Besides of course just "lol rape you like me now".

 

[NTR_Lover87]

Version 0.9 and 0.76 any huge difference ?

Luca bang Aya already ?

 

[mommysboiii]

that's what she said at the start of the game a little before the first choice, that she will never fall for a guy like luca and she hates him

yeah that route will be emotional to damaging aya is perfect waifu material

 

[Shatteredstar]

Version 0.9 and 0.76 any huge difference ?

Luca bang Aya already ?

Maaaybee... Idk...

 

[The_fallen_dragon]

Lmao, finally started playing since the end of the laura routes and at the first aga scene. Right even I thought laura couldn't be anymore unlikable.

And again, I'm astounded that neither aya nor Harry knows how to use their cellphones which are literally shown to be smart phones as a tactical nuke? Especially aya? The one who is suppose to be 19? In an Era where everything from.libe executions of people on open streets to women literally being raped in a god damn subway station gets recorded by onlookers and bypassers?

I'm expected to believe that the second she realized that door was locked and that harry was drugged that she did go straight to her phone and start live streaming or recording qtleast audio recording secretly?

A 19 year old? A 19 year old who has shown to be smarter and about every other route but her own? Really?