VN Ren'Py Completed A Promise Best Left Unkept [Bonus Scenes S2 7-8] [Hangover Cat Purrroduction]

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darchrow98

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This is probably the best western NTR game by far. The initial buildup into corruption was insanely well written, can't say I am a fan of the quick 180 hairstyle and personality change at the end though. In my opinion, it was by no means bad, but I think subtle external changes (e.g. clothing) has more impact and feels more realistic than straight up turning into a different character.

Also, can't wait for Aya's route to finish, her strong personality is perfect for corruption. Looking forward to the Steam release so that I can buy it. Do consider selling it on DLsite to engage the Japanese audience too, their NTR fanbase is quite large.
 
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NewTricks

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I think that the point of NTR is to provoke strong negative emotions. Either that or laugh your ass off. Once you realize this you are free to either enjoy that or avoid it if that is not your thing. Not everyone is turned on by their own emotional masochism or looking for schadenfreude. Whether you self-insert as the man or the woman in the relationship, the relationship is lost either way and both parties are usually lesser and worse off for it. There are some exceptions when there is a better relationship for the woman in the end, but in general, a healthy relationship is lost and an unhealthy relationship takes its place. In rare instances, everyone ends up alone or destroyed.

It remains to be seen how the other endings will be prosecuted, but keep in mind that these things are tragicomedies. Unhappy, ridiculous endings such as what we recently received are to be expected in the other ones as well.
 

ZagorTeNay

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I'd like to see a Dark Hero ending: Harry completely snaps, has a psychotic breakdown, goes full Joker. Fuck being nice, society and it's rules, time for some payback. Final scene with Luca&Laura banging at the door, pleading he lets them out, while poison gas slowly fills the room, all the while watching Harry bang Aya.
 

Puma1978

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I'd like to see a Dark Hero ending: Harry completely snaps, has a psychotic breakdown, goes full Joker. Fuck being nice, society and it's rules, time for some payback. Final scene with Luca&Laura banging at the door, pleading he lets them out, while poison gas slowly fills the room, all the while watching Harry bang Aya.
In my vivid mind Laura suddenly happens to be a Futa and goes ballsdeep with Luca turning him into a submissive cuckold with sore butthole all day long...;-)
 
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inye59

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I think that the point of NTR is to provoke strong negative emotions. Either that or laugh your ass off. Once you realize this you are free to either enjoy that or avoid it if that is not your thing. Not everyone is turned on by their own emotional masochism or looking for schadenfreude. Whether you self-insert as the man or the woman in the relationship, the relationship is lost either way and both parties are usually lesser and worse off for it. There are some exceptions when there is a better relationship for the woman in the end, but in general, a healthy relationship is lost and an unhealthy relationship takes its place. In rare instances, everyone ends up alone or destroyed.

It remains to be seen how the other endings will be prosecuted, but keep in mind that these things are tragicomedies. Unhappy, ridiculous endings such as what we recently received are to be expected in the other ones as well.
I agree with you i've made the same mistake in my first NTR games i was not 100% if i liked them or i hate them and when i realize what i realy like and what not i enjoyed them a lot. Because HoC is a very talented writer and he use some psychology aspcets i fell in the same trap again but it was my mistake and i realy enjoy the end after realize that
 

Rakser

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Hello, how much endings are there on this game and what are they ?
Can Harry prevent Laura to be taken by Luca or is it inevitable ?
 

ASERDDERERT

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Logic and common sence is a big topic wich depends with the subjectivity and the perceptive of the people if we want to make a sketchy conclution to be the most people happy it would be what voltaire said " I detest what you write, but I would give my life to make it possible for you to continue to write. "
Well, "common sense" build on the logic. And it follows it.
And while I do agree with u more or less. It is valid to an extent. Because when u say "it is completely subjectivity", who just creating safe place for intellectually dishonest people. Which will abuse it.

About writings: I think it isn't very good idea to judge writing itself when it includes parts that u just don't like. Like scat for me as an example. I don't like it, very, and it will be difficult to me to judge writing part itself, because I don't really read it in first place.
But yeah, I remember some book which writing I did enjoy but, it just wasn't for me. Sad, but shit happens. And I don't think that it is reason to go and "hate" writer for it.

For me i like the inner struggle of the female protagonist and the naivety of the main character and i like the moment of "revelation" of truth.What usually i don't like is the aftermath or the end-end and how the female lost to the dick (it's a guys orrientent game there are so few girls that we pay that theme) and i respect that i just would like to see the real reason that a girl would cheat and dumb a guy and that reasons usually are indifference,take her for granted,and you stop "claim"her
.Some are ends are awesome some are ok and some are poorly executed.The main reasons on that are two one is NTR theme is so narrow that the writer has little space for maneuverand the other is that we play and we have the perceptive on MC think your self "would i had the same reaction if the main character was Luca?"
For me the answer is NO.
I would had need for instant money for my own personal reasons (and if you ad some drama on that you would be emotional attached as a reader). I would fall in a love-lust situation with Laura and i risked my profit.The constant humiliaton of Aya that could add to your insecurity that Harry is better than you.I would share Laura with my antagonist.I'd risked for her to go to the police laywer her Boss what ever.I would take costant comparisons of how Harry is better than me unitl Laura was mine with only weapons on my arsenal to overcome all that obstacles my brain and my cock.
I don't mean by that that Luca is not a douchebag . I mean with a talent writter and with a different point of view you would have a diffent result on the exactly same story
Well, it is heatai, and there usually girl losing to it.) But I thought it is what usually encompass ntr. She cheats on u, eventually enjoys and stays. And I intentionally said "u", cuz most of time it showed from cucked person perspective.
So "happy end" isn't even an option here, no? Or did I get u wrong? And well, I mean in general if guy on who she is cheating is an asshole, most ppl would be OK, even thus who don't like ntr.
Like, I even struggle to remember ntr with cucked asshole... When u play as cucked asshole.

Last paragraph: mmm, summarizing: fantasy of being one who cucks and steals girl from someone who is better than you, right? But if so, it isn't the ntr kind that I speak about. I speak about when u us MC cucked by "ur" girl.

Thats true and is something that i didn't understant it either.If other guy knew that the girls is cheating i would "justify" the anger...
I mean. If u don't expect from person to do something bad wouldn't you be in awe and anger towards this particular person putting aside more obvious parts. Like the fact that there is always will be someone who would like to fuck ur girl.
This is in short what I have meant overall.

If guy knew and let it happen, done nothing. Honestly no one but himself to blame. Harsh truth I guess.
Different story when they both know. It isn't really cheating already.

Very true, fair enough. But what is man if not to feel?

I assume English isn't your first language? Your reading comprehension needs some work.
Yeah. And maybe it is problem on my side, or maybe u just trying to devalue what I say.
 

drowsy

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Endings in NTR are hard, I think this one was pretty good. This was sort of a 'kamikaze-ending' where the obvious tropes of the genre are taken to an extreme, which negatively impacts the believability of Laura (but you can sorta suspend your disbelief because it sums up the story). Interested in seeing what the other endings will be like, though.
 

MasksDude

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I'd like to see a Dark Hero ending: Harry completely snaps, has a psychotic breakdown, goes full Joker. Fuck being nice, society and it's rules, time for some payback. Final scene with Luca&Laura banging at the door, pleading he lets them out, while poison gas slowly fills the room, all the while watching Harry bang Aya.
Lmao guys why are you guys playing this game when you want shit like this, clearly this game was made for "NTR" not some police shit or getting caught revenge satisfaction. This game was made for people to play who like NTR category. clearly HC didn't create this for shit like that.

clearly HC doesn't care about some revenge story, he wouldn't have made a game like this if he were Into that, clearly the story he has made from this first ending made that clear, the sex scenes he has made. clearly this game is for NTR people who enjoys NTR.

not some people who discusses about "oh this is what NTR is really like" why y'all read much into it. It's a porn game guys. not some love story from a book that has some deep ass hidden meanings.
 
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SpyderArachnid

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Lmao guys why are you guys playing this game when you want shit like this, clearly this game was made for "NTR" not some police shit or getting caught revenge satisfaction. This game was made for people to play who like NTR category. clearly HC didn't create this for shit like that.

clearly HC doesn't care about some revenge story, he wouldn't have made a game like this if he were Into that, clearly the story he has made from this first ending made that clear, the sex scenes he has made. clearly this game is for NTR people who enjoys NTR.

not some people who discusses about "oh this is what NTR is really like" why y'all read much into it. It's a porn game guys. not some love story from a book that has some deep ass hidden meanings.
Relax friend, nothing wrong with having some fun. Doesn't always have to be serious. Clearly these endings are not really what we expect, they are just having fun coming up with endings. We all know this is an NTR game and what it all entails. The game will have several different endings, even a "hero" ending.

But we're not delusional. It's an NTR game through and through. Just let people have fun making up crazy endings. ;)
 

Zamer

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Pretty solid Ntr ending so far. A few things

1. Aya as a character as been confusing these few updates. She clearly states that shes in love woth the mc. Is she really? She's had mutiple chances to spill out the beans on lucas and laura..yet hasnt at all. Is she dumb? How dumb? Or is this kept on hold for later arcs in which she does spill the beans and leads to her x harry?
2. Laura change in attitude was a surpsied and really aolid job.
3. Pregant video was solid.
4. Felt like harry and even aya were to stupid. Aya Ive explained above, for harry he was to oblivious. He should have picked up somestuff earlier. Maybe its for other arcs
5. Probably wont happen, but I would not mind a small.revenge arc for Harry somehow. Feels like a lost and nothing left harry arc, with revenge in his mind that could lead to Aya x harry would be solid as peope would yet the ntr story and a revenge story.
5. Additional character, luara's mom and that coworker...wonder if we'll see them in action...Laura mom's already blushes when she see harry...maybe theres something there..
 

SpyderArachnid

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do you guys think the next update would focus on aya this time?
Ohhh it's going to be a long while till we get Aya's path lol. I'm pretty sure HangoverCat is working out all Laura's paths first, since Aya's path requires some back tracking to add content to previous choices. Which in turn is going to have some major changes to the story as a whole when those choices become available.
 
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