VN Ren'Py A Shot in the Dark [Ch.4] [ViM Studios]

[Deleted member 3788572]

We obviously do not know the back story yet. Considering the story has just begun, I am not sure what the complaint is.

The complaint is MC still excessively questions himself about everything (the 'highlight' was him asking whether he should use a scale of 1-10 or 5-20 ahead of Kevon's game ), while all sorts of women (including unrealistic tropes like the policewoman or the prof) have been lining up for him right from the start. It's frustrating to read.

 

[Nurikabe]

The complaint is MC still excessively questions himself about everything (the 'highlight' was him asking whether he should use a scale of 1-10 or 5-20 ahead of Kevon's game ), while all sorts of women (including unrealistic tropes like the policewoman or the prof) have been lining up for him right from the start. It's frustrating to read.

Your complaint is that he questions himself despite having pussy thrown at him? That his own self-esteem plays no role?
You'd rather have an MC that is cocky and arrogant?

Why do you think the MC is the way he is? What would make a man question himself?

 

[PrivilegedCholo]

I really hope dev takes into consideration that some of us primitive monkes have -69 iq and can only think with their dicks ( like me)
So it is impossible for us to choose a girl
The best solution for us is a harem route

I second this, Ape together strong

 

[Defenestrator.for.traitor]

I really hope dev takes into consideration that some of us primitive monkes have -69 iq and can only think with their dicks ( like me)
So it is impossible for us to choose a girl
The best solution for us is a harem route

Yeah it will be easier for Elly to kill them all if they are together, even better if the harem house have a dungeon like basement.

 

[Cabin]

Yeah it will be easier for Elly to kill them all if they are together, even better if the harem house have a dungeon like basement.

Kinky gore

 

[tre321qw]

can you save you know who in chapter 2

 

[Darkenning]

can you save you know who in chapter 2

Not yet.

 

[1800 Mr. Tourture]

I really hope dev takes into consideration that some of us primitive monkes have -69 iq and can only think with their dicks ( like me)
So it is impossible for us to choose a girl
The best solution for us is a harem route

personally i just want the twins. one has the abused girl i can save her vibe, andthe other has the i just want to hug her forever and make her smile vibe. but if i had to be a pervert an ending where elly has to sexually service her mom would be hot af (just not very emotionally satisfying)

 

[typhoniansoul0]

hello everyone,
is there a way that Natalie gets kidnapped but doesn't get harmed physically? I only got this scene with Sophie when I got to the party with Elly and Elly than stayed during the conversation with the twins.

When Sophie invites you in Zeta's house, dont make out with her

 

[JohnPaxson]

When Sophie invites you in Zeta's house, dont make out with her

can you maybe send me a save if you got the scene?

 

[Xarin]

Why you gotta do the MC like that?

 

[Hungover00]

Not sure if this has been discussed to death, but just wanted to give props on there being a safe-word mechanic built into the game. Never seen that before, very cool. (Can't recall if that is there for the Prof, but it was for the PO) Also liked how there was trust building as part of the dom relationships, seems like it's rare to show that in AVNs, though media and reality often heavily differ. Still, very cool to see.

Also, informed consent was well done, if memory serves. Always an option to change course.

*edit addition: Especially in school setting games. Consent is cool.

 

[Canto Forte]

A Shot in the Dark - Book 1 will include Chapters 1-6.
The current version is Chapter 3 (V0.25).

Spoiler: Devoted to the babes ... always a gaming incentive...

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[Nocode]

Great game!

One of the best stories i find in adult VNs.

hope everything keep going foward for dvlp cause im hungry for more.

 

[Call of Booty]

I expected much more for almost 5 stars. Girls are meh,animations bad to regular,dialogues extremely boring and long,MC complete dork and every girl/woman are throwing themselves on him,yeah right. Kevin should be much better MC. Why lately most of the MCs are teenagers,small,virgins,depressed,insecure,ugly,pussies, like we want to be like them??

 

[Abhai]

I expected much more for almost 5 stars. Girls are meh,animations bad to regular,dialogues extremely boring and long,MC complete dork and every girl/woman are throwing themselves on him,yeah right. Kevin should be much better MC. Why lately most of the MCs are teenagers,small,virgins,depressed,insecure,ugly,pussies, like we want to be like them??

you are staying in front of the mirror and talking to yourself, arent ya?

 

[Pmaria]

This game could be top tier. but the branches are so messed up

Hopefully the dev will do something to fix this an move on in a more friendly player way... This is one of the two games I always edit the script's before playing an update {the other one is Affexon (removing the alerts etc)} to avoid missing 90% or so of the content...This one is harder...

Let's hope for some improvement in the future

 

[Abhai]

This game could be top tier. but the branches are so messed up

Hopefully the dev will do something to fix this an move on in a more friendly player way... This is one of the two games I always edit the script's before playing an update {the other one is Affexon (removing the alerts etc)} to avoid missing 90% or so of the content...This one is harder...

Let's hope for some improvement in the future

yeah, they should make it full KN and ofc harem...as the most " friendly player way"?

wondering are there people coming into KN and harem games threads saying "this could be top tier, only if there would be actual paths and branches and not mc getting everything at the silver plate" or "it would be nice to have choices regarding chicks we wanna" or whatever?
yeah, Im sure there are those...and there is probably a plenty of them providing their "constructive" criticism, similarly as you are doing elsewhere and everywhere.

now, im gonna try and ignore this thread and all those "top tier comments" spawning around unprovoked..lets hope for some improvement in the future regarding all those "posters".

 

[Pmaria]

yeah, they should make it full KN and ofc harem...as the most " friendly player way"?

wondering are there people coming into KN and harem games threads saying "this could be top tier, only if there would be actual paths and branches and not mc getting everything at the silver plate" or "it would be nice to have choices regarding chicks we wanna" or whatever?
yeah, Im sure there are those...and there is probably a plenty of them providing their "constructive" criticism, similarly as you are doing elsewhere and everywhere.

now, im gonna try and ignore this thread and all those "top tier comments" spawning around unprovoked..lets hope for some improvement in the future regarding all those "posters".

Lad, this is not a regular choice followed game. Nobody talks about a VN, a sandbox etc. This is a game that every choice removes a LI from the equation. To see all the scenes you need to play the game 4 to 6 times

The choice between Ashley, in the start of the game, and the ... brunette is a not needed choise. You can actually talk to two people when going to school... This game has taken the select something to another level. And since there are several love interests that worth the case, the only way to play the game, is to reload and repeat ... repeat and then you know what? repeat

These guys try to make some money from these games and they do the same mistakes over and over, and over again.. Some devs need to be players before they become devs

 

[Pmaria]

Lad, this is not a regular choice followed game. Nobody talks about a VN, a sandbox etc. This is a game that every choice removes a LI from the equation. To see all the scenes you need to play the game 4 to 6 times

The choice between Ashley, in the start of the game, and the ... brunette is a not needed choise. You can actually talk to two people when going to school... This game has taken the select something to another level. And since there are several love interests that worth the case, the only way to play the game, is to reload and repeat ... repeat and then you know what? repeat

These guys try to make some money from these games and they do the same mistakes over and over, and over again.. Some devs need to be players before they become devs

Take for example "Intertwined", there are two main paths between Layla, Elena and Alexis, Erynn. Another on hard select between Niki and Cara but no path removes talking and say good morning to characters