- Thread starter Afflyction
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- Aug 8, 2017
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Yes, it is a very good looking game and is interesting in the story but it is now very confusing at the least.
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I'm very glad i stumbled upon this gem.The story and some of the scenes are a bit confusing at times but overall i really like this one. Definitely goes on the short list and i'm excited to see what the future updates will bring :eazyHype:
BTW there is a problem with sister's croch area in the last couple of scenes.
BTW there is a problem with sister's croch area in the last couple of scenes.
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i think what it is that when he goes back in the with the wine that's part of his dream, they actually drank the wine and got drunk/buzzed.
- May 7, 2017
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Correct. She told the MC that she remembers them not falling asleep so, they stayed up and drank and thats all she remembers.
- Aug 8, 2017
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If so that is just one thing that still confuse us but who knows for sure what is going on.
1 part show GF showing up and screaming and they have there clothes on and another time showing GF showing and there naked.
To many wrong pic's or something that is making the game very confusing to play.
I still like the story so far but something needs to be done to get the pic's showing what is actually going on.
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No, I didn't update it till after I released only because, the bug with the gallery took all my time on the last day and I didn't want to delay it any longer. The mega links should have everything fixed aside from the gallery. I have the gallery fixed so so in the next update everything will be back to normal. The in game menu got a makeover as well.
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@Afflyction
Great game by the way.:heartcoveredeyes:
:heartcoveredeyes:Sister:heartcoveredeyes: to me now is better looking than Lisa in BB.
Great game by the way.:heartcoveredeyes:
:heartcoveredeyes:Sister:heartcoveredeyes: to me now is better looking than Lisa in BB.
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They went to bed clothed. The dream started when Kourtney showed up the first time. Then when they actually wake up, they wake up naked. Maybe I should of altered the images a little bit to make it more clear that it was a dream.
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Then there is something missing because it went from Kourtney and the 2 fully clothed to Kourtney to both naked without any knowledge of how it happen.
1 scene clothed the next scene naked with nothing in-between.
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That's my fault then. I assumed it was implied that stuff just happens in dreams and I haven't got into why they woke up naked. All that is known is that booze was involved and the result was waking up naked. It will be explained. I guess the biggest issue here is leaving things open to interpretation. These are not complete chapters nor are they chapters at all. Not everything will be explained as soon as it happens. I have been getting a lot of feedback about this, which is good in my opinion. Most of this is planned and is intentional. I like stories that mess with your head and make you think a little bit. Thats what I am trying to do here. Keyword is trying. Maybe adding a little more inner monologue will help with this.
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It's set up on my patreon for per project update but I have been trying to release to my patrons once a month, and if it's not already here, I release here 3 weeks after patreon release.
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Really like the game, but I do agree the scene was... a little off. We need at least some sort of transition or something to indicate something. Because last we saw them they were sleeping clothed, then the dream, then naked. I just don't know how alcohol could have been involved in that scenario. There is leaving stuff open to interpretation, and there is not giving enough information to be able to make a viable interpretation. If it's supposed to be a mystery, then the mystery angle should be telegraphed more. As it stands it just feels like something is abruptly missing, or that the dream caused them to get naked. A similar situation exists with the extra scene, it just comes out of nowhere and then vanishes as if it never happened.
But great work so far. The sis is AMAZING, and while I'm not usually a fan of teasing as such, I'm all in with her.
As long as we're expressing our feelings, it was clear enough for me. When they first woke up, I think it was intentional that the reader should be very confused whether this was just another dream or reality. The explanation came soon enough after that, I felt, it was resolved. In fact, I felt the author effectively captured that groggy, hazy feeling when one first wakes suddenly, especially after a night of drinking.
On that note, waking up with no memory of getting naked is definitely not just "tipsy", so don't dismiss it too lightly. Moreover, I think there may be more that we (and they) will find out later about what happened that night.
Just my 2 cents, since y'all are doing it. I'm a joiner.
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