It would be an idea. While not this type of game, I felt like there are so many games (vn style) happening in modern bars (Ana's corruption being the most well know I think) that an older look felt nice. I was actually thinking she would work in a medieval themed bar. Maybe Aiden has a connection there and wants to make it work. Maybe it's a whole amusement park for adults and in the end Sophia has to make all of these businesses work. Maybe once a business is starting to make a profit she can find a replacement and she has to start making the next one profitable.I've got no real problem with remaking games either way. And yeah, obviously I missed the other post. My thought would have been to give it a different feel by simply using a different bar asset (seeing as awam is a modern day story to begin with, not that she can't go work at a medieval theme bar). Right now the screenshots looked a bit too identical to the existing game only not as far along. My suggestion would be do something to make it look a bit more unique.
I don't know if you have played Karyn's prison but that's kind of how that game is (If you haven't played it and can deal with the graphics and rpgm aspect of it, it's an awesome game for corruption fans). There's a prison and there are many parts that have to work. She can work as a stripper at some point, prison receptionist. Every mini-game is different while following the same theme of corruption.
I started with the tavern one because it feels the easiest to do from a design point of view. Since I already played corruptio town as well, I know what I like and what I would change about it.
The best part is, since I am only focusing on the game parts at the moment (some of this is not so readily available in Renpy) the other aspects can be changed easily.