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could someone remind me what the next event is,
sorry, but i hit my head and lost my memory
sorry, but i hit my head and lost my memory
for some: nothingcould someone remind me what the next event is,
sorry, but i hit my head and lost my memory
It will take more than 2 years just to reach PD 15.So you probably have to skip 3 years if you are waiting for PD16.I have to admit i am very excited for update .170.
Why?
Because after .170 there is nothing that interests me until pd 16. Which means i dont have to check this thread for the next 2 years.
Don't give him ideas.Or we will end with 10 animations from 10 different angles.it moves twice in the same day!!! still no new preview hey i am happy with Mrs myers opening the door to Sophie.
Hot AF!Don't give him ideas.Or we will end with 10 animations from 10 different angles.
The layer of the story is not the problem here, but you can have too many layers and the same themes that can cause redundancy in the story. For Example, do you need two blackmail paths in the story? Do you need multiple "Sex-Ed" themes in the story? Do you need numerous GF routes for Dylan in the story? Plus, if we look at how many characters in the story play a part in her corruption and the scenes with no corruption? Some play a role, and some don't. In the dental scene, for example, which was a conversation brought up multiple times, what was the point of that scene? Did it contribute to any corruption or good wife points? No. Another one is the mailman; besides the flash scene, which was more for Nathalie's path, what role does he play? And finally, The Museum Guys, It's my understanding that their final act is Saturday in the evening. Still, Sophia and Patricia only met them one time two weeks ago in the game, they provided one or two corruption points by trading phone numbers, but that was it. What is the point of this upcoming scene if their scenes end after this evening event? IMO, a hand full of characters like 10-15 could have worked out. And right now, we have no clue if anyone on this list will make a comeback.All this talk of too many characters, or a story that's too slow, just highlights the no-win scenario for fans of this game. What makes AWAM special (aside from the great art) is that it's a layered story. Too many games only focus in on the main/core characters, and that gets old really quickly. On paper, I think there's good sense behind how the story is paced because, at its best, it provides for a logical progression of Sophia's corruption. I think all of us can agree that we like that her corruption has been a gradual process. And part of that process is that she interacts with a wide cast of characters who all have their role to play in her corruption. It isn't just the same two characters, scene after scene, day after day, update after update. There's a real attempt to make her progress feel organic.
The real problem, the original sin, is that this game is simply too ambitious for one person. Even with diligent planning (which we know he doesn't do), this game cannot be completed in a reasonable time frame. Both the story, and its development, are too slow. Each update takes too long and advances the plot too little to really feel satisfying. But, if he were to cut content, and focus exclusively on the main characters, the game would lose a good deal of what makes it attractive. Sure, in the short-term I think a lot of people would be happy, and he may even make more money, but I think that approach would undermine what makes the game special.
People are tired of the slow burn, the constant delays to development, and the prospect of another decade before there's actual sex. Outside of building a mid-size team to develop the game alongside him, the only solution that would result in faster progress would be to cut content and characters. And while I do agree that cutting some characters/content could improve the game, I don't think it would be too long before you would make cuts that would detract from the game.
The long and short of it is that fans of AWAM are in a no-win situation because the game was not properly scaled to what one person can create in a reasonable timeframe.
Amber has more natural body than Sophia and she seems genuine.
I'm not much more than a beta tester now.I think Bibifoc helps with coding for the most part.
Bennett has more or less been removed so there is only one Blackmail path in the game.The layer of the story is not the problem here, but you can have too many layers and the same themes that can cause redundancy in the story. For Example, do you need two blackmail paths in the story? Do you need multiple "Sex-Ed" themes in the story? Do you need numerous GF routes for Dylan in the story? Plus, if we look at how many characters in the story play a part in her corruption and the scenes with no corruption? Some play a role, and some don't. In the dental scene, for example, which was a conversation brought up multiple times, what was the point of that scene? Did it contribute to any corruption or good wife points? Another one is the mailman; besides the flash scene, which was more for Nathalie's path, what role does he play? No. And finally, The Museum Guys, It's my understanding that their final act is Saturday in the evening. Still, Sophia and Patricia only met them one time two weeks ago in the game, they provided one or two corruption points by trading phone numbers, but that was it. What is the point of this upcoming scene if their scenes end after this evening event? IMO, a hand full of characters like 10-15 could have worked out. And right now, we have no clue if anyone on this list will make a comeback.
I agree with the ambitious part. He should have started small and worked towards a larger setting with support staff, but he chose to be a one-person show; for the most part, I think he has 2 or 3 people helping him, but I don't know how significant their roles are in the novel's production. I think Bibifoc helps with coding for the most part. He could have expanded his AWAM universe as he built up support for it.
I think AWAM was scaled at one point. If you remember his post about four years ago on F95, he said he only needed 3 or 4 years to tell the story. When he saw his positive reactions, L&P chose to expand it, but the expansion probably didn't play out as he thought.
While I clearly think there are too many routes and some he probably has closed already (subway guys) I do not think the Janitor comes back (maybe with AIDEN). Milkman was never a route IMO. I think it was a good thing to wait for so longThe layer of the story is not the problem here, but you can have too many layers and the same themes that can cause redundancy in the story. For Example, do you need two blackmail paths in the story? Do you need multiple "Sex-Ed" themes in the story? Do you need numerous GF routes for Dylan in the story? Plus, if we look at how many characters in the story play a part in her corruption and the scenes with no corruption? Some play a role, and some don't. In the dental scene, for example, which was a conversation brought up multiple times, what was the point of that scene? Did it contribute to any corruption or good wife points? No. Another one is the mailman; besides the flash scene, which was more for Nathalie's path, what role does he play? And finally, The Museum Guys, It's my understanding that their final act is Saturday in the evening. Still, Sophia and Patricia only met them one time two weeks ago in the game, they provided one or two corruption points by trading phone numbers, but that was it. What is the point of this upcoming scene if their scenes end after this evening event? IMO, a hand full of characters like 10-15 could have worked out. And right now, we have no clue if anyone on this list will make a comeback.
I agree with the ambitious part. He should have started small and worked towards a larger setting with support staff, but he chose to be a one-person show; for the most part, I think he has 2 or 3 people helping him, but I don't know how significant their roles are in the novel's production. I think Bibifoc helps with coding for the most part. He could have expanded his AWAM universe as he built up support for it.
I think AWAM was scaled at one point. If you remember his post about four years ago on F95, he said he only needed 3 or 4 years to tell the story. When he saw his positive reactions, L&P chose to expand it, but the expansion probably didn't play out as he thought.
You should pass the trial and become an alpha tester.I'm not much more than a beta tester now.
What build up with the mailman? There has only been talking about how their day is going, except in the Nat scene. There hasn't been any as of yet. It has been mostly a casual conversation about how are you doing. If there was going to be a build, that should have happened in part one.Bennett has more or less been removed so there is only one Blackmail path in the game.
Sex ed theme is repeated but it is a on and off theme in different storylines except for the 2nd job. Dylan's last Jogging scene has nothing to do with sex ed. Ellie didn't use thes ex ed theme until the last scene. Even in PD 16 it doesn't look like she will be using it. So just because a theme appears once again in another route, you intend to say that such characters and route should be entirely removed. There are no writers in the world who write big stories and Don't call back on themes they have already used. Since from a writer's pov it adds a better connection and makes the character projecting such theme more consistent. Sophia instinctively takes on a teacher role and is caring.
And some of the scenes like the dentist visit, grocery shopping, bank, Tickling Dylan and such scenes, they didn't corrupt her but the fact that you see this second largest thread, people dying to see Sophia have sex. Hating and abusing the dev, impossibly long development periods, no salvation in sight for another decade, and still people are here and still want to see it all, is because the character is compelling. Sophia is compelling. All these scenes make that happen. Otherwise you definitely have milf characters in other games, going from one corruption scene to another. Don't see them have such popularity and craze though.
Dylan routes are unnecessary. I see no need for them. Dylan wants to have a gf. Just let him have Amber. Christine, Marie and Emma, is too much. I don't really think anybody at all cares for Dylan's success with multiple women.
The mailman i will disagree. What do you suggest, that he is introduced out if nowhere and has a full fledged sexual scene with Sophia ? Ofcourse there needs to be some buildup. He is hardly even talking renders or development time. Even till now he hardly has 20 renders in his name. L&P has said that he will have an interesting role later in the game.
He should form a team is something we a agree on. And even after that he must be willing to delegate authority as well. If he still keeps interfering with all the work, it would lead to no benefit.
With the Museum guys, They only met once, which was two weeks ago in-game, and even though their second meeting is in the next PD, that is their last meeting, as that is supposed to close their route. and if we use your example that it could in with a BJ, that would make me question how she went from meeting them two weeks ago to going down on them on their final scene together. That just doesn't make sense from the story pov as there was really no build-up, but she can still do it as it would be a slut reaction.While I clearly think there are too many routes and some he probably has closed already (subway guys) I do not think the Janitor comes back (maybe with AIDEN). Milkman was never a route IMO. I think it was a good thing to wait for so long
lets take the Museum guys for example. There was no point in bringing them back early because nothing would have happen with them. Now with Part two we all these events actually get more and more explicit. I think the Lesson update and SAM Update afterwards willo show this especially.
Now with the musuem guys we actually could expect something like a Blowjob (not sex because they are too early for that) but at least something.
Part 2 has certainly escalated the avialable routes so far on a high level and it will not get less explicit IMO but rather more and more explicit (So I can still dream for my Gangbang with Team AIDEN XD
What build up with the mailman?What build up with the mailman? There has only been talking about how their day is going, except in the Nat scene. There hasn't been any as of yet. It has been mostly a casual conversation about how are you doing. If there was going to be a build, that should have happened in part one.
And some of the scenes like the dentist visit, grocery shopping, bank, Tickling Dylan and such scenes, they didn't corrupt her but the fact that you see this second largest thread, people dying to see Sophia have sex.
I'm not following your point here... What does the second largest thread have to do with if there was any corruption or not in the dentist scene or the other examples you followed up with??? In the final save, Dylan's tickle somehow plays a role so that scene is a relevant and possible outcome in a future scene. The dentist, not at all.
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still people are here and still want to see it all, is because the character is compelling. Sophia is compelling. All these scenes make that happen.
Please explain how the dentist and grocery scene makes her want to have sex with other men. People are compelled to see her eventually dominated by Aiden, be with Dylan, Sam, Ellie, and Patricia, or a combination of all, and they are compelled on the relevant path that leads her there. Sophia's teeth cleaning doesn't feed into that at all, nor does the grocery shopping, as they are filler scenes or irrelevant scenes. Unless you're trying to tell me that after Sophia gives a BJ to someone, we get this scene.
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That's sarcasm btw.
Bennett has more or less been removed so there is only one Blackmail path in the game.
Sex ed theme is repeated but it is a on and off theme in different storylines except for the 2nd job. Dylan's last Jogging scene has nothing to do with sex ed. Ellie didn't use thes ex ed theme until the last scene. Even in PD 16 it doesn't look like she will be using it. So just because a theme appears once again in another route, you intend to say that such characters and route should be entirely removed. There are no writers in the world who write big stories and Don't call back on themes they have already used. Since from a writer's pov it adds a better connection and makes the character projecting such theme more consistent. Sophia instinctively takes on a teacher role and is caring.
Bennett hasn't been removed. His story was shortened to end sooner than expected. Bennett's story was supposed to serve as the single male blackmail, as Aiden's blackmail was served to be more of a gang bang blackmail. Dylan's story of "Sex-Ed" isn't over yet it played out in the jogging scene. The jogging scene is the cracking of ice to morph it into something else towards the end of that scene.
It depends. Maybe they get her drunk and it is always easier to actually do this stuff with strangers with no strings attached then the sons best friend or even thge son itself. So just because they will never meet it is easier to happen in real life if its just sex and not more.With the Museum guys, They only met once, which was two weeks ago in-game, and even though their second meeting is in the next PD, that is their last meeting, as that is supposed to close their route. and if we use your example that it could in with a BJ, that would make me question how she went from meeting them two weeks ago to going down on them on their final scene together. That just doesn't make sense from the story pov as there was really no build-up, but she can still do it as it would be a slut reaction.
It wouldn't surprise me if alcohol is introduced in that scene. I could see it happen. But getting drunk with two people they met two weeks ago..... yeah.It depends. Maybe they get her drunk and it is always easier to actually do this stuff with strangers with no strings attached then the sons best friend or even thge son itself. So just because they will never meet it is easier to happen in real life if its just sex and not more.
Isnt Patricia also with them? Remember the scene in the club? He was already close to her pussy that time. She will be the iniciator if something will happenIt wouldn't surprise me if alcohol is introduced in that scene. I could see it happen. But getting drunk with two people they met two weeks ago..... yeah.
Yes, it was Sophia and Patricia. But they are not the ones from the club. These are two different people. Jason and Haru are the museum guys. The club members were Logan, Tyler, and Kevin, when Sophia, Patricia, and Ellie met them at the spa.Isnt Patricia also with them? Remember the scene in the club? He was already close to her pussy that time. She will be the iniciator if something will happen