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SEX-ED AND A MOODY CHILD?... That story will not fly well, but I'm not saying it can't be done, either.
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I understand the point you are making ,but an 'incest' sexual event doesn't necessarily has to be based on love nor in a pre-love relationship dynamic ; I personally think it will evolve based on lust and determined by Sophia's level of corruption and how far is she willing to go with Dylan on a sexual level. At least that's how I think it may go because I don't think is going to be the same kind of love/sex relationship as with Sam, but who knows.
Is the path to the goal more interesting than the goal itself?I understand the point you are making ,but an 'incest' sexual event doesn't necessarily has to be based on love nor in a pre-love relationship dynamic ; I personally think it will evolve based on lust and determined by Sophia's level of corruption and how far is she willing to go with Dylan on a sexual level. At least that's how I think it may go because I don't think is going to be the same kind of love/sex relationship as with Sam, but who knows.
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The way things are going I don't understand why Dylan has to catch up with Sophia. Dylan is a bit more naïve than Sam, he just wants to get physical experience and he can get that with any other woman. With Sam it's not just that he wants more experience, there's feelings involved and it's perfect with Sophia. And Sophia is enjoying being a teenager again but I think now that she's indulging she wants to have other sexual acts with other people I'm thinking of Zac or maybe with Liam and the other couple.
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That's not the point I'm making. I am talking about that there is no build-up to the event for PD 13 evening with Sophia/Dylan. It doesn't matter if it's lust or love, you still have to follow a sequence for readers to understand. None of the scenes flow into the next scene with Sophia/Dylan's SEX-ED. If you play Sophia/Ellie, Sophia/Sam, or Sophia/Aiden, their scenes flow into the incoming scene because their scenes are written in such a way they are chronologically synced and the reader can follow.I understand the point you are making ,but an 'incest' sexual event doesn't necessarily has to be based on love nor in a pre-love relationship dynamic ; I personally think it will evolve based on lust and determined by Sophia's level of corruption and how far is she willing to go with Dylan on a sexual level. At least that's how I think it may go because I don't think is going to be the same kind of love/sex relationship as with Sam, but who knows.
Sophia/Dylan's scene doesn't contain that same outline. There is no flow. Their scene almost compares to the second side job, where Sophia shows up on day one at the Myers for introduction, and the next day it is "SEX-ED" X-rated style. That's a switch flip, and I think that is what is probably going to happen with Sophia and Dylan during the evening event, and that is how Sophia/Dylan ends up on par or ahead of Sophia/Sam's event. Readers like myself are going to be like huh? that made no sense.
Didn't they agree on a massage after a run in the park? Is this not a reason for an evening event?
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If there is no flow to the Dylan route, how come it's as popular as it is?
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The obvious answer would be that M/S is very popular, and M/D is popular too. But M/D has a story.
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This should answer your question. That was from PD 12, which Nathalie handled during her active event. This is for PD 13 which there is no run event, but if there is a massage for the evening event, it doesn't fix the no-build-up for the story.
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Well , I don't see anything as sexual than what Sam and Sophia have developed , going on with Dylan either ; not on day 13 though , but maybe till pd 15 since Dylan is her son and it's not as easy for something sexual to develop between them as with someone who is not related to her like Sam or any other character who is not a relative to her. I think that in pd 13 they will go as far as Sophia allowing Dylan to touch her breasts during a massage and maybe more but only as 'sexual education'.
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I'm confused about what you're saying here. Have you been reading the story from PD 1 - AWAM Part 1?
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So what you're saying that is M/S fans don't care about whether or not the story flows properly?
You understood me correctly. But from the massage to the event is one step. Sophia: "Don't worry, honey. In fact, I get tired of something every day, haha." How can this be interpreted otherwise than "I am always at your service"? Doesn't that create a story? Is there any ambiguity here? Do they need to coordinate the massage scenario? What else would you suggest, for example?
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That's an open-end comment, plus that happens after the story at the end of the PD 12 event. How does that comment help develop a build-up of the story from PD 1-12 when it has already passed? You can only use that comment going forward, PD 13 evening, but how does a massage comment help them jump ahead or stay on par with Sam's Pace in PD 13?
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L&P would have to take another poll to determine that question, but he would have to wait until this PD ends.