VN Ren'Py A Wife and Mother [v0.215f] [Lust & Passion]

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neronx

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May 18, 2021
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He follows the arrangements of sex from low to high and you will never wait for an unexpected scene
It's clear right now that you can't wait for a scene of sex in the next phase of Sophia's corruption.
If he does not recognize FootJob as a more corrupt stage than HandJob, at best you can witness BlowJob.
For this reason, he has to lower the quality of the story and distance himself from realism.

For example, in the next event with children or old men, he should show a sex scene that is more intense than the previous updates. It should not necessarily be like this and it hurts the story.

From the beginning, he should not have encouraged Sofia to have sex with everyone in the community during a period of 30 days and at all times, early in the morning, before noon, in the afternoon, and at night.

His story is really locked.


I think you can free the game from this confusion with these two tasks and increase the quality and speed of publication:

1. With a rewrite in the story text, change the events to span different days and weeks instead of being locked at continuous times throughout the day.
The story of the game will be more logical.

2. Remove less attractive characters and clichéd events found in other games (such as Truth Dare) and saturate them in different day-to-day routines.

The following characters are not really attractive in my opinion:
Claire and Marie
Christine and Melanie and elena
Don Marello and Larry Marello

I think it is better that they become normal and everyday characters and not show a special event with them.
Because Dylan and Sophia are not supposed to have sex with everyone in their community.
 
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hzjujk

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Jafo said:
Going through the update I noticed how LP expands his "updates" a little without doing anything but typing. He makes a render. And let it stand when you scroll on. Than typing another sentence still with the same render. Some renders stand still for 5 to 6 sentences.

That even more easy money that way.
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Yes, of course, as if this wasn't normal procedure for a VN, other developers do the same thing.
Furthermore, L&P has been attacked for exactly this in the past and it has been repeatedly said that he takes too many pointless images during a dialogue. It was said to be a waste of time, it was said to be milking L&P.
This time there are no such pictures, which makes the event less smooth for me, but then a few participants come back and insinuate that because L&P is doing it the same way as other developers this time, he is milking it.
Make up your mind, people!
 
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Cgt35

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Dec 13, 2018
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This guy has profession for how to extend content like real human life long. We will be old for having erection when we play this game jesus :KEK: (n)
 
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Salgijash

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Feb 2, 2023
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This update had so much potential, and ended up disappointing same like it was for Hillary Clinton when she ran for President's office. Played through exercise and shower, only to go back to old save, skip this and then save.
 
NightShadeX

NightShadeX

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May 11, 2017
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this game aged like Hawaiian Pineapple Pizza. you eat few slides and put it in the fridge for 2 months.

When you are dead tired from work, dealing with a day full of Karens - Come back to it, & throw the pizza in the microwave, eat it & taste okay.

It neither fresh nor trash.
 
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Penultimateanon

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NightShadeX said:
this game aged like Hawaiian Pineapple Pizza. you eat few slides and put it in the fridge for 2 months.

When you are dead tired from work, dealing with a day full of Karens - Come back to it, & throw the pizza in the microwave, eat it & taste okay.

It neither fresh nor trash.
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You have to add hot sauce to Hawaiian pizza.
 
Blockout

Blockout

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neronx said:
From the beginning, he should not have encouraged Sofia to have sex with everyone in the community during a period of 30 days and at all times, early in the morning, before noon, in the afternoon, and at night.
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Oh yes this so much.
It's such a weird constraint.
First of all it's obviously ridiculous to have such a development during a single month.
From prudish wife to full blown slut in 30 days.

But it also robs the story of various points of the year where fun stuff could happen.
Vacation, perhaps the car has to go into the shop, Thanksgiving, Christmas... there's just so much.

Instead she goes full skank in a month.
And I mean even worse that it's not even a full month. The game has 15 playable days so far while being at day 21.
6 days being MIA.

What is she going to do? Get fucked constantly in the last 9 days?
Hasn't even given a BJ yet and is still uptight.
Is it going to be stereotypical Hentai where she goes insane upon having a dick in her completely losing her mind and will?


What a weird constraint to give.
He could've just laid the story out over a year with time skips.
Time skips are perfectly logical. No one expected to see the entire foot march of the Fellowship to the Misty Mountains.
Ain't nobody got time for that. Hence it was skipped.
 
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crabboid

crabboid

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Sep 7, 2019
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I just wanted to pop in real quick, and tell you guys that it’s been fun. With 205, I feel like I’m free for a while, and I’m probably going to take a break for about a year. I’m going back to farting around with AI and making scenes in Virt-a-Mate.

See you later!
 
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Galaktur

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Salgijash said:
This update had so much potential, and ended up disappointing same like it was for Hillary Clinton when she ran for President's office. Played through exercise and shower, only to go back to old save, skip this and then save.
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Were you hoping Hillary would suck Trump's dick?
 
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Gukl

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Aug 20, 2017
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sucks to wait for next update. I skipped this one. only 2x renders that were good and the animations are worse than the AI stuff people post
 
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